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Hey Johnathan! I really liked this story, man! It came across as a dream to me at first, and I wondered where you were going to take, well, 'you'. I understand now, I think. It wasn't so much the fear of personal harm as it was taking that crazy 'walk'! The story was quick-the story was successful! YAY! Thanks a lot, you! ps: I think I would have stayed on the motorbike! No?

I'm so happy for you Sam! I've read your poems and stories for the past year (plus). You must know how happy I am for you!! Congratulations! Dave.

I just realized what you said at the end about issues. Tomorrow. ok? Thanks, Nephy

Oh Nephy, again! hugs I fell in (protective mode) love with this story as soon as I started reading it. Dark enough to fit the Nephy glove-Light enough to bring a tear to a jaded eye! What else can I say? Except perhaps, thank you? don't miss that other review.

You really know how to push my buttons, don't you? I just now came off of Cia's anth. and discovered this! These kind of stories mean SO much to me! I can read them and digest the entire content at one sitting. Perhaps it's just me...but it seems that you guys pack a LOT more emotion in a shorter time frame when doing SS. idk. Loved this, Nephy!! Absolutely LOVED it! Little Mikey will never have to go through what Gabe did! Jake and Gabe will see to that!! Hugs, you!!

This is one of the sweetest short stories ever. Very quickly, as we are introduced to Wes and Doug, I knew that it was going to be one for me. I was right. It doesn't take long to fall in love with a story when the characters exude love as these two did. Thanks, Cia.

Wes wasn't the only one with tears in his eyes at the end. What a loving and caring story this is, Cia. Thank you! and dammit I'm STILL doing it. Hugs

That's all I was trying to say!

Why not? Simply cut the comments short and hope that the problems will go away? The problem won't go away. There IS a problem. GA needs to deal with it-not me. I wanted to help when I started this thread. Oh well. @ Krista: You are making it look as if I started a useless thread. Please look at and actually read what I posted-please? Something here is fixable....there is no need to make a person so angry about another person that they actually feel it necessary to be rude in the extreme! Aren't we supposed to have a somewhat 'common' interest/bond? Aren't we supposed to be civil persons? Again, I am just asking. Rudeness is totally unacceptable to me. I am so disappointed with GA at the moment. But there is SO MUCH here to keep me interested! So many stories written by so many authors. neg me :wacko:

Before someone "negs" someone, they should at least 'think' about what they are doing! What are the specific things that you don't like about the post that you are now about to 'neg'? Did the post degrade you specifically? If the answer is "no", think about it. I'm guessing that we are dealing with a subject having not too much to do with each of us-but rather having to do with how each of us 'look' at each other. So, how can we control the hidden assasins? You! Your face is red!

Just promise to play quietly.....and nice!

phana sneaks in, hoping nephy won't notice that he's late... Congrat...aw crap! we've already done this! damn! You always knew that I knew, huh? Ok. Go hurt someone sweet and loving and so MUCH not deserving of it.

You are SO bad, Nephy. "Still, I'm glad you liked my boys." They are your boys until you present them to us, and then they are our boys. You can dress/undress them. You can treat them with the utmost love possible, or you can beat them into the earth until there is hardly any or no breath of life left in them. They are STILL ours! That is why we hurrah when they do good things and why we cry when they hurt. We feel that hurt, and you know that. I wish (of course I do) that I could take just ONE of your creations for a tiny vacation-somewhere only we know about. Hugs

Sorry Johnathan- My eyes aren't good enough to read the non-contrasting script/background. But I'm positive it would be a great read! Hugs!

My God! Johnathan! I have somehow missed this in the weeks since I have come back, well, pretty much full time-meh... I absolutely loved this! I can feel my childhood memories tingling me as I write this and somewhere in between the tingling and the pain from growing older I feel-heh-I feel the pain that all of us feel at times. So great this is, you! Hang in there, buddy! It's only going to get better-and I can't wait! Hugs, Johnathan

OK NOW! My review 'over there' says it all! K? I think I'm going to stop posting reviews at the chapter ends and just go straight to the forums, when there ARE forums. As soon as I am through reading a chapter/story, I have a mind full of comments. After posting them in 'chapter review', I feel as if I am plagiarizing myself when I when post them 'here'. Just me, I'm sure. Your descriptions of the outfits, Nephy, are fabulous! YAY! And what I wouldn't give to take a walk on the wild side with EITHER of these two hunks! Thanks, Nephy! (kiss-kiss)

I'm going to 'crib' Cia's review. It says everything I wanted to say, but without the dumb look on my face. All of the way through this story I was fascinated by your descriptions of the outfits that Raven and Alex were wearing. It was SO Nephy! I saw them walking/strutting along the runway, and every tiny detail was covered! I could see the curves of their bodies under the fabric that you dressed them in! I could SEE their expressions as they performed-Alex with his 'stare straight ahead' focus, and then Raven. What can I say? He's a crowd pleaser! I just didn't connect with the dressing room scene. Maybe it was time restraints or other factors at your end-idk. But hey! You gave me a fabulous idea for a new wardrobe! Thanks, Nephy! btw-this is not a spanking. it's more of a....

And a magical time was had by all...or... This story makes me wonder how many people just like Alex I have missed over time-if any, of course. Thanks, Andy. Great story.

A speechless lawyer-really? snick

This was quite a switch-around! What I liked most was that you made it work, and I detect a bit of a sense of humor peeking about! Thank you.

What an interesting layout. The time-jumps worked perfectly! Good story and a great job. Thank you.

I thought pretty much all along that this was going to happen at some time or other. I was holding my breath while they were smoking the weed because it seemed they were about to 'get-it-on' right then. I LOVED the little time jumps (that eliminated a lot of needless 'fill'). Great story! Thanks.

Goodness! You guys have been so busy all over the doggone place! I have read Efan's poem, Nephy. What comes to my mind (and did a while ago when I read it) is that Ef is indeed a chip off the old block! (that's for him, not you). I drew an analogy from the first two lines: "As bright as day"-of course that would HAVE to be Efan. And then line two: "As dark as night". I wonder... There is an element of maturity here that seems rather unusual for a person of this age. However! Since this person has been exposed to the intellect of such as you-meh-leaves me wondering. Give the 'lil' dude a hug. He earned it with "Death and Life Dark and Light". Hugs!

"Ariel gets his moment"! YAY!!!!! But I have to wait for the next book? creep