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I'm having trouble letting Ash go, Nephy. Don't misunderstand me, please, because I DO understand that he is 'gone'. I am just having a hard time letting him go. This is a very eye/heart-opening chapter, Nephy I'll say more in the forum. Thanks so much, Neph!

Just when I was considering that Nephy was drying up------ , I read the rest of the story. This one looks to be a keeper, you! Tell me more, please? I love the idea of a partial vamp/were/otherworldly. Wait! Let me settle down. Already there is a 'connection' with these two. You! I am on edge here! Thanks for the new story Nephy! hugs Although I already see imprints of pain and other horror, , I know the price we have to pay for your attention to our whining!

I don't know who you are. I don't know (yet) what the story is all about. But don't be afraid of those hiding in the background, waiting and wanting to find out. Welcome.

I had the most wonderful suprise moments ago, Nephy! I was able to 'see' Ariel in the gallery, and then notice that this chapter was up. I don't know how you're going to end this, but I just want Ariel to find-never mind-old stuff again. I wish River and Silver the best.

OMG! I had to jump back to the end of 32 to fill in the blanks almost as soon as I started 33. Jesus, Nephy! My first impression was that the knife was embedded in Ariel, and THAT just wouldn't do-nosiree bob! I've got more to say but it'll be in the story thread. grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!

This is a wonderful story, John! You kept my head spinning trying to guess which of the three candidates held the honors. At first I wanted it to be Sean, but maybe that was pity on my part. idk Actually, I WANTED it to be Craig, but you didn't place him at the party: and he DID have to study. I'm going to add this one to my *sweet* list, ok? Thanks, John. A great job!

I owe you a pos. (ran out-sorry ). (but I made a note!). Jwolf: There is so damn much humor in this story that I just kept on laughing! Thanks! I'm headed over to the thread now.

So far this is probably the closest any author in this 'series' has come to identifying their story with the theme. WOW! I'll explain on your thread, ok? Thank you.

You really know how to push my buttons, don't you? I just now came off of Cia's anth. and discovered this! These kind of stories mean SO much to me! I can read them and digest the entire content at one sitting. Perhaps it's just me...but it seems that you guys pack a LOT more emotion in a shorter time frame when doing SS. idk. Loved this, Nephy!! Absolutely LOVED it! Little Mikey will never have to go through what Gabe did! Jake and Gabe will see to that!! Hugs, you!!

Wes wasn't the only one with tears in his eyes at the end. What a loving and caring story this is, Cia. Thank you! and dammit I'm STILL doing it. Hugs

That's all I was trying to say!

Why not? Simply cut the comments short and hope that the problems will go away? The problem won't go away. There IS a problem. GA needs to deal with it-not me. I wanted to help when I started this thread. Oh well. @ Krista: You are making it look as if I started a useless thread. Please look at and actually read what I posted-please? Something here is fixable....there is no need to make a person so angry about another person that they actually feel it necessary to be rude in the extreme! Aren't we supposed to have a somewhat 'common' interest/bond? Aren't we supposed to be civil persons? Again, I am just asking. Rudeness is totally unacceptable to me. I am so disappointed with GA at the moment. But there is SO MUCH here to keep me interested! So many stories written by so many authors. neg me :wacko:

Before someone "negs" someone, they should at least 'think' about what they are doing! What are the specific things that you don't like about the post that you are now about to 'neg'? Did the post degrade you specifically? If the answer is "no", think about it. I'm guessing that we are dealing with a subject having not too much to do with each of us-but rather having to do with how each of us 'look' at each other. So, how can we control the hidden assasins? You! Your face is red!

Sorry Johnathan- My eyes aren't good enough to read the non-contrasting script/background. But I'm positive it would be a great read! Hugs!

My God! Johnathan! I have somehow missed this in the weeks since I have come back, well, pretty much full time-meh... I absolutely loved this! I can feel my childhood memories tingling me as I write this and somewhere in between the tingling and the pain from growing older I feel-heh-I feel the pain that all of us feel at times. So great this is, you! Hang in there, buddy! It's only going to get better-and I can't wait! Hugs, Johnathan

I'm going to 'crib' Cia's review. It says everything I wanted to say, but without the dumb look on my face. All of the way through this story I was fascinated by your descriptions of the outfits that Raven and Alex were wearing. It was SO Nephy! I saw them walking/strutting along the runway, and every tiny detail was covered! I could see the curves of their bodies under the fabric that you dressed them in! I could SEE their expressions as they performed-Alex with his 'stare straight ahead' focus, and then Raven. What can I say? He's a crowd pleaser! I just didn't connect with the dressing room scene. Maybe it was time restraints or other factors at your end-idk. But hey! You gave me a fabulous idea for a new wardrobe! Thanks, Nephy! btw-this is not a spanking. it's more of a....

And a magical time was had by all...or... This story makes me wonder how many people just like Alex I have missed over time-if any, of course. Thanks, Andy. Great story.

I thought pretty much all along that this was going to happen at some time or other. I was holding my breath while they were smoking the weed because it seemed they were about to 'get-it-on' right then. I LOVED the little time jumps (that eliminated a lot of needless 'fill'). Great story! Thanks.

Oh my God, Nephy!! What have you done? Tsk! You just couldn't play nice could you? There is NO WAY that you have done serious harm to.........

Oh my God!! There is another talented person here!! Listen to me Nephy! For over a year I have been reading everything that you wrote-be it in stories or posts! I have been waiting for this moment. I never in the world felt that any child of yours could not have at least the same (or more) talent that you have displayed here on this site! I'm not trying to suggest that Efan could run off with your accomplishments and bury them--at least not yet... So Efan cool!! Huggs to both of you!

As I understood it, this 'person' is actually a statue going through all four seasons in the outdoors. Also, it is a quite nice read. Thanks.

What Paya said!! Happy Birthday, Bob!!! You are SO

Thank you to W L and Graeme, Tragic reading from both of you. Why is it that unless I missed it, nowhere in either article did I see/hear any remorse on the part of either parent for THEIR actions? My own opinion is that THEY are just as (if not more) responsible for what happened than the jerk psycho. I wouldn't argue in their favor if some authority somewhere decided to bring charges against them for the BEATINGS that Kirk endured at the hands of his horribly misguided sire and dam. It wouldn't surprise me if this is still practiced globally, today.

Hi Chris! Now that you've met the 'kids', welcome to GA! hehe