What a wonderful and eye-opening chapter this is, Nephy. River is in the midst of a cram course on feelings, it seems, and he keeps fumbling his words and mixing up his head right and left. Poor thing is SO unsure of himself at this point.
You have written Silver into a position where he is capable of taking complete control at some point in the near future, and that is not necessarily an impossible situation, considering how far he has come in the last few chapters.
It's going fantastic at the moment (if one discounts the 'death-drums' in the background.
Thanks, Nephy!