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Toulon has the feel of a trap, though the Admiral and his staff seem to think this is a great opportunity. Perhaps it feels wrong because I know it doesn't end the war as the Command Staff thought/hoped. Robey??? Good lord Mark, you think the Royal nave was comprised of 6 people the way George is constantly coming in... er meeting people he knew or heard of. But at least he is still having fun - seems he has a dude in every port.
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Opps quite the doofus, I posted the review for 5 in chapter 6 - oh well, no review for six then which is no big deal it wasn't very good any way Just kidding. TBH, this one is better than the first, in that George is older and more confident and seems to be making his way just fine and moving up the rungs.
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An interesting start to live on the Flagship. Seems George has a way of landing on his tail wherever he goes. It a wonder his bum is still attached with all the action he sees. At least Wilcox is going to get his own. Not sure how in hell the Wilcox have any friends left. Every last one of them seems destine to be drawn and quartered at some point. You'd think the Admiralty would exterminate the lot of them - oh but then who would be the antagonist for poor Georgie if that happened
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Chapter 15: After the Storm
Andrew Q Gordon commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 15: After the Storm
Peter's natural tendencies are to be giving toward those he cares about, especially Jason in this instance. That is the dichotomy that comes out in the later chapters that make his behavior so baffling. Glad to hear you liked this enough to read it a second time -
Nice to see George hasn't lost touch with his own roots. Though he wasn't a Middie that long, he at least had the foresight to feel the plight of Chilton. Sadly even this must end, and the pair will be parted with no firm notion of when they will see each other again - if at all.
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Seems like there are a lot of Wilcox in the Royal Navy. You'd think they'd be a tad smarter than to mess with the Earl of Bridgemont's son. Who is Lord Chatham going to side with, them or the Earl? Not much of a contest. But at least George got to meet up again with Travers - funny how Travers keeps transporting him around and around. Poor Caroline, married a day then vooom - hubby is off to the true love of his life. so sad
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Good lord, George is only just recovered and he gets it on with his old friend who is now a MP - which seems odd given how young they both are - so at 17 Arthur is in Parliament? Bully for him. Now Caroline is either a right cheap tart or a VERY dangerous figure in court circles. She managed to get her hooks into George and they popped each other's cherry just to get him to Marry her. But then oh snap, her plan only helped an even more astute politician - The Earl of Bridgemont. I hear wedding bells.
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That was a heck of a way to start the first chapter Ballvin clearly reminded George of himself when he was a Mid. War is hell, sad but real. Good thing Travers wasn't there, he and the Captain would be fighting over who got to nurse him back to health. Guess we'll see how George deals with being injured.
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Okay so being stupid - or at least inept - I left the review for the prologue in the 'story review.' I actually think that is a flaw in the system because I know i hit chapter review originally and it defaulted to the story review. I noticed that happening in other stories too. So this was quite fun to read - I have to admit I didn't gloss over much of the sex toward the end. Sorry but there is only so many times I can be interested in reading about how Travers f**ked Granger or how many times he blew 'the great man' But the rest of the book all 12 pages of it was fun [okay so i t was a bit more than 12 but that's how it felt at time ] On to the next. I have to wonder if it is Metro friendly or not - If I had to hazard a guess, I'd go with not. LOL
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Since the capture of the Intrepid was as much Travers work as any, that should help his standing - monetarily at least. It also has to go a long way toward helping him prove his worth. Too bad they can't know about his love for George, because if they did no one would question his loyalties. He'd never risk being parted from that 'sweet ass' forever. Nice to see he can return to the HMS Randy as a real Lt and not acting anymore
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Captured two ships and gets a 'ride' home from Travers. Sounds like a nice little bit of luck. At least they didn't have to wait long before getting back together. I still feel like something back is going to happen to Travers, Life just seems too perfect for George at the moment. With the nation at war, well things happen
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Well back to unacceptable reading for the train I see Good thing I was at home for that. Seem George found someone to 'fill' in nicely for Travers. And what's up with trying to 'break' in the new Midshipman?? Ah well, let's see if war changes things for the randy crew of the HMS Buggery.
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Wow I think that might be the first chapter with more drama than sex - were you ill when you wrote that? And how come I got to that chapter at home and not on the Metro - that was definitely the most train friendly chapter in a while. George sure was at the perfect confluence of connections, timing and blowing - er - knowing the the right people to sleep - er - earn his way to a promotion. Sad about the Travers and Granger being split up - not a lot of chance for them to do the mattress mambo anytime soon is there?
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For two someone's being careful, that is not exactly being careful I love how he is not blowing 'the great man' One wonders where that will lead. Funny for all that buggery is outlawed, this ship might be better call the HMS Buggery given what all is going on.
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Okay, couple points. So this isn't exactly the best story to read on the Metro - gotta keep myself turned toward the wall at times. Are all the chapters thinly viewed sexcapades? But then again, I didn't stop reading did I? So what happened to George suppressing his urges when he first got to the ship??? That lasted what? A day? LOL One wonders what the Earl, and his other sons would think of Little Georgie and the Handsome Lt. doing it night and day?
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Love? Wow talk about a hanging offense - but good for them, they seem a good match. Why do I feel that business with Travers's father won't be too much of a problem for the randy son of the Earl of Bridgemont? I assume it was deliberate but there is a lot of Sir Evelyn in George. They both seem to care for the men. His handling of Winkler was sweet. The poor kid has no one but George did right by him and the other. One sailor at a time he is building his loyalty.
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Things certainly are moving along with the two - but I have to say this is the randiest ship I ever heard of Hmm must be the author. I liked the battle scene - you did a nice job of taking us into the depths of it without getting bogged down in too much detail.
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Uff, that was like three chapters in one. First he has to be a hard ass - no pun, which is something he'll need to get better at if he's to succeed. The interaction with Travers and George was nicely done, it's the cat and mouse of their relationship that gives a real feel. That and the jealousy - nice twist
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I suppose that is one way to get what you want - climb on top and not take no for an answer. For a group that is desperate to NOT be found out, everyone seems to know everyone's business. Not sure how they could hang one without decimating the entire crew. LOL. So why does it feel that now that George has what he most wants, it won't last or not in the way he wants? Guess I'll find out with time.
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Well that was a chapter for sure. First Georgie gets his revenge on Iggy but then when the chance to return 'the favor' arrives he doesn't. At least he shows a bit more character. I suspect that had they more time, Iggy would have made George his permanent play thing. George to the rescue was unexpected in that he was/is perhaps the youngest of the men there and the only one to try and help. That will have to earn him a few props with the men, captain and his father.
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Young Mr. Granger certainly does seem to get around. But at least Bell is his own age. Good luck with Lt. Travers. He seems more apt to tease Mr. Granger than do anything physical. But George seems to have done an about face with Lord Calverton. Now lets see what he has in mind for the repentant Lord Calverton. Knowing you, I suspect it will be something memorable.
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Kyle kinda screwed up by not telling Cooper, but Cooper isn't exactly an angel either. Perhaps they should both sit down and clear the air, not more lies, or half truths. Cooper being upset about the deception is understandable, but it is also a bit hypocritical. He's able to justify stuff, but he isn't okay when Kyle does the same. Not sure that Kyle's not going into the Sigma's is his best choice. Betrayal doesn't become better just because you give up something important to prove your love. But what do I know right? Maybe Cooper will figure out that he doesn't have clean hands either and give Kyle a second chance. Ah well the tangle web the wolf doth weave has only gotten more complex.
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Well I suppose Markists* was taken so all the good ones are gone. *I know it is spelled Marxist btw
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Mark, You do realize as a lawyer [prosecutors are still lawyers - I think] I always have something to say - usually it is somewhat snarky but I try to keep that side of me under control - so Since I just started reading Bridgemont, you are sorta stuck we me for a while - you may want to pull your stories to avoid me even. So Dom Luka has the domaholics, what are your rabid rowdy readers called? [Please don't say Arbourists ] And are you 'Team Mark' in the GA world and do we have to choose sides? How come this place doesn't have it's own rules of conduct. If you need help, you know I am very good at making rules Andy
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Can I say double finally without making you mad???? Having sorted out the boys and their feelings, how the heck are they going to get Kynan away from the possessive and all to randy Prince of Darkness?? Maybe Kynan should have told him a bit more about where he was and what to expect instead of having a tickle fest there at the end. Thanks for my weekly fix, now I can go back to whatever else I was doing On a slightly more serious note, and maybe I go to the goodie laden forum you are tempting us with - but reading Kynan's emotions I was like 'dag, this is really good.' That really was well written - just figured I give you your props for that. Andy
