I want to thank you for writing this story. I read the original story about a year after it was published and loved it. My father was Air Force and we lived in Germany for a while so some of the places were familiar. I didn't think about the book for decades and by that time I couldn't remember the title, only that he needed to get to Denmark. Thanks to you I now have a copy.
Wonderful chapter. It fits seamlessly into the Pern saga. I am excited about the upcoming thread battle. I also need to unearth my copies of Pern in order catch up
Great job.
I am so glad to see this addition to the Psionic world. love the fact that you brought back a couple of the earlier characters. I am definitely looking forward to more of the story.
I was curious about the comment on pregnancy, so I looked and found this https://www2.palomar.edu/anthro/animal/echidna_reproduction.htm.
I think this is Antonia version of a walkabout.
I'm glad to see that they are (hopefully) going to make it and I am curious to see if they find anymore of Talon's stashes. If I remember correctly he placed several in the earlier chapters.
Thanks for updating.
I agree with Terry, did not see it coming. It's going to be interesting to see how the double is going to carry on the rest of the evening. But more importantly WHY did they need John out of the way.
How is this guy tracking them? I agree with Butcher56- he needs to be caught on the training grounds which would put him under the military justice system. (If the Australian system is like the US one)
I have enjoyed the story so far. I hope that Kirk and Leon are going to be okay. I have a feeling that they are going to need the extra funds that Anton is providing.
Man- Mitchell can't seem to get a break from a**holes and now it looks like the new commander is also miffed. I'm glad that WO Owen's is there. Good chapter.
Interesting start to the story. I need to point out an error. The Colossus is supposed to land in Philly but when the general is talking to the Champions he says Houston.
It is a Internet archive site. They gather information on all kinds of sites and you can retrieve pages from them. If you type in a url address, it will show you 'captures' of the address. I found several pages listed for: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/quokka.
Pick one and it will take you to a calendar showing dates the page was accessed. Click on the date and the page will come up. It may not have everything,but at least you can retrieve some of your data.