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one thing i love is not only the story but the art direction in the film if you notice the color scheme of everthing match with the title. -
Its says "In soviet Russia sign reads you!" lol jk i don't truthfilly know what it says but i could'nt resist
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Loved this chapter as well the ony part that confused me was when he was trying to figure out where he was from to me that would indicate that he was speaking with a diffrent dialect or accent than when he was thinking. and it just seem odd because i thought people normaly think in the same dialect as they speak. like a german person wouldent nessesarly think oh wow i speak with a german accent.(i dunno if that makes any sense or not?) but i loved it none the less. just added more to the suspense and im wanting to absolutely know more about whats happening.
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I love the Mystery feel this has right from the beginning you raise a ton of questions, questions which i am now wanting to have answered lol. great opening scene to really hook the readers.
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frpm what i understand she isent a actual character the tech demo was just to give people a feel of the tone and the world but not the actual story. now she may come into play at some point but shes not the main character.
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ive only ever drank once and learnd......i hate the taste of Alcohol of any kind. seriously it all just taste bitter and nasty to me. soo......none?
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Would you have sex with someone who was HIV positive?
LemonFresh replied to Menzoberranzen's topic in The Lounge
ok The logical part of me says absolutly no way,however the hopeless romantic part of me says true love can find its ways over any hurtles. and as much as i hate to admit it i tend to listen to the hopless romantic in me more than i should. -
Actully was prbabley when i finally got the courage to come out to my mom. i remeber being so scared to the point of pysicaly shaking and il never forget what she said. "Oh thank god i thought you were going to tell me you needed Condoms." god i miss her so much.
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Hello and welcome to the Madness. its kinda like Hotel California you can check out any time you like,but you can never leave. muwahahahah lol jk. but seriously welcome.
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ok i find the article true in some parts,funny in other parts, in offensive in in a few parts. only cause this article makes it seem like everone between the age 16-18 has no idea or concept of anything that happend before them. believe it or not we're not as ignorant to the past as many people seem to think. and we're not absolutly addicted to any and all technology like this article would have you believe. other than that it is a intresting article non the less.
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yay with the completion of the first chapter of my new story i feel this song may fit perfectly.
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I had a Stuffed owl i slept with. to this day owls are still my favorite animal.
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ok so where all in agreement wether it be to save a life, to exprees contempt,or just for the fun of it we would all indeed pee on Zack Effron.
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And just how would you know? *checks for hidden spy cams*
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I sleep nude cuddling a Giant pink panda bear lol jk (or am i?)
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EA brushes off parents group's complaints about same sex romance o
LemonFresh replied to Cyhort's topic in The Lounge
I dont think he even cares what the topic of thread is. He was just waiting and bidding his time untill the perfect oppertunity to make that particular rant came along. lol. -
Will get Ghost Rider to piss fire on him, and burn ther little rat bastard! *Rubs hands toget menecingly*
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Chapter 2 I opened my eyes to see Seth standing outside of the tent, staring at me, annoyed that I was still in bed. “Get up already,” Corbin said, “If I have to tell you one more time, your gonna have cleaning duty for the next year,” he said, rolling his eyes before taking off. I grabbed my shirt and pulled it on allowing a few minutes for my eyes to adjust before finally crawling my way out into the now restless crowds. I headed over to the breakfast line to see what, if any
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Seth stood there looking directly into my eyes. I was unable to make out his expression; it looked to be a mixture of joy, confusion and fear. I felt my heart as a large lump in my throat, pounding as Seth stood there not speaking. His eyes changed and now looked as if they were searching mine for something. But I felt myself unable to meet his gaze for fear of what I would see, so I looked down at my feet for a few seconds before finally looking back at his face... but still avoiding his eyes.
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Chapter 8 The next few moments seemed to stand still. It was like the world in its entirety was in a state of suspended animation. The mixture of dust and smoke still hung heavy in the air, reducing visibility down to zero. Breathing would have been just as hard to do at that moment, but I don’t think anyone was able to take a deep enough breath to really notice it. Instead, we all stood there staring on in total panic. A million thoughts crashed and rushed through my mind, seemingly all a
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Chapter 7 The roads had all but completely smoothed out and Seth was somewhat able to hold himself together by this point. He sat up, still holding his head between his legs and taking deep breaths. I scooted myself up behind him and began rubbing his back, trying to offer some comfort. We seemed to be stopping more and more often as traffic picked up the closer to the tower we got. It almost got to the point where it seemed like we spent more time waiting for traffic than we
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Chapter 5 I ran back to the entrance of the tunnel, only to see the main part of the station empty. I looked around, but saw only an empty train sitting there. I headed to Andrea's medical tent, but it was as empty as the platform. I looked around a bit at her equipment and charts of our medical information she had been keeping on us. It looked as though she had dropped everything she was working on, which I knew from experience was very unlike her. As long as I've known her, she has neve
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Chapter 4 I woke up the next morning to see Seth still sleeping next to me. Not wanting to get up quite yet, I laid there and watched him sleep, his chest still rising and falling slowly as he breathed steadily. He continued to sleep for a while longer before finally coming to life, I watched as he stretched his arm out and pulled his shirt on. He turned to look at me and saw I was already awake. “What are you still doing here? Aren't you suppose to go see Magashi today?” he
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Chapter 3 I stood up from the small crater in the center of the now destroyed laboratory to finally get a good view of the damage I had caused only moments ago. I saw the table that once held all the equipment, now turned over. The equipment itself had been thrown against the wall. It lay there now, smashed into pieces. There were several cracks in the wall as well as the ceiling and bits of plaster now littered the floor. The area resembled a crime scene rather than a lab. “Oh m
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Derailed Chapter 1 The Family I woke up to the sound of a train pulling into the station. I heard the old metal brakes scream and screech as it slowly came to a stop. It amazed me that the brakes even still worked. I mean they had to be at least 75 years old, there were one or two occasions where they didn't hold and the entire power grid to the subway system had to be shut down until the train quit moving. The doors finally opened and I saw the refugees slowly begin to pile out into t
