JimCarter

It is getting so close to the battle of St. Vincent, I can smell it in the air and feel it in my bones. Wait that just mean I need a shower. Thanks for another great chapter Mark.

Fantastic news. I think the Granger series is by far the best stories Mark has written and I like all his stories/

I need to add my 2 cents on St. V. I am Jonesing for a new chapter too. I don't enjoy the CAP nearly as much as Granger and his activities. So I personally hate it that you are enjoying writing about the CAP folks so much, but I'll get over it, I'm sure.

So did they ever get the shirts and uniforms? Are we sure Ramsey didn't have some help in taking his last breath? If I were Granger I think I would send those copies to my father and ask what my brother and his wife were up to after finding these copies after searching the prisoner's things. Another fine chapter. Thanks Mark.

Another great chapter Mark. I am uneasy with the way the Don's were content to let Granger and company just come up and fight. Seems to me there is probably more ships out there to spring the trap after our heroes have taken the bait. Maybe the comodore will get to see the value of seamanship at Granger's hand yet. Thanks for another chapter Mark.

Another great chapter Mark. I am uneasy with the way the Don's were content to let Granger and company just come up and fight. Seems to me there is probably more ships out there to spring the trap after our heroes have taken the bait. Maybe the comodore will get to see the value of seamanship at Granger's hand yet. Thanks for another chapter Mark.

Thanks Mark.

If no one else will ask, I guess I must. When can we expect the next chapter?

Neilson's being along on this trip in command fo the effort seems show a little less trust in Grainger than I would expect. It makes me wonder if Mark is setting the groundwork for some serious problems for Sir George. Oh well, as usual, I'm looking forward to the next installment this story. Jim

Hey CJ, I really like the turn of this chapter, but that worries me about it is that now Trev will be devistated when B&G's minions kill Shane. Damn dude!!!!! Jim

If you are going to think, why not think big?I look forward to your email.

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate the input.I will be sending that email as soon as I am finised here. Thanks my friend.

Thanks for the review. Sorry you find it un-believiable, but if you look at the Fortune 500 that is way down the list in net worth.I must be a worse writer than I thought. Jim is the only one telling the story. Yes I use dialog to tell the story, so is it that I don't use enough speaker tags that says who is speaking. I will try to do better.I didn't mean to imply the corporation didn't pay taxes, of course, they do. The owners don't have to pay taxes on anything but what they take out of the corporation in either dividends or selling stock. Since they held corporation in blind trusts and relied on the officers to run the company. I really appreciate the review and will try to add more speaker tags if that will help.

FLORIDA The alarm went off and we got ready for our run. Our new running track has spoiled us. We have trouble running anywhere else. The track is so easy on our feet and joints. It is habit forming. Our track measures just over a mile for each circuit. We ran ten and went in to shower and get Adam ready for his first day of college. We sucked each other and kiss tenderly. When Adam drove off, I watched the security team fall in behind him. I wanted to go with them. That first

THE MEETING I was afraid that Corbin and Dillon would be bored being around all these people they didn’t know, but everyone wanted to talk to the cute young men. Everyone wanted to give them advice about learning to ski. We decided it was time to head back to the house and get ready for dinner. With three showers all going at once and all of them with two horny boys meant that the hot water turned chilly quickly. We got clean and our hair washed and then took our fun to the bed. I’m sure

I read for the love.... Eric is a little prick until the very end, but Bridget sucks rotten eggs.

A few LITTLE unpleasant personality traits?????? Bridget puts the "B" in bitch. ;-)

I am glad that Gonzo at least knows that George is scum and so that might help keep Trev and the love birds in the long run. I am so afraid that the love birds will say something in the guesthouse to help Bridget and George. I keep hoping that Sanchatz (sp... I know I should look it up) ends up sending Bridget George's head just before he kills her. In case you haven't figured it out. I hate that woman. Jim

Since she introduced Bridget into the story, I think she might be involved in this more than we think. She has a captain's ticket, maybe she was a drug mule too. I just can't help but believe she is up to her nipples in this thing. Jim

I thought maybe the same ting, but if it was witness re-location, they would make sure the family would be on the hook for the murder. That would cause additional investigations and the family wanting to clear their name. My guess that she was implicated in the criminal activities and had to do some things she didn't really want to do, but she was in too deep to turn Arnold in. If she and Dirk were getting a divorce anyway, they might have got one without telling anyone where. When the time came she just faked her own death and sailed away to down under. She might have thought that the only way to keep Trevor safe was to let him think she was dead until the statue of limitions ran out. I bet she has already found the "Arnold lists and documentation" and can release it when the time she can be imprisoned runs out. I'm willing to bet that everyone that reads the story has a guess what happened. Jim

Whouldn't it be a CJ kind of turn of events if the boat he rents happens to be another Lagoon 55 and then Trev finds documentation aboard that it was previously named Aries.

8. Lake House We took our usual loving shower and yes that included sucking each other with the shower set to soft rain shower. After we got out and dried off we decided to play poker. With us playing poker naked we couldn’t keep our hands and mouths off each other. We wasted our money tonight; neither of us could really pay any attention to the game. After about an hour, we both had lost twice. We lost at poker but won at sucking. I woke up the next morning and looked at the b

As they say a goat will eat anything including the packaging, so you saying you eat the stuff isn't much of an endorcement. I love the few Aussies I know, but that is one thing I think they enjoy because must people can't stand it. As I often kid them, how can they anything when their toilets drain counterclockjwise.

I think if you are happy with the chapter length and breaks that we readers will be happy too. I do like knowing when a chapter is coming, but that isn't as important as you being comfortable with where the chapter breaks. Since you don't use cliffhangers (like anyone believes that) that shouldn't have much influence.

CJ, even when you don't give us a cliffhanger, you come along with these psudo spoilers and make us think we missed the little suttle cliffhanger you gave us. I'm a hopeless romantic and I hope that Shane and Trev become much more than friends. The two blond queers against the world. Jim