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Changed! Well spotted!
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😂 You can imagine anyone you wish in the roles, I have no actors in mind. But we are visual creatures so if I had to choose anyone for that particular part, it'd be Ben Whishaw, in later years (not the James Bond era one).
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CHAPTER 4 - Kai I felt myself again when I looked in the mirror these days. Running my hand over the sides and back, the velvety feel of the millimeter-cut felt familiar and clean. On top it was longer; a suggestion of the hairdresser. Why the heck not. If I was retiring from service, I might as well get back into civilian looks. He hadn’t been wrong; I thought it made me look younger. “Mail call.” I heard the flop of letters on the bed and headed into the room, nodding at the ord
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LOL! Oh, thank you for that, you had me laughing out loud, LOLOLOL! Edit: I left a little gift for you.
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Yep, just read this again, and I don't like this chapter or behavior. It's wrong. I'll rewrite it, that's a promise. I Just don't know when.
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Let's not take this any further, shall we? I'll have a riot on my hands soon. 😂
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It flew through my mind as I typed it and deliberately reversed it. 😂
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I drive my editor insane with semicolons and punctuation. They almost have to rewrite the entire thing at times. 😉
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Actually, I'm gonna go with a much simpler solution: Downstairs/Upstairs. 😂
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Oh, you're good! I love it, I'm gonna use that, with your permission?
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Annoying, grrrr....and weird. You're on the GROUND, you walk into a house. That, to me, is the GROUND floor. Go up a flight of stairs, bam; 1st floor. 😂 Fine, I'll change the pics. Can't have people confused.
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That is indeed the second floor, I'll add that to the floorplan. Good catch! And yes, the ground floor will be seen in another chapter. Ah, movies Vs. books. An impossible task, because in books, you can take a few pages to describe a single thing or thought. It doesn't transfer well to TV or movies. That'd be a dull watch, taking five minutes to look at a plant. What a waste of film that'd be. 🤣 ** Edit** First floor. **Edit** Second floor again.
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Wish granted. 🤣😂🤣 Gawd, I am weak. It's all your fault, y'know. Readers, I mean. Your reactions are so good, up to now. Makes me want to read more of those. 😉
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CHAPTER 3 - Adam After sending off the letter last week, I spent some time really looking at the rooms upstairs, trying to determine which one had been Kai’s, and settled on my own room because I remembered there had been one piece of furniture there when I looked around the place with the realtor: a desk placed in front of the windows (it’d been removed when I moved in) and as I recalled, it had been an old desk, possibly antique. It made me think of him, writing letters. I could easily im
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I'm tempted to grant that wish. Maybe. 😉
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Thank you for sharing that! I didn't know it was gender-neutral, you learn something every day. 🙏😁
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This is kind of a hoot, seeing you respond to comments from 12 years ago. 😂 God, I hate dislike this story...there's so much wrong with it. I know I said somewhere I wouldn't rewrite it, but gawd, it needs a rewrite. Bad. Then again, so does Confounded Part 1.
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Yeah, they're both a bit 'out of place', right? I like them. Well, I always have to like my characters or I can't write about them in a certain way. I don't always have to like them, it could be a baddy, and I can live vicariously through him/her with relish. 😅 Like Adam, he also has empathy. He's a pretty emotional guy. Thank you! 🙏 I had that same image in my mind, hence the little reference to it (cannonfire, horses). I always wonder what'd be like, to live then. 🙏 Ehm...lemme count...😉 Absolutely, you're in there! I thought of you when I wrote Doc. You'll meet him soon. Think of this mention, when you read that. 😈
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Do note the age of the story. It didn't age well! 😉
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Wow, the reaction to this story is something I didn't see coming. To think I thought it a silly premise, dreamed up while I am writing Confounded 3 (this story formed about two weeks ago), finding some quirks for Tom that didn't seem to fit him...wow. Thank you so much, all! 🙏
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Alright, it's up! I hope you enjoy it, and that the response to it is similar. 🙏
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CHAPTER 2 - Kai I stared at the letter. Or rather, its wax seal. And above it, the return address. Impossible…it was the address of my parental home but it couldn’t be from Dad; he died months ago, shortly after I arrived in San Antonio at the Brooke Army Medical Center. Could it be a very late one from him? No. Dad’s handwriting had always been scribbling at best. He wrote letters because he refused to learn computers. And I liked receiving letters - my family knew that. Kellan wrote
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Alright, alright, alright...it'll be up before I go to bed. But after that one, it'll be a week! Grrr...
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Haha!!! I appreciate all of you above! The response has been very nice, to this story! Thank you so much! 😘 Your questions will be answered in the next chapter. All you need is patience, though I am contemplating on releasing the next one sooner, so readers can at least an inkling of what they're signing on for. I might do that...on the other hand, the slow pace works for Adam. 😉
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Ha! He's not a writier of the Bridgerton style but I am. I've gobbled up that series on release-day. 😄 I'm looking for a weekly release schedule. So that would be...July 3rd Oh, he is. I'm doing POV's on this. The next one will be Kai. 😁
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