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Actually, re-reading this made me think of a way to address what happened to these characters elsewhere...😈

Ahuh....and the premise of the story didn't give anything away, huh? 😉

As said elsewhere, you're reading it too literally. It doesn't mean they can't go out and work, or do whatever they wanna do. It's meant to convey there will be someone at home at the end of the day, even when his dad is traveling for work. Kit knows what the deal between his parents is and why he can't come to live with his dad. It's no strange thought, considering he's living it.

He can. Relax. Bad writer, bad explaining. 😂

Fixed! Thank you.🙏

You're reading it a little too literally. What is meant here is that Mitch had a deal with Kit's mother, that there would always be someone home. Not literally in the house, just present/on hand. If Mitch was traveling, he'd not even be in the same state. 😉 I could've done a better job of explaining this, back in...ehr, when was this written again?

Stop bamboozling me; I know what you're doing! 😂

I'm weak. You guys know this and play on it. You're a bunch of manipulative assholes wonderful readers!

Nope. Not gonna happen. I know where your mind goes here and that's a full stop no-no. 😂

CHAPTER 14 - Kai We ate in silence at first - nothing awkward or stilted - just cutlery ticking on plates, birds chirping in the trees, water gently lapping near the repaired jetty. I looked out there. Following my gaze, Adam spoke. “Do you want to go look? After lunch, I mean?” I’d like that and nodded. “Yes. And the rest of the house too. It’s been so long…” He smiled. “Then we’ll go look. I’ll do the dishes, you can rest a little bit…” I sent him a thankful smile in

The Pussy Parlor.

Yeah, I need to sit down and rewrite those chapters.

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. 🙏

Read on dear reader, read on!

Might want to try Confounded III, also. This story popped into my head while writing that, and I have to stay with this for a while, before I return. It's not on hold, but you may like that atmosphere as well. Might want to quickly read the two other parts prior, though. They're inferior, but the details in there will explain the backstory.

🙏 🙏 Oooh, now why didn't I think of that. Must be nice to say things to influence the writer. I will have to try this with George Martin. Go away now. 😉 🙏 🤗 Oh, he has no idea. He'll file for divorce soon. Wait...woops, getting ahead here. My pleasure! Yeah, I liked that. I wrote it, looked up and had this 'yep, don't touch it again' vibe. 😂 Aww, thank you. You may stay. 😁 If the middle of the week is Wednesday in two weeks, you're right on the money, Bucko. Yeah, what? I don't get it... I remember chuckling when I wrote 'you, little boy? Okay, you'll get a lick'. 😂 I second this. Go do eeeeeeeeet! Awww, ty. He is the best singer to get porn on your mind instantly, to get the juices going, literally, get randy as all get out....nope, can't think of anything. Soz.

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CHAPTER 13 - Adam 11:15am on Friday morning. I was nervous. Kai would have left Walter Reed over an hour ago and soon I’d meet the man that had occupied my thoughts for months while we conversed via letters and this past week spoke on the phone multiple times a day. It’d become moments I looked forward to - the waking call and the bedding call - as I referred to them in my mind. The waking call always happened at eight. The bedding one varied - Kai would text first, to ask if I wa

That would be correct. Though I will say that 'fem' gay people might very well practice both, this is not a criteria, but Adam does not. I think I gave a little of this away in his recent dream? 😉

OH! And just as I am about to up The Meeting, I read this. Now I am not sure if I should, if bodily harm is threatened...😰

McIrrelevant? He de shave a purpose in the story. It's a second love story in the background, basically. Kai is not the only one who needs some sugar. 😂 See the end of these comments, as far as hiatus is concerned. 😉 To use the words of Adam, or at least its style: Gallivanting? I don't gallivant. Alright alright...that bit I can up later today/tonight. But then it's waiting time! I'm sorry, but I have to. Friday will come early. 😉 😂🤣😂 alright already, I got the message! See below... There is a chapter in The Butler that I'm going to rewrite at some point. It needs a different approach, more suited to the rest of the story.

Apart from this one, Confounded III, which is still progressing (not crossing with it right now, due to chars/storylines in my head), is possibly my favorite. I tend to re-read before I progress further, seeing little things needing an edit, or additional text. Confounded I is meh, II is fine. 😊

CHAPTER 12 - Kai I really needed to call Megan and tell her about the change in plans. To be honest - I put it off yesterday because I didn’t want to face the music. Talk about Adam and explain how all of this had come to pass. But speaking to him just now and hearing all the things he’d arranged, that kinda planted a boot squarely under my ass to get moving and inform my family. “Hello?” I began to chuckle - Doc again. “Evening Doc. Is my sister around?” In the backgrou

How am I bad? What'd I do? I'm just sitting here, writing fantasy, posting it scene-style and with cliffhangers, like you're watching a tv-series. I should ask €5,99 a month for streaming episodes. 😈