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Oh, it sure will be! I SO did not need to know this. π· LOLOL! They would! π€ He'll be wounded for sure. Possibly might need some extra TLC. *furiously scratches line* π‘π€ That he thinks about that, even with his own predicament of a Saturday lazy morning ruined. I'm not tellin' Anarchy! Total anarchy I say!
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Sunday, actually. Ah, but I didn't tell you that asking for a new chapter automatically adds a day of waiting. Damn, why didn't I think of that when I began this story, I'd have had a backlog up to Christmas! Yeah, that was it!
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Unfortunately not. I posted this chapter some eight hours ago and we are allowed one per 24 hrs. Sorry! Don't look at me - them's the rules.
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CHAPTER 17 - Adam I woke up a little before 7am and, stretching, looked beside me. And my first thought of the day was, - βwouldnβt it be nice if Kai lay there now?β I could just imagine him there, still in slumber, me scooting backwards and pressing myself against his warm body, letting an arm encircle β¦ fall asleep again, maybe, for just a few minutes before rising, silencing the alarm so it wouldnβt wake him. Then put on a bathrobe, go downstairs and grind the coffee beans, brew co
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In Doc's case, his actions will show his true character. You'll see. π
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I think you're reading way too much into this. Though wordy, which is a propensity of mine, all I really glean from that is that he is traditional, wants a big family with a woman who challenges him. No dull moments there. Grotesque, you say? Depends on how you read it. π
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Well...crap. I knew there was something I forgot. I feel like Megan, forgetting something...
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You're welcome! I also like the interaction with the readers, it's a nice way of communicating. And they can be brutal at times.
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In the end, aren't we all? Monday = laundryday, Wednesday - meatloaf day, etc etc. I honestly have no idea, gotta ask the writer.
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I found some of mine when my grandmother passed, and my father before that, from when I served in the UN, in Former Yugoslavia, back in the 90's. Tiny musings written on postcards and such. It's fun to read!
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Noooooo, not the F-word! Oh, wait...different one, nvm.
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The fun thing is that while they do so on paper, they might not in real life, when speaking to each other. π
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This topic seems to be on repeat. π It may be telling but - I've never written a versa. I have one in mind. But he's not in this story. π
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Though this was addressed in chapter 6, where Kai counts a different number of chairs, I can see why you might read this as such. I assumed people would assume themselves that Adam did not include himself in that number of chairs. So I adapted this, just now, slightly. It now reads: Never more than seven people, though, eight if I include myself I think it's an improvement, since you were meticulous enough to notice it! Thank you! π
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π His is capable of it. Barely.
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Kai asked him not to call until morning...? Eyyyy birthdayboi! Welcome to this one! And thanks for reading. π
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Oh thank god, I was dreading the comments on this one. At least, right out of the gate, this is a relief. Thank you! I can make dinner now. π
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CHAPTER 16 - Kai It was around 11pm when I turned in for the night - my first night at βhomeβ - and lay awake for a long while, letting the day pass through my mind. I was dead tired - going up and then down those stairs had taken a lot out of me, but I was also happy to be here, with Adam. I listened as he scuttled about for a while upstairs. Thump thump thump. Bathroom. Thump thump thump. Bedroom. Thump thump thump thump. Closet. Door creaking closed. Thump thump thump. Bathroom agai
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ABBA rules! No collection should (ever) go without (some) of their albums. Darn! Why thank you! I might up another one today, not sure yet, I'm barely ahead of the editor and I've slacked this weekend, due to other commitments. Thank you very much for your comments (I'll respond to them as I go back and read), and let's give due credit to the editor, @pvtguy, who stepped up and has helped mold this into readable content. π As long as it's LGBTQ (Let's Get Beers Together, Quick!), I'll write it. π
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You remembered well! We shall have to see what the writer will come up with. Wait...hold on, I'm forgetting something.... As for the waffle, yes, and that's purely from the comments. A few chapters ago, it lit up a bit about those. I felt I should address it 'officially'. So you can influence the story. A little. Well, tiny, perhaps. π Actualy, I was listening to 'Slave to the Rhythm' by Grace Jones, when I wrote this. Funny, now that I think about it - I was writing on Confounded III when this popped into my head. I've mentioned this. However, I didn't mention that I was in a ABBA phase at that time, and listening to "The Day Before You Came", as well as "One of Us" and "Knowing Me Knowing You" (on repeat). I think I'm a walking dead man if I don't write some sex-doing in this story. π Yeah, that was cute, wasn't it? She's funny. She gets to do what Adam wants to do but doesn't dare yet. She doesn't have that inhibition. So it is. Yes, Adam is learning. He's not been lucky with his choice of men, which connects him with another...it will create a bond with someone, you'll read this soon enough. Our pets are the ones who 'hear' the most and they feel it when we're off our rocker. I love my baby. She's with me constantly. I'm in a room, she'll be there within a few minutes. Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. π₯°
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Nope, he was doing something else down there. π
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Correct and removed. Right? π
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CHAPTER 15 - Adam I was so glad that he was here now! Gosh, so glad! And happy that my instinct had been right when I told him I was certain that it wouldnβt be weird, that that wouldnβt happen. And weβd kissed - really kissed! When we kissed first, out by the car, that had been nice and not a real kiss, more a brushing of lips as a hello! But the second time, when he went for his rest, and really kissed me - I wanted more because that hadn't been nearly enough. I did an unch
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It was 12 years ago, that reaction. I think he's aware now. π
