Andr0gene
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You know, hindsight is 20/20 vision, and I probably should have, there. Great way to set up Kit, really. I don't really like revisiting, rather learning from past flaws. I won't touch this story, I think, but the comment is correct.
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Ah, but the man is human...read on.
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Shush you...you're giving it away, lol!
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That line is actually a line from my step-mom, who told my dad this in a restaurant, where we were having X-mas dinner! We were sitting in this exclusive restaurant, all dressed up, invited with only a few families on X-mas day, and were waiting for the 2nd course to arrive. They served salad with it, and my dad said: "Hmprf, I'm not a bunny" and she fired that one at him. I remembered it all these years (She sadly passed away shortly after). It's an homage to her, really.
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It is. I will finish this one, this year. I must!
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Gary gets a bit of dialogue, soon.
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I agree, actually. #1 was less fleshed out. I prefer #2 to that one any day.
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CHAPTER 49 --==Kit’s POV==-- “Can we go now?” I asked impatiently, as dad made his way back. It caused him to frown at me again, as he spoke with the foreman in hushed tones. Uch, this place was a pigsty. The warehouse was a busy hive, always something to do here, and I remember a summer full of fun, crawling all over the place like a crazed monkey, from the rafters to the basement. But that was then. This was now, and my shoes had a film of dust on it and there was a stain in my pants
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Yes, an update is coming soon. I hope to continue Part II this month. Most is written, for the next chapter.
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I am writing, but corrently on another project. I hope to return to this soon. I may use bits from what I currently write.
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CHAPTER 48 --==Tom’s POV==-- I stared at Jay’s comment with mixed feelings. On the one side, I wanted to really bash his brains in, and make it permanent, this time. On the other; why the hell should I care what he thought or wanted, being pretty much done with him. So instead of replying, I just closed the chat box. Screw him. I shouldn't have accepted all requests; I looked for a way to block him. It popped up again when he typed something more, showing the previous comment and a new on
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That is far from insulting; I find it a compliment, thank you.
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Why thank you!Try THAW,
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It actually didn't, but I added a line to show that Michael is a bit off his rocker, lol!He's affected by it, hence the grabled speech. Hope it's a bit more clear now?
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Happy 2014! And thank you for reading.
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Tell me what confuses you, I may be able to rewrite it a little, to make it more clear. Send me a PM about it.
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Aww, thanks! I think this is the least liked story, and I guess I'll have to revisit it at some point, to tighten it up and make it less rambling, but the core is there.
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That's the plan, lol!
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CHAPTER 47 --==Tom’s POV==-- “So what do you have planned for the day, Tom?” Uncle T. asked when Kit and his dad had gone to the office. “Actually,” I began, eying him as he sat down across from me, a steaming mug of coffee in front of him, “I need my car, living here. I can’t keep depending on you guys. So I thought I’d go and get it, today?” “Sure. I didn’t even know you had one.” “Yeah, I got mom’s old one.” “The Honda?” “Yup.” “That was a nice car...back then...”
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CHAPTER 46 --==Kit’s POV==-- Waking up the next morning, with Tom in my arms, was like waking to a dream. Only this one was very real. I’d dreamed about this, waking up with boyfriend; a nice long good-morning kiss, his body close, its heat against me as we slowly woke to a new day. The latter was definitely true. Laying on my back, Tom had moved a leg over mine and his arm was draped over my stomach. His head lay in the crook of my neck, his warm breath coming even, brushing over my skin. B
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Why thank you! And...another one is waiting to go, and I'm writing the one after that.
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I just did, and realize that it's been a year and some days since I have. Oof, real life did intervene something fierce, but I am here, and writing.
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Fixed, thank you.
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Csr Discussion Day: The House Always Wins By Andr0Gene
Andr0gene commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I may rewrite the ending, it is indeed rushed, or feels that way to me. It's been pointed out to me, and I may me able to do so. I have a lot of free time upcoming and...in the mood to write. In fact, I wrote another story, on and off, during the past three years. Renee has read it, but it's been altered since. We will have to see. I thank you all very much and hope to be more present in the coming weeks. I regret to not having been here, when it was selected as a featured story. Thank you! A. -
Csr Book Club November Story: The House Always Wins By Andr0Gene
Andr0gene commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Oh dear...I'm a bit ashamed that I missed all of this. Real life and computers; aren't they a bitch. I recovered my password for my email today, and read the messages. I am SO friggin' sorry I could not be here to partake in the discussion. As a consolation; I did post a X-mas present, but that hardly makes up for having you peeps sit here and stick feathers up my *ahem*. Thank you very much for featuring the story. It's the one I love the most, to be honest. It's also the one that was written the quickest. A.
