Andr0gene
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I felt surprisingly calm and relaxed, considering I just agreed on giving up my freedom. Well, okay; that was overly dramatic, I was still me and the decision to agree wasn’t made under duress or any pressure and fully mine. The world didn’t stop and Greg didn’t suddenly change into raging maniac with daddy issues, and a whip to boot. After the toast, he calmly took a sip but his body language betrayed a subtle change. And I realized he’d held his breath. “How do you feel?” He asked, se
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That's....astute. And very much what this story is. Look past Greg, and look to Chris instead, as the redeeming factor for Greg. Very astute indeed.
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You are sweet. Thank you. Love you!
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Stockholm Syndrome would apply to Chris, not Greg. Stockholm Syndrome is where the victim feels affection or trust, or even develops feelings, towards their captor.
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He's angry with himself. But the way he then handles it...tsk tsk tsk...
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Oh, i wouldn't be too sure... Kath isn't really going to be doing much in the story.
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I think you're the only one who thinks of Gregory in that way.
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Mr. Montgomery is rather lonely, and looking for a combination of friendship and employee. Which can go either very bad or very good. Basil doesn't fit the description.
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Nope, he didn't, which tells you something. The news does affect him, which throws him off balance.
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Yes, it's a mutual split.
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I really hate the format I'm told to use. I will not go back to the other stories to redo it. I did it for this story but I despise it. Makes me not want to write. It's not my style, and then not my story. I'm sorry. Whomever came up with it, deciding it reads nicer: I disagree. But I'll abide by the rules. for this one.
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Greg sat back in his chair, slowly turning his glass by the stem. “There is a bathroom here, and I’ve a mind to take you there, right now, and stuff myself into that mouth of yours, if your foot isn’t back where I told you to put it in five seconds.” He said it conversationally but the heat turned all the way up for me; I was tempted to not do it, and see if he would make good on that. Something told me he most definitely would. “I haven’t submitted,” I answered, sending a smir
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I bristled a bit at his laughter. Obviously I had taken that into the next universe of stupidity but I couldn’t help it; this whole D/s thing had me thinking in sixteen different ways. I was aware of certain areas of BDSM, having participated in quite a few but those had been sessions of limited time. This 24/7 area was entirely foreign to me. “I’m sorry, but you looked so scared, as if I was going to put you over my knee right this second and spank you into the next century. It was
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I was busy with a response but this one pretty much covers it. I'll add; many points touched upon will be addessed in the coming chapters. 😉
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heh, I will be going back for stage 2: my nap before work.
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No, 1pm. I returned at 8am, have to go in again at 10pm. I just woke after some good 5 hrs, lol. I'm sorry about the format, people! It'll be corrected!
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Stretching my legs, I set my feet on the sand and rose, taking a few steps toward the waterline. I could feel his eyes in my back. Turning around, I sought his gaze. "Did it ever occur to you," I said with some difficulty, "to just start a conversation? Like normal people?" He didn't say anything, just kept eye contact. "Show interest? Ask me on a date? You know; get to know me? Or is any of that unavailable in your world?" Rising, he shoved his hands deep in his pockets but he never lo
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And pinpoint all the little hints and points, to glean some insight in behavior? Hmm...like a DVD on rewind, after an important scene you missed the clue of?
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lol. It did. And I got the gist of the subtlety, I just chose to totally go on a pity party. I posted too much, actually, I got told. Broke the rules, lol! So actually, you should have had 2 a day for 10 days instead of a heap on 1 day. OOPS.
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Thank you. I have no proofreader for this, so it's all my faults in this story, sorry!
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Oh, I am sorry, I should have left a message! I took over 3 night shifts from a sick colleague, and then my schedule is all out of whack. I have one night off, then another four nights at work, so this is hellweek for me. I'm sorry. I never write in such periods, because I can't seem to string two sentences together then; my brain (like Greg's) is elsewhere. I'll see if I can edit the following chapter for today: I found a lot of notes of my own in the seedfile, that I need to address. If not, it'll probably another 5 days before I post again. I can respond to comments though, via my tablet there. We has WiFi at work now! \o/ I dunno about your colleagues but do tell, do tell...
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Fixed! Well caught, ty.
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And? Did you find it? It's there...
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There is a reason for that.
