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CHAPTER 51 --==Kit's POV==-- "Alright, spill; what is up with you. You're supposed to yap it up and I'm supposed to be the brooding little shit," Tom said, as we sped down the highway. At the current pace we'd just make it in time before Duncan opened up the warehouse. "But I'm in the mirror universe, doing all the yapping and you doing the brooding." Shaken out of my thoughts, I glanced sideway to find Tom's annoyed gaze on me. I sighed. "Sorry. It's just...Dad intercepted me i
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Hah! What one likes, the other won't even spit on. I'm not offended in the least, either way. But even i have my preferences among my own stories. CG makes me shudder, to be honest.
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I also want to add: Confounded I is my own least favorite. I don't really like CG either. THAW, I find, is the most fun read, it just...flows, however improbable. And then there's Confounded II. That one just may have the better character development of them all, but I leave that for others to decide.
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That's quite alright. Some like this, some like that and neither like both. Fact of life and both need to be said. Even some 6+ years later!
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Yeah, 7 years is a bit long; even George R.R. Martin writes faster, lol! But...another story is also in the works, and close to finished. So I'll publish that after this, or perhaps even simultaneously. I prefer to finish it though, considering my track record on this one.
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CHAPTER 50 --==Mitchel’s POV==-- I woke just before the alarm, silencing it right as it was about to go off. 4:59am. Beside me, Taylan softly continued his slumber, not even waking. Watching him for a minute, I couldn't help but reach over and move a lock of hair that had fallen on his closed eye; he reacted somewhat with a sigh. He'd told me all of the Jay episode after the boys had gone to sleep and I'd resolved to have a little conversation with Kit before they left for the wareh
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And I have no excuse. I should really finish this. And I will. Yowza...over two years. I'm re-reading the story and am getting into the mindset. I do hope to get started this week. I also fixed my email, so now I do get alerts! So you may nag, and I will be notified!
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Oh. My. God... I totally forgot about all this. I should finish this, shouldn't I.
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Thank you, all! I had a great day.
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Meh...too short. More exposition! Oh wait, fuck...I'm the writer. Oops?
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True. I'm reading this back again, along with you, and it...I dunno...'feels' too fast. I could use a few more chapters or exposition. As said previously, I won't, but there are definite flaws here.
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Taylan is modeled after me in my mid-twenties, so that might very well be true!
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Hah! Well...who knows!
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There is a glaring error here...anyone see it yet? I just noticed it, upon reading this story again...
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You're quite correct. This story needs more fleshing out, to be honest. I won't, but it could do with a little more of that.
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Gotcha! Oh, you're hooked!
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But wait for it!
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The fun about this response is: I know the answer! I hope you like the direction he will go next.
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Somehow, I don't think he will.
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He's found something and his social skills are leaving him because his base, primal feelings take over? I dunno...that was the drive, I remember that when I wrote it. Which was long ago!
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LOL! I might've done the same thing.
