Andr0gene
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Hah! Well...who knows!
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There is a glaring error here...anyone see it yet? I just noticed it, upon reading this story again...
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You're quite correct. This story needs more fleshing out, to be honest. I won't, but it could do with a little more of that.
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Gotcha! Oh, you're hooked!
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But wait for it!
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The fun about this response is: I know the answer! I hope you like the direction he will go next.
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Somehow, I don't think he will.
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He's found something and his social skills are leaving him because his base, primal feelings take over? I dunno...that was the drive, I remember that when I wrote it. Which was long ago!
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LOL! I might've done the same thing.
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You know, hindsight is 20/20 vision, and I probably should have, there. Great way to set up Kit, really. I don't really like revisiting, rather learning from past flaws. I won't touch this story, I think, but the comment is correct.
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Ah, but the man is human...read on.
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Shush you...you're giving it away, lol!
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That line is actually a line from my step-mom, who told my dad this in a restaurant, where we were having X-mas dinner! We were sitting in this exclusive restaurant, all dressed up, invited with only a few families on X-mas day, and were waiting for the 2nd course to arrive. They served salad with it, and my dad said: "Hmprf, I'm not a bunny" and she fired that one at him. I remembered it all these years (She sadly passed away shortly after). It's an homage to her, really.
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It is. I will finish this one, this year. I must!
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Gary gets a bit of dialogue, soon.
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I agree, actually. #1 was less fleshed out. I prefer #2 to that one any day.
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CHAPTER 49 --==Kit’s POV==-- “Can we go now?” I asked impatiently, as dad made his way back. It caused him to frown at me again, as he spoke with the foreman in hushed tones. Uch, this place was a pigsty. The warehouse was a busy hive, always something to do here, and I remember a summer full of fun, crawling all over the place like a crazed monkey, from the rafters to the basement. But that was then. This was now, and my shoes had a film of dust on it and there was a stain in my pants
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Yes, an update is coming soon. I hope to continue Part II this month. Most is written, for the next chapter.
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I am writing, but corrently on another project. I hope to return to this soon. I may use bits from what I currently write.
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CHAPTER 48 --==Tom’s POV==-- I stared at Jay’s comment with mixed feelings. On the one side, I wanted to really bash his brains in, and make it permanent, this time. On the other; why the hell should I care what he thought or wanted, being pretty much done with him. So instead of replying, I just closed the chat box. Screw him. I shouldn't have accepted all requests; I looked for a way to block him. It popped up again when he typed something more, showing the previous comment and a new on
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That is far from insulting; I find it a compliment, thank you.
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Why thank you!Try THAW,
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It actually didn't, but I added a line to show that Michael is a bit off his rocker, lol!He's affected by it, hence the grabled speech. Hope it's a bit more clear now?
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Happy 2014! And thank you for reading.
