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Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Thanks, JR. The fact that you're still hanging in there with me in it's self is a bonus. lol comments fuel my little soul and makes me want to be better and do better, so again thank you. I agree making new memories will be great. I can understand Christian's struggles though. He's in great company so he should be fine. I think we will see more of who Christian really is as the story continues. It's like we learn about Chris, as he learns about himself. Glad you're digging Tag and Jimmy. Look for more of them as well... Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Awww. Thank's unlikelyu. I'm happy to see you're still reading and enjoying the story and knowing that life gets busy, I appreiciate you leaving a review. The four do make great friends, don't they? Kim -
Unbelieveable, Tanner is defending satan in a mini skirt, he doesn't know she's the one that hit him...now that's really sad to me... Tanner seems to be such a wonderful guy, I wish he hadn't died and they could have developed their friendship, but oh well *sighs* Amanda to me is pure evil and there's not a punishment good enough for her. It's my hope that she doesn't get away with this... Still digging the story, you're writing style is awesome, KC I hate Sunday nights, it's too close to 3:30 am Monday morning, but at least I have your chapter updates...
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Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Hey, peethree, you're still hanging in there...thanks As I mentioned before I want a nice slow build, but at the same time don't want to bore... and yes, our dear Chis has a jealous streak so that's cool that even though he doesn't remember David he feels something... again thanks so much for reading a posting a review love it! Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
oh yes our dear loves to torture the ones she loves...lol I let her have the drama and I'll keep the romance coming, it will be a perfect balance of reading meteral for ya Now, Dave I totally agree Chris is falling which is cool. but you know as well as I do that before we get to the "happily ever after" the must be a calm before the storm, what that will be, if it will be, I can't say...hehehe Love the review, and thanks for reading and posting one. Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Oh, Lisa I totally agree re: the marriage thing and I think that's what Jimmy was trying to point out as well and with so much going on, Christian worried about getting his memory back, the movies and dating thing slipped their minds, but it's not too late. Jimmy and Tag are rare, they've found their soul mates in each other and that was that... thanks so much for the awesome review, Lisa I truly appreiciate it. Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
I agree Daddy, we'll have to wait and see if it works, either way, Christian is committed to the committment even if he can't remember making it. He's not leaving so as you said he either needs to release the block or come to terms with the fact that he might not get it back... Thanks for dropping by and leaving a review It's fuel for my soul Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
I think it's a wonderful idea as well, KC. I guess with so much going on with them, they didn't think about it. Better late than never and yes dating and starting over again can be very romantic...Funny I would think it would be David that's the romantic one, but... Thanks so much for the review and reading I know you're busy and tomorrow is Monday after all...YAY!!! Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Richard, thanks for the review. Your ESP was slightly off eh? You would think watching movies of the family might jar Christian's memory, like you said we have to wait and see I'm not sure about Liam and Ethan changing Tag's mind, he said in an eariler that watching them prevents them from wanting little monsters of their own...but you never know... Thanks for reading and posting a review, hopefully you'll stick around till the end... Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Ooooo Daddy, I'm sure David would have loved it if Christian would have wanted to be held, that might have been the next best thing... Glad you enjoyed the date and the after as well. I hope you keep reading and letting me know you're out there... Thankd for much for the review. Kim -
Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Oh there is a hint in there, but you'll have to wait till the next chapter to see to what I love Tag and Jimmy too, so look for lots more from them. Danke for the review and Safe travels... -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Yeah, Christian is cautious here and for good reason. but the more time he spends with David the more he leans about them so... being human, I'm sure David get anxious, but knowing that Christian is still there and trying gives him hope. I agree with you, I dig seeing them do "couply" stuff.. Merci, for all your help, you rock! Kim -
Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
Naptowngirl commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
Okay I got so much from this chapter...and I have a few questions as well... I love Addie though. I've experienced that myself with a friend. I figured he was gay, but never said anything. I let him know by conversations that I had no problem with gay people at all even going as far as to let him know I wrote same sex stories and he still didn't bite until he was ready...lol The running joke now is the more we hung out the "gayer" he got...lol I actually think Sam would be perfect for Lucca... I just love Sam, if you didn't know that already... Now Matt...Why do I think that was Jeremy we over heard when Lucca and Matt were on the phone... hehehe I love the pregression of this story.. it's like each chapter we get a little more, just enough to keep us coming back. I can't wait for the date. Great chapter, intune. I'm totally digging 'Pitch Perfect' -
Christian sat back in his seat and crossed his arms over his chest as he casually glanced around the room. He was sure he would always remember this room; the color, the smell and the comfortable feel for many years to come. He blew out a calming breath of air even while combing his fingers through his blond hair which seemed to have a mind of its own. The natural curls were longer now and uncontrollable without some sort of styling gel. It now covered the scar behind his ear and it appeared l
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Story Review Author Showcase!
Naptowngirl commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
WOW!!!! totally blown away by this...and honored.. Blushing over here. Thank you so much for the Great review KC. And I loved Teh Funny Thing Is. I was totally Team Kyle all the way...lol I also read The List and agree with Lisa its an awesome read... Thanks again KC you are Amazing.... -
Gonna to start by saying I hope she convinced you to change the ending because if not. I'm not going to bitch and say I'm not going to read. I want so badly for Tanner not to be dead, but if he is and that BITCH and her spineless boyfriend Ethan need to get punished to the fullest extent of the law. If not...just call me Annie because it on..... took down the hard extrior and balling my eyes out.....DAMN PS: now begging...Please Please dont kill off Tanner....
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Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Super duper sized hugs right back at ya RJ... so happy this chapter turned out ok. I really didn't want to dissapoint so it appears I did ok. Like Lisa said it didn't end bad it just didn't end the way David would have hoped, but his husband didn't push him away so thats always a good thing. Hopefully the sexual part of their relationship will come ;)thanks for the wonderful review. I'm cheesing like Chester...Kim:D -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
WOW, Looks like I win all the way around, GDH5683. You decide to read. You like it and post a review!!! YAY. Thanks for decidind to read, glad you are enjoying it and love reviews so again thanks. Kim -
Chapter 10 The Closer I Get...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 10 The Closer I Get...
I have no idea, but I missed you too. Tag and Jimmy are incredible individuals. As much grief as they give those boys they have nuttin but love for them. We get a little more of Christian and David's besties in the next chapter so I hope everyone likes it.Awww...blushing over here. Glad you liked that line. Love and the feeling of love and being loved is an amazing thing. It's fun watching this love thang unfold for Christian. Thanks for the review, and glad to see I didn't lose you, I was starting to worry there for a moment Merci, Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Christian is falling in love. Some might think it's fast but when you think about it, there's resdue of his former life locked away in his mind somewhere and knowing that he's married to his man and this man is showing him nothing but love in that case I say it's okay to fall. but Christian being who he is, is being careful. Oh yes, I love jazz and Chris Botti. funny thing when I was on Sculler's web site it was hard to choose since I loved them all, but in the end Chris Botti won..lol I love Boston can't wait to go back, and this time check out Scullers. Thanks so much, Chica love you insightful comments I just love them. Kim:) -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
As always...thanks my dear. for the review, and the help. I think the chapter turned out okay as well. I want the reader to get to know Christian as he too learns himself. The more we learn the more we realize the Christian nor David are not perfect, but they are committed to the commitment and thats what makes the difference. He may not remember his love for David,but he knows there's something there... again thanks so much and look forward to chatting with you as we pump out our chapters... -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Hey, Stephen, so happy to see you are reading and took the time to leave a review I appreicate it. It's interesting when you think about it, poor Christian has a lot on his plate and a lot to digest. I get that he is taking it slow and even as frustrated as David might be, he gets it too. Ahh falling in love can be a wonderful and scary experience. Its funny I've been to Boston and loved it, but when ever I do events I like to do my research so to answer your question yes. the jazz club Scullers and Hampshire House are in Boston. I know the next time I go, I'm going to hit up Scullers I love Jazz. Again thanks sooooo much hope you keep reading and letting me know you're out there. Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
unlikelyu, hope everying is going well for ya. tonight wasn't it, but it wasn't a total lost. it was filled with great memories. new ones. I totally agree with Tag, they both could use some mind blowing sex right now, so I'm crossing my fingers for them. I know life is busy for ya so thanks for taking the time to leave a review and let me know you were out there. Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Music does spark memories,its almost like pictures for some, so like you mention it's a good thing. I also dig the fact that the more he's around Daivd new memories are being made. Oh and lol I see absoultly nothing wrong with having sex on the 1st date hell that would have been awesome and as quite as it's kept, I'v had sex on the 1st date..once and he wasn't my husband. lol. oh KC aside from more of this story that's next. I think Monday is next and I can't wait Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
Happy is good, Frosty. I think the date went over well it got a rise out of Christian. hehehe pun intended. I think you'll dig the plan. IZ happy that you are still hanging in there with my lil story. as I mentioned I don't want to rush it yet I want to tell a good story that won't bore you. So again thank you. Kim
