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Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
peetree, glad to know you're out there. the journey for Christian is just starting so it's my hope to keep you reading and entertained... Thanks for the review. Kim -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Oh yes we get more of those dolls in the story. And not to worry,I have arsonal in my bag of tricks for you, so trust me you won't forget Kaleb thanks so much for the compliment now my head's all big Christian has a long road ahead so I hope you ride it out with me till the bitter end. Merci, Kim -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
unlikelyu, so glad you are enjoying the story so far. Christian may not remember but he is a good person, and he is dealing with children. And David does remember and like he said time is all he has,to him Christian is sooo worth being patient for... Again thanks for the review totally love it! Kim -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
YAY!!!!! Thank you. Hope you enjoy the journey, it's just begining Again, Thanks so for the review and letting me know you are out there... Kim -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Very true, intune. Christian has no memory of these people, but he knows he is important to them. We will get inside his head in the next chapter. Love this awesome review so glad the story is being received well. *blushes*Danke... Kim -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Frostina, Merci for the great review. I feel ya regarding David, but again he's being really great here, so is Christian. They have a wonderful family, and David just wants that back. So glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one should be insightful...I hope. Christian goes home soooo.... Kim -
He held his breath and his heart pounded fast within his chest. Using the back of his hand, he wiped away the beads of perspiration that dotted his brow while taking a slow breath of air to calm himself. “Okay…I can do this,” he coached as he willed the nerves away. “I can do this.” He would have thought he was meeting the president or something. He wanted this to be right; after all he didn’t want to hurt the boys. It wasn’t their fault he didn’t remember them, and it was his goal not to
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Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Hey!!!!! lol love your reviews they always make me smile sometimes laugh out loud... clueless Christian eh?? David is cool and Kiddos coming right up.... Danke, Kim -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Thanks, Frostina, if you loved their interactions I've got plenty for ya. It is hard for David, but as I've mentioned the fact that Christian is alive gives him a great deal of hope. Getting Christian home will be interesting. I'm planing on taking my time with Christian in this story so again I hope to keep it entertaining and believable. Danke Frostina... Kim D -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
I know,intune, it's gotta be hard for both of them...the fun will be Christian learning his life all over again. David is patient and Christian is a good sport, confused but he's taking it all in stride...I think Up next...Meeting the Children..Thanks for the review love it... Kim -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Yeah, Ck, it's gotta be hard on David, but the bright side is Christian is alive so he stands a chance of getting him back...I'm hoping the story will be worth the read and I do the story I want to tell justice. Danke for the review and for reading Hello My Name is... Kim -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Hey, Lisa, thanks, took care of it.. and yes that should have been a tell tell sign the crush on Liam that is, but hes in denial....right now anyway Christian meeting the boys will be fun. We'll get a glimps of Christian's character that might suprise even David...thanks for the review and the correction. Kim -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Mattie...I know the part you are speaking of...I like it too. I think it's going to be fun working with David, Christian and the boys and I'm very proud to have you with me...let the fun begain!!!! Merci -
Christian took in a deep breath and relaxed his head against the pillow. Why couldn’t he remember? He thought so hard it hurt. It was like having a notebook filled with paper, and you started writing in the middle, leaving the first few pages blank. What he could remember was growing up a P.K. ‘Preacher’s Kid,’ in Jackson, Mississippi. In his household the word ‘Homosexuality’ was only mentioned in church as a sin punishable by death, so he knew he couldn’t be gay and married to a man…No wa
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Congrats!!!!! to everyone
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... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
Darn, thats the end...I guess I can put away my Team Kyle shirt...lol Thanks for such a great story and a hell of an amazing ride. I hate that it's over, but all good things must come to an end... I'll be waiting patiently for your next journey. -
Chapter 6 Caught In The Middle...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6 Caught In The Middle...
Hey, intune...lol thank ya for the review... now who will Max end up with...it might get complicated...we only have 2 chapters left, I said it was a short story, but the ending might surprise you...just say Kim -
Wonderful. I didn't get a chance to read it here, so I guess now I'll have to buy it.... Congrats KC!!!!!
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“Have you always been such a goody two shoes?” He chuckled as he pulled back the tab on his can of beer. “I’ve been called a lot of things…” He reflected thoughtfully, “some I don’t even want to repeat but ‘goody two shoes’ isn’t one of them.” He replied before turning up his can. “Well, if I were you, I wouldn’t tell him. I mean he’ll never know…right?” Brad shrugged casually. Drake rubbed his hand roughly up the side of his neck. He pondered the question while his friend watched, anxious
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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
I love the fact that they had kids, more importantly I love that Kaleb had a mini me...he was so scared to have a child like him and yet Mint was their pride and joy, all of their kids were. Chase truly loved Kaleb at 1st sight, and visa versa...they just fit...perfecty Thanks so much for the wonderful reviews. Comments fuels a writer's soul so again thank you, I am well fed. Kim... MWAH!!! -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Revelations...
sorry I forgot the r in my last comment *blushes* Helen should be ashamed of herself, but she's Kaleb's mom and Chase understands that, so she should appreciate that he loves Kaleb and by not telling he's keeping Helen and her sons relationship in tact, only because he knows Kaleb loves her. -
Chapter 18 Meet me at the crossroads...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 Meet me at the crossroads...
Frotina, gotta say, I luv ya. , and I'm so digging that you are Digging Shades of Gray, but had to comment on this one... I 100% agree, I want Carter...he loves his brother and wants him happy and if that's Kaleb so be it, and HE is the best brother ever!!!! not to mention he Rocks... -
I know, right...poor baby. but he tries. you just want to give him a hug...
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Chapter 17 the Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 the Epilogue
Awwww.... Merci. Glad you liked.... Kim -
Chapter 9 Family Time....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 9 Family Time....
Actually Kaleb is smarter then people give him credit for especially his mother... and yes theough hospitals are usually for the sick, some amazing things happen there as well, which is what Kaleb wanted Chase to see...
