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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Merci!!! ckprime, glad you know you were still with me.. :D Yep 15 years later and they still got it... thank you so much for reading and sharing your reviews with me... ease into 2012 safely dude... -
“Really….” She giggled before taking a sip of her apple flavored juice box. “What did you tell him?” She asked as she played with the knotted pearls draped loosely around her neck. “Well…” Her brother leaned back enough to make sure their conversation wouldn’t be overheard. “I told him, his breath smelled like dog shit and he threw like a girl.” He snickered proudly before taking a bite of his banana. “Oh my god…I’m surprised you have any teeth left.” She stated in amazement as she push
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Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
Happy New year,Nettie Poo and yes I did get some of my NY discription from our recent visit the the city. Missing you too, chica..as they say all good things must come to an end, and I have had a blast chronicling the lives of Kaleb and Chase. I'm really excited about the eppi, not that its this big deal, but we get to see what our happy couple has been up too. yes Chase and Helen will share their little secert which is best anyway, Kaleb never needs to know what she tried to do. They love each other and are a perfect compliment to each other. Thanks for coming to GA and showing your support, its truly awesome to know you liked the story. Love all the reviews as you know... Danke, Love ya Kim -
Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
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You know charlieocho, I'm glad you enjoyed this story and stuck with me till the bitter end. I actually looked for your reviews and you didn't dissapoint...Best Wishes to you and yours as well...be safe. Kim -
Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
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Graci, Nephylim.... I love that fact that YOU read and reviewed my lil story.. blushes..lol Lilly indeed won Helen over We learn a little more about that in the Eppi. Thank you...thank you. for reading the 1st till the last sentence, I really appreicate it... Kim -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
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Yes, Helen had her hand all in it...but Chase wasn't having it... Glad you were all warm and fuzzy, that means I did okay. Merci, Kim -
Chapter 19...Loving As We Are...
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And your senses may be right on, dear one. Kaleb did everything they asked him to do...he's 100% for sure. Hell I want me a Kaleb, he is amazing...And I think Chase knows it too... Danke for the review...I love it!!!!! Kim -
Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
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intune, thank you for reading this lil old story of mine and I'm so happy you enjoyed it. comments always fuel the writers soul, so thanks for adding to my tank sorta speak it kept me going...Hope you enjoy the Eppi as well so keep your eye out for it... Kim -
Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
Uh Thank you very much.....lol.*Me using my Elivs voice.* And thank you for sticking with me till the bitter end amd also for loving my..opps Chase's...oops YOUR Kaleb so much. I actually think you'll dig the epilogue I'm actually going to miss writing it every week too. Again thanks for the review. Kim -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Revelations...
Danke, my dear... and to answer the last question first, Chase called Scott to get Mr. Sweeney's lol name and address...just goes to show you it's not what you know all the time, but who.Yes Chase pulled off the gloves and came out swinging. He's learned Helen and he knows she loves her son in her own warped mine...and she is a mother. to have Kaleb disown her would kill her. I think she will sit still on this one. Kaleb and Chase are perfect together...and now baby makes three... the She's Ours put a little lump in my throat...Lilly is a lucky little girl. She has two...yes two amazing dads and one awesome Uncle...Carter Rocks.. Thanks chica for the review...you Rock too... Kim -
Chapter 19...Loving As We Are...
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No kill ya, Nettie Poo, I'd miss you too much...lol but yes Chase asked Scott for help. A mans gotta do what a mans gotta do. Never burn your bridges... I loved the conversation between and the two of them, it shows depth in their relationship and the fact that they still care about each other. And you got it right...Chase was going to call Scott to find out what happened and Scott called him first... and again, yes Chase is totally on a mission here. I think Kaleb needs a hug... Thanks for the review, sweets MWAH, Kim -
Chapter 21...If We Just Believe...The Best Aways Comes
Naptowngirl posted new chapter in Shades of Gray
“Lilly…stop it.” Kaleb whined exasperatedly, as he reached behind the driver’s seat to pick up the baby’s shoe. Shrill giggles and playful laughter erupted as she kicked her little legs excitedly. “Hold still, Lilly…” He fought with the little tyke as she wiggled her leg from his grasp. This was a game to her. She’d kick off her shoe. Kaleb would put it back on, and she would kick it off again. The exhausted pleas and frustrated grunts were amusing her. “Exactly. That was my thought as- 13 comments
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Chapter 18 Meet me at the crossroads...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 Meet me at the crossroads...
You know I think it helps Chase having his twin brother in town...he can help him to see things clearer and he knows that he always has his back...I can understand Chase's point too if I had a Kaleb I don't think I'd want to share right away either...Kaleb is indeed getting ready for Lilly and he is responsible enough to take care of her. Oh and Helen is a total trip...we soon learn Kaleb made a great choice when he asked Chase to be his boyfriend...just saying... Super Sized hugs back at ya, chica... Kim thanks for the great review.... -
Ahhhhh, An update, and a fine one at that...Dear. I must admit James stays true to himself that's for sure. hahahaha....I guess it is time for him to push forward with his "Lagacy" but I'm selfish I don't want him to marry Jenny or get her pregnant... I know I'm wrong for that but it's true....lol sidenote, lol (women just don't do it for him AT all...do they?) hahaha As you know I've loved James from the door, he has an evilness I crave week to week... so keep em comming, sweetie...
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Kaleb missunderstood totally, Nettie Poo, but at least Chase was honest with them about his feelings, he's always honest with Kaleb. And Helen is just...Helen, you can never understand her. Horace on the other hand understands them all so it seems... didn't you just love the is she black.... look out Helen your grand baby is a colorful soul....just saying... Merci, my dear...Hope you had a wonderful Sunday... Girl, Don't ya miss it :D
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Chapter 16 Lilly Was Here...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 Lilly Was Here...
Oh yeah, I totally get with Chase is coming from...its like he finally found it and...but at the same time I think he gets it. Kaleb is like that balm to anyones soul, I think. You get that he doesn't have a bad bone in his body, he's just a good good person. Lilly is a very lucky girl to even have Kaleb want to care for her. Again Carter is a gem for real and he's genuine, he loves his brother and would do anything for him... we got a great bunch of folks here, well excluding Helen of course...lol Thanks chica, Kim hope you're feeling better.... -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
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hahaha...Swhouston44, that guy, did alright tonight didn't he..' and yes let's hope Ms. Helen stays in her lane...One more chapter and a epilogue, thanks for hanging with me, and for your reviews... need to stay with me. Kim -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Revelations...
charlieocho, Kaleb has all kinds of cute names for his little girl...lol I was thrilled to hear you found the chapter emotional, that's what I was going for and merci for the wonderful, encouraging words re my writing. as I always say, comments fuel the writers soul. so again thanks for review. Kim -
Chapter 20 Revelations...
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Big smiles are a GREAT thing, intune. thanks for the review... Kim -
Chapter 15 The Negotiator...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 The Negotiator...
Hey, girl, sounds like "we" all ended up sick ;)One thing about Chase and Kaleb is their honesty between each other. I think in that situation making sure Kaleb was okay was Chase's main concern and making sure he didnt get into trouble. They are good for each other and together. Hope you get to feeling better girl. MWAH!!!! Thanks for reading and posting a comment, you know I love them. -
Thanks, Nettie Poo.. Glad to have you back. And as you know I'm happy that you are having run reading the story. Yep Chase said those three words and the world did't explode... the journals, Helen was good for something at least. Carter is a cool brother and friend. Yes Kaleb paid for the whole thing...He loves those kids and he's totally cute
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"Good evening Mr. Mont...” Hannah uttered. Her expression registering confusion as Chase walked right past her taking long, hastened strides. "Hum...” She knitted her brows together as he quickly disappeared from her sight, down the hall, and into the Fitzgerald's study. Without warning or even knocking, Chase angrily pushed the door open, slamming it against the wall while doing so. It hit the wall with such force you could hear the wood crack. Helen jumped from her seat dropping the boo
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Chapter 13 Confessions
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 13 Confessions
Totally dig the horse comment...funny how that happened...lol Chase and Kaleb are good together and the disability is what makes them good, I think. We all are looking for the real thing...it doesn't have to come in a perfect package, though Kaleb does phyically it's the emotional part that pulls Chase in. And his question to Helen is Valid. 'You say you love your son whose gay, but you hate his lifestyle... can you have one without the other...good question. :)Helen is a complexed person for sure. Carter is a cool brother, look for him in future chapters Glad you enjoyed the chapter and lots of love right back at ya.... Kim -
…Some Things Are Out Of Your Control
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in …Some Things Are Out Of Your Control
Great chapter. I just love this story. Reading it with a cup of coffee I get lost in it everytime. I really want to just hug Cooper, poor baby. Though I have to wonder if he's made his choice, why does "my" Kyle keep creeping into his mind...lol I tell ya, I don't know what the future holds for this story, but I'm loving every minute of it and keeping my 'Team Kyle,' shirt handy.... -
Chapter 19...Loving As We Are...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19...Loving As We Are...
saintsfan820, thanks for the review and reading, I'm glad you are still hanging in there with Chase and Kaleb. Kaleb did everything asked of him. Let's just hope Chase can pull a rabbit out of a hat and make it happen. Kim...
