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  1. Naptowngirl
    Oh yeah, I totally get with Chase is coming from...its like he finally found it and...but at the same time I think he gets it. Kaleb is like that balm to anyones soul, I think. You get that he doesn't have a bad bone in his body, he's just a good good person. Lilly is a very lucky girl to even have Kaleb want to care for her. Again Carter is a gem for real and he's genuine, he loves his brother and would do anything for him... we got a great bunch of folks here, well excluding Helen of course...lol Thanks chica, Kim hope you're feeling better....
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    hahaha...Swhouston44, that guy, did alright tonight didn't he..' and yes let's hope Ms. Helen stays in her lane...One more chapter and a epilogue, thanks for hanging with me, and for your reviews... need to stay with me. Kim
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    charlieocho, Kaleb has all kinds of cute names for his little girl...lol I was thrilled to hear you found the chapter emotional, that's what I was going for and merci for the wonderful, encouraging words re my writing. as I always say, comments fuel the writers soul. so again thanks for review. Kim
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    Big smiles are a GREAT thing, intune. thanks for the review... Kim
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    Hey, girl, sounds like "we" all ended up sick ;)One thing about Chase and Kaleb is their honesty between each other. I think in that situation making sure Kaleb was okay was Chase's main concern and making sure he didnt get into trouble. They are good for each other and together. Hope you get to feeling better girl. MWAH!!!! Thanks for reading and posting a comment, you know I love them.
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    Chapter 14

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Thanks, Nettie Poo.. Glad to have you back. And as you know I'm happy that you are having run reading the story. Yep Chase said those three words and the world did't explode... the journals, Helen was good for something at least. Carter is a cool brother and friend. Yes Kaleb paid for the whole thing...He loves those kids and he's totally cute
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    "Good evening Mr. Mont...” Hannah uttered. Her expression registering confusion as Chase walked right past her taking long, hastened strides. "Hum...” She knitted her brows together as he quickly disappeared from her sight, down the hall, and into the Fitzgerald's study. Without warning or even knocking, Chase angrily pushed the door open, slamming it against the wall while doing so. It hit the wall with such force you could hear the wood crack. Helen jumped from her seat dropping the boo
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    Totally dig the horse comment...funny how that happened...lol Chase and Kaleb are good together and the disability is what makes them good, I think. We all are looking for the real thing...it doesn't have to come in a perfect package, though Kaleb does phyically it's the emotional part that pulls Chase in. And his question to Helen is Valid. 'You say you love your son whose gay, but you hate his lifestyle... can you have one without the other...good question. :)Helen is a complexed person for sure. Carter is a cool brother, look for him in future chapters Glad you enjoyed the chapter and lots of love right back at ya.... Kim
  9. Naptowngirl
    Great chapter. I just love this story. Reading it with a cup of coffee I get lost in it everytime. I really want to just hug Cooper, poor baby. Though I have to wonder if he's made his choice, why does "my" Kyle keep creeping into his mind...lol I tell ya, I don't know what the future holds for this story, but I'm loving every minute of it and keeping my 'Team Kyle,' shirt handy....
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    saintsfan820, thanks for the review and reading, I'm glad you are still hanging in there with Chase and Kaleb. Kaleb did everything asked of him. Let's just hope Chase can pull a rabbit out of a hat and make it happen. Kim...
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    Swhouston44. hehehe sorry for the wait. Thank you for the wonderful review. Our poor Kaleb he needs a hug. if he'd just come out of the room....lol Kim
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    Thanks, charlieocho. I mean it when I say I'm glad Ive kept you reading. and thanks for the review. Kim
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    "Well, enough with the small talk, Chase.” Scott smiled knowingly before taking a sip of his tea. "Why did you really want to see me? I know it wasn't just to see how I was doing..." He accused him playfully. "Wait. That's not true.” Chase defended quickly. "I still care about you...very much.” He stated sincerely. “You know that." "I didn't say you didn't care.” Scott countered. "I asked why you really invited me out to lunch.” He clarified as he placed his elbows on the table, cl
  14. Naptowngirl
    Wow.... blushing over here for real... thank you. I'm so glad you love Kaleb as much as Chase and I do... and you are right, he's totally REFRESHING!!!! I honestly dig writers that can write major drama it requires skill, unfortunately, thats not me, lol so I stick with the light, fun, less drama stuff...hahaha. again thanks so much Kim
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks so much for reading School Daze, I hope you enjoy Shades of Gray.... I'm having a blast writing it. Let me know what you think.. :D Kim
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    Thank you soooooooo Much, I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Kim
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I loved the one line..."You changed me" I'm also glad Blake realized what he wanted. I really hope things work out for Josh he seems like a sweet guy.
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    Wow. What a great chapter. I read it over my morning coffee and loved every word. I have to admit I like Chase, I know I never thought I would say that, but he seems okay...for now anyway I totally dig the way this story is written, I actually feel as if I'm right there in the thick of it. Spencer is running a close second to Kyle, I love reading him. But of course you know I love my Kyle and where my shirt proudly... I hold my breath when he's mentioned for some reason he's sexy to me...I just love him and what he did by inviting Chase just validates it. Team Kyle till the bitter end
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    Chapter 17

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I think he can do it...I'm wearing my Team Kaleb shirt!!! lol Thanks for the review Nephylim... Kim
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    Helen is a piece of work that's for sure lets just hope it doesn't all blow up in her face and she pushes her son away. There is a saying "People love as they are." And Helen's love is totally twisted. Chase to the rescue huh? lol we will see.... Thanks, Nephylim I get all happy when I see you've left a comment.. :D Kim
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    WAIT!!!! I suckered you back...where you leaving me. lol Helen de Ville eh? Kaleb and Co... hehehehe... Thanks Swhouston44 your comments make me smile all big... Kim
  22. Naptowngirl
    Helen is treading on thin ice and you're right she needs to chill. Thanks for letting me know you are out there... and digging my lil story. Kim
  23. Naptowngirl
    Thank you for letting me know. Comments makes this writing so much fun. Glad to see you like Chase and Kaleb's lil story. Kim
  24. Naptowngirl
    I totally agree, intune there has to be a point where she takes her ball ans bat and just go home... thanks for the review and that you are still reading we only have a few more chapters before our journey ends...again thanks so much for sticking it out. Kim
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    “...Oh and Kaleb, again I'm so sorry.” Chase sighed into the phone. He rested his head back onto the pillow clutching the phone tightly in the palm of his hand. This was the fifth message he left. For some reason the sound of Kaleb's voice was soothing to him. It was a stark contrast to how he left him, yet this was the closest he could get to him. He had hoped that Horace was wrong and Kaleb would answer the phone so they could straighten out this horrible misunderstanding. "Boy, you are
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