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  1. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 14

    intune, I love Kaleb too, poor baby can you imagine how he felt bumping into Carter with no clothes on... I wanted to hug him too. I think both he and Chase are very lucky to have each other and I agree, Kaleb would make a wonderful daddy someday. Yeah for right now Helen and Chase has come to a hostle agreement for the sake of Kaleb. It appears Chase isn't going anywhere and neither is Helen, sooo. then we have Carter to add a little humor to the mix. He's always good for a laugh or two. Danke for the review, glad you're still hanging in there with me. Kim
  2. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 14

    As many times as you like...I love hearing it why did I read whatshisname and busted out laughing...hahahaha, poor Chase, I think that's his name is not getting much love, I think Kaleb is indeed the town favorite. But he is a sweety and so deserving of it. Thank you so much for the reviews, I truly love them... then WHAM! eh? hehehe. Kim
  3. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 14

    My dear charlieocho, gotta keep it exciting or I'll lose ya.. Let's hope Helen as sat down somewhere for a moment, I think, our fellas are about to have their hands full without her interference... just saying. Thanks for the review... I really appriciate it, Kim
  4. He wasn't sure how long he'd been standing there with that blank stare. He had just admitted something that scared the hell out of him, and yet Helen seemed unfazed by it. It was only by her reply, that he was even sure she heard him. And she was right; he was telling the wrong person. He combed his fingers through his hair while exhaling deeply. He watched as the door slowly open, concerned blue eyes zeroed in on wearied green ones. "Are... are you okay?” Kaleb's voice was soft and soot
  5. Well, my dear, you have done it again....wow. I can't say that I've read many stories as stimulating as yours. It's like you keep trying to out do yourself... And James...holy moly...I do worry as I mentioned before, you can't just be Rotten and get away with it forever... Another great chapter dude.. thank you. Now it's time for some personal time..
  6. Indeed, Helen is miserable... poor lady. Yep there will be a few bumps in the road up head for Kaleb and Chase as with any relationship the question is how will our guys fare this is a new ball game for them both... So Charlieocho, fasten up and enjoy the ride...I hope. Kim
  7. Intense indeed... intune. Kaleb and Chase will have obstacles in their way, but I agree I think it's cool the way the stand up for each other and their relationship Thanks for the review Kim
  8. I feel like doing my Sally Fields impression.."They like me...they really like me" Sighs, Helen is a Bitch in the truest form. She reminds me of one of those soap opera moms, always in their childrens business... Let's just hope he does't "chase", Chase away... and Kaleb is just Thanks for the review...I'm soooo glad you are still enjoying the story. Kim
  9. Great starting chapter. I'm digging Percy already. He and I share a liking for coffee..I need as much caffine as possible, none of that decaf for me. Now what's going to be interesting is to see if we meet mr. too close again and this max the mag...
  10. “Everybody…everybody, loosen up. Shake it like you just don't care -Shake it like you just don't care- Never mind your friends, girl, it ain't no sin to strip right down to your underwear. I say everybody, -everybody-, screw the masses. We only want to have some fun -only wanna have some fun- I say do whatever we want, wear lingerie to a restaurant. Policeman ain’t got no gun, you don't have to run. Everybody - Ooh -ooh-, all right,-all right-. Dance…Music…Sex, Romance. Everybody say -
  11. Nettie Poo...better slow down chica, you'll be caught up soon...lol Thank you, thank you... for such a lovely comment. Kaleb is awesome and unfiltered as Chase has come to understand and appricate. as you mentioned in chapter 8 Kaleb is fastly becoming someone Chase wants in his life, he's like that missing link. The fact that Chase wanted his father to meet him even on his death bed speaks volumes. the nursery scene was very important because understand the matter of Life and death crossing paths sometimes. he's a smart man and no one except Chase seems to give him complete credit for that. His father and Brother has his back, but you have to wonder if its out of respect and love or DO they see what Chase sees. Thanks again chica...Love the comments. Kim
  12. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    :D Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.. Kim
  13. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    Thank you so much for sticking it out...and reviewing, I really appriciate it... As I mentioned at the on set, they might be recuring characters if the readers liked them...so mever say never... Again thanks sooooo much!!!! Kim
  14. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    “Damn it!” Captain Morgan slammed the two inch hard cover book shut, pushing it aside. He sighed heavily as Drew and Tony entered the room. He watched Drew take a seat and Tony close the door behind them. A look of confusion attacked his features. “Wait a minute. Aren’t you supposed to be on bed rest?” He asked sternly, through a questioning gaze. He tilted his head slightly waiting for an answer. “Well, sir, Tony said you wanted to see us.” Drew replied, pulling out the chair ne
  15. Totally cool, Westlake82. this was actually a fun story to write glad you enjoyed it. Skipping down memory lane can be fun, especially when we stick to the "good points"... LOL Againg thanks... Kim
  16. Swhouston44, you're 1st time with Kaleb...Awwww. He's such a sweetie. Chase is indeed a lucky man and I think he realizes it. Helen, we haven't heard the last of her just yet... and yes she needs to take up knitting or something. She and Kaleb are like oil and water... It's I that should be thanking you for such a wonderful review...So thank you... Kim
  17. Nephylim...YAY!!!! still with me Kaleb is amazing. I wanted their first time to be special, so glad you thought I pulled it off..and thanks for the review... Kim
  18. Yes, they are actually intuned with each other... thanks for the review, so happy to see you are still reading.. Kim
  19. 50 lashes with a wet noodle eh charlieocho...glad it was worth the wait...I'm still recooping from the move from HELL... but anyway I'm back on track..I think. Thank you so much for the wonderful review and words that fuel the writers soul. And yes, Chase brought Kaleb a new car..the boy must have been awseome...hehe where is this headed..I'll surprise ya
  20. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 13

    Thank you Mr. Christiansen for your review. I totally get what you are saying. This is one of my favorites stories so I think I'll take your advice and search out an editor and have it revamped. it's like besides that Mrs. Lincoln how did you enjoy the play....lol glad you enjoyed it in spite of...and again thanks for taking the time to post a review. Kim
  21. Um...yeah. I think I'll keep you around... MWAH!!!!
  22. “Are you okay?” He whispered before tenderly kissing Kaleb behind his ear. Kaleb held his breath and nodded slowly. “Umhumm…” He sighed, though is body told a different story. Chase could feel him tremble underneath him as he arched his back slightly trying to wrap his legs tighter around Chase’s waist. “It doesn’t hurt…really. It just feels weird.” "Its okay, Kaleb...relax.” Chase spoke softly as he stilled himself allowing Kaleb time to adjust to him. The first time should always be
  23. Just wait till the next chapter...lol Tony just might fall through that ice...oh and the stiches held up but will the past the next test..hehe... thanks Phoneix we have one more chapter left... so glad you're riding it out with me... Kim
  24. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    Danke, Nettie Poo. I'm really happy that you are enjoying Shades of Gray. I tell Chase is in for one hell of a ride and he doesn't even realize it which we will see in the future. Kaleb has this efect on him that he can't put a handle on, but as you mentioned the reward is always great. Helen is a little over protective and with Horace's explanation it makes the picture a little clearer, but she still is a bit over the top with it. lol And the children, Kaleb loves them to death, and is wonderful with them. I'd say he make a great father one day...ya think, oh and unfortunatly as Scott will soon find out, he's no match for Kaleb, and Kaleb isn't even trying hard. hahah PS: yes we will be taking soon...gotta finalize some things...right
  25. The aroma of fresh brewed Hawaiian coffee tickled Drew’s nose awakening him from his deep slumber. A smile of contentment creped upon his lips, he knew his husband all too well. Kona Hawaiian blend coffee was his favorite. He heaved a tired sigh combing his fingers through his hair and climbed out of bed. He hated sleeping alone and struggled with the urge to bring Tony back into their bed last night, but he needed to know that Drew was serious and what he did or was attempting to do was wro
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