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  1. Naptowngirl
    Anya, you are NOT! the only one who want's Cooper with Kyle. I literally "dream" of it happening....lol I love the lil bastard. I see Kyle's name in a chapter and get all giggly and break out in hives in a good way... I just love him. I must say I've loved Cooper and Kyle, have since the List. As I read this chapter I had a permanent smile on my face. I also have to admit their admission makes me scared and excited at the same time...I don't want to hold out any hope and my breath, well .....I do, but.....lol Kyle let Winston go and Cooper told Chase he thinks he still loves Kyle... "Think..." Really..... lol I want them together in the worst way.... Great chapter Jwolf
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    Chapter 5

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5

    so i think this wasn't the last i saw from Scott ans Helen... bring on the date because i want for Chase to feel again and for Kaleb to be happy !! Thanks <3 Thanks Nettie Poo. Glad you enjoyed it. The world of the Fitzgerald Ah yes...We get more of them. Helen is a total trip. It appears everyone sees Kaleb as the yound man he is except his mother. I agree Scott has a reason to be a little salty. I just hope he understands Chase's position here as well. This is something he wants to explore and someting he has no control over. He can't help how Kaleb makes him feel. Adam is a wonderful brother we get to see more of him and Kaleb in the upcoming chapters so stay tuned. again thanks for reading chica...Happy Saturday!
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    Chapter 4

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Kaleb is very different, but in a good way, as far as chase is concerned. Contrary is a good word. Chase never imagned he would be in a situation like this with a person like Kaleb. and yes Chase finds himself doing all sorts of things he "normally" wouldn't do and all Kaleb has to do is ask. Another thing we learn is don't try to figure Kaleb out it's a waste of time. One thing is for sure he never ceases to amaze Chase. I think Scott might be getting the boot...just saying lol
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    Chapter 5

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Exactly...Tony is being a hot head, and yes we can understand, but as you mentioned he is putting himself in danger in the process which has Drew worried. He knows his husband and thats the problem... glad you're still reading and enjoying it...love the comments. Kim
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    Chapter 3

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Thank you Phoenix, I think when you actually get to know the characters it makes the story that much more real, for me anyway. I start to care about them. I also like to pay attention to detail, while providing enough action to keep you coming back. Again thanks so much for reading and posting a review... Kim
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    Chapter 5

    Naptowngirl posted new chapter in Urban Knights

    “Damn it…It went straight to voicemail.” Drew sighed tossing the phone. “That means it’s either dead or he’s turned it off.” Mona stated picking up his phone from the foot of his bed and placing it on the table beside him. “My bet is it’s off.” She sat patiently with Drew who had been trying to reach Tony for over an hour, but to no avail; both now starting to worry. “I really hope he’s not doing anything stupid.” Drew said scratching nervously behind his left ear, a look of concern evident
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    Tony stepped inside the dark living room, home for the evening after getting kicked out of the hospital. He was instructed to get some rest and come back in the morning. He leaned against the door, closing it with his back while kicking off his shoes. He sighed exhaustedly as he tossed his keys on the table before vigorously rubbing his temples, trying to massage away the pounding inside his head. As he made his way toward the kitchen, he stopped by the mini bar scanning its contents. “Ahhh…" H
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    Me shaking my head....lol James is something else....he entertains me. Just when I think he can't get any worse he does...and for some freaky reason I love it... hides my head in shame... lol Poor Sam...do we get more of him and what about Adam, he has confessed his love for James and James is out in the shed with Sam... I tell ya... thanks for the update Mark totally digging this story.
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    Chapter 3

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3

    reading is good...lol glad you are enjoying the story Nettie Poo. I agree with you getting involved with Kaleb can be challenging if Chase allows it to be. At this point it appears Chase and Darla see Kaleb for who he is not his disabilities. oh and Helen is just getting started..just saying. Thanks my dear. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Kim
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    got me blushing over here. Such a wonderful review. I think Chase adores Kaleb too... I know I do...
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    Waves...nephylim. I'm thrilled you're still reading this story and enjoying it. Yes ole Scott was in raw form that day and again yes Chase needs a rule book whem it comes to dealing with Scott and especially Kaleb... Hell I think I want me a Kaleb too...he's too damn cute. again thanks for the review
  12. Naptowngirl
    Loved this chapter... 1st let me say I love the friendships here. Your writing style makes it so easy to read. It's like watching a movie. Now to the story. I totally feel for Cooper, it seems like he's trying to get it together and shit aka life keeps getting in the way..He's human after all so I also dig the Chase thing, though I agree with Chase and Spencer, Kyle is Cooper's first love. Kyle on the other hand I hope he sees that Cooper is his at this dinner which I can't wait to read about...lol Stil team Kyle don't know why but I just love his ass. I see his name in the chapters and get all happy...stupid I know so sue me...lol Devon well you know my stance on that...UGHHHHH...lol great chapter keep em coming. Kim
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    Chapter 2

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Love that you're back....lol and glad you are enjoying the story. What I dig here is, we have Chase and Kaleb who are totally different, but so much alike. You soon learn that Chase realizes that too. Kaleb...you can't help but fall in love with him..He just is sooooo... It will be fun to see where their relationship leads them...can't wait for you to read the next few chapters...oh and thank you...missed ya woman... we've got to PM wanna know what other stories you have read...I have a few if you're interested...
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    He sat there at a total loss. A loss of words and thought as he watched his boyfriend...well that is, if they were still boyfriends, at this point he wasn't sure. They were, however if he had any say in it, but it appeared he had no 'say so' at all. The ride back to the hotel was quiet. Kaleb sat with his earbuds in his ears, music so loud even Chase could hear it as he stared out the window. This time there was no caressing... no talking. Kaleb hadn’t spoken two words to him since he walk
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    Chapter 3

    Naptowngirl posted new chapter in Urban Knights

    Tony stood outside the waiting room door taking deep breaths as he tried to regain his composure. He felt nervous jitters coupled with excitement that Drew pulled through. He hadn’t seen the other officers since he admitted to the captain that he and Drew were married and he wasn’t sure how they would receive him. He looked to his friend Mona for encouragement and received a warm smile. “You ready?” She asked taking his hand into hers. “Yes….” He nodded taking another deep breath before open
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Nettie Poo...feels like home... Welcome I've missed you. Glad you like the first chapter...take your time and read...Another Sunday morning I hope. Scott is over confident and Chase is just being Chase...Keep your eyes on Kaleb you will learn about him as Chase does. He's different yes, but pure and honest so we shell see... Squeezeeeeeeee....lol
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    Hey, Charlie, you're right it's a totally different setting and feel, but I'm glad you are reading and enjoying both. Shades of Gray will be around for a while I'm having too much fun with Chase and Kaleb but Urban Knights was just sitting there with nothing to do so...lol I will be posting Shades tomorrow as scheduled so stay tuned... Kim
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    Thank you, Elezbed. The story is finished, it's only 7 chapters however so its short, but as soon as my beta gets them back to me I'll post them. So glad you are enjoying it. For me it's like sitting on pins and needles when I post a new story. you want the readers to like it so comments and reviews feed the writers soul... So again Danke. Kim
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    Thank you, Elezbed. The story is finished, it's only 7 chapters however so its short, but as soon as my beta gets them back to me I'll post them. So glad you are enjoying it. For me it's like sitting on pins and needles when I post a new story. you want the readers to like it so comments and reviews feed the writers soul... So again Danke. Kim
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    Hey, Phoenix, what I was referring to was the Marriage and the power of attorney. I had a friend of mine write a story where the couple were married and she was reminded by a reader that, that wasn't sooooo lol in my story they are married and it's recognized...lol like I said it's ficton and fun...and you're still reading WOOT!!! WOOT!!!
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    He needed to think quickly. Which way did they go? Damnit. He ran to the right and just as he turned the corner. BANG….. The sound of the gun going off ripped through Tony’s ears. So loud, it was deafening causing the birds nestled in the trees to take flight. The ear-splitting blast echoing through the air carried on for a good thirty seconds but to Tony it seemed like a lifetime…Then silence. Tony stood paralyzed. The vision playing out before him was more horrific than anything he had imagi
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks Phoenix, I truly hope you enjoy the rest of the story. and as for the omitting of Tony's name, that was my lame way of having the reader wonder who Drew actually was in the bed with,lol and the answer is revealed at the office that it was indeed Mr. Paris...so the fact that it confused you a little worked...I guess. lol either way, thank you so much for the review and I hope you keep reading... Kim
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl posted new chapter in Urban Knights

    “Uhuh…Uhuh.” He moaned with each thrust, going deeper and deeper being enveloped in the warm tightness of his lover. “Yeah…yeah…Oohhh, yeah, right there.” Drew murmured raising his hips to meet his lover’s, their sweaty bodies fitting together perfectly. “Faster, baby…go faster.” He pleaded gripping him around his waist, pressing their bodies so close together it was if they became one. Drew dug his fingers deeply into his skin, forcing him to go deeper… demanding to be fucked harder, just the
  24. Naptowngirl
    Two youngs officers in the city of Chicago go up against the urban city. their duty: To protect and serve and maybe fall in love in the process.
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    intune, thanks for much for the reviews. I'm glad you seem to be enjoying the story. Relationships take on all forms of dynamics so it will be interesting to see how thses two totally different individuls come together to form a solid relationship. You shouldn't have to wait too long, I like to post twice a week, but I'm in the middle of moving, UGH!!! Again thanks for reading and posting a review. Kim
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