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Lets Make Love Cont...II
Naptowngirl commented on Mark92's story chapter in Lets Make Love Cont...II
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It was so quiet he could hear a pin drop. The only sounds he heard as he walked down the corridor were the echoing of his shoes against the tiled floor with each cautious step he took. And, the smell, he hated the smell. It smelled sterile giving him the sick feeling he remembered so vividly, it smelled like death to him. The only memories he had of hospitals were never pleasant ones. They represented nothing positive to him; it was half filled with sick people waiting to die while the ot
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OMG.!!!!!!! , He would definitely loose cool points.... And I don't think I would ever get in his truck, I'd be too embarrassed someone I respect might see me...hahahahahha Not to mention I couldn't look at him with out bursting out in laughter...hehehe
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Thanks Jams, you know I really appreciate ALL your help with this story. Kaleb and Chase dispite their differences are good for each other. Kaleb feels helpless, he wants to help his boyfriend, with Kaleb anything is possible. Thanks for the kind words....
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Awwww.....that gives me the warm fuzzies. Truly glad you are enjoying the story, that's what it's all about. They will have their issues, what couple doesn't, but they come from good stock,and they seem to know what they want...so we'll see... I appriciate ya. Kim
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Happy Birthday Conner...
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“No…no, baby. I’m not saying you’re predictable.” Chase chuckled. “I’m just saying you usually have PB&J for lunch.” He declared while trying to stifle his laughter as he imagined the playful frown on Kaleb’s face. “Well….smarty pants we were out of jelly so I had to make tuna.” Kaleb retorted with attitude lacing his tone. “What are you having for lunch?” He asked. Chase could hear commotion in the background along with the whimper of a small child. “I’m meeting someone for….W
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Awww...thank you mattie. I didn't mean it dosen't matter, I just mean...well lol. Thanks for believing in the story even when I didn't. I'm having fun writing it. I think Chase and Kaleb are petty cool to. I get you don't dig Helen and Scott lol but they are fun to write too. Glad you are helping me with story, love ya back girl. MWAH!!!!
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Tay and Mitch are such a loving and supporting couple. Their teasing in the beginging had me laughing out loud. Mitch is crazy, but then again so is Tay. Can't wait to see how things turn out for Tom. He's going to need lots of support, but I'm not worried I know he'll get that from Kit, Tay and Mitchell...
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Okay so I must admit I saw this last night but was too sleepy to read it...It went well with my morning coffee...hehe That James is a mess. I read this whole chapter with a stupid ass grin on my face...great chapter Mark. Adam tickles me...wow. I can't wait to see how James turns him into a man
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Shit...shit...shit..... Off to have a personal moment. Hot Damn Mark....struggles to catch my breath...hehehe
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Nothing like good reading on dreary rainy day...glad I could help, also happy enjoyed their date too. Helen is a piece of work for sure, but it seems like Chase can handle her. I like Adam too, do worry he'll be back. Thanks for much for reading and posting a comment.Kim
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Unbelievably good is a great thing...I'm having a lot of fun writing it so glad to see you're enjoying...I got more coming
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Wow..... I guess I need to breathe before I pass out...that was hot... I might need some personal time after that....I really love Kit, has from the door. Tom is rubbing on me quicky... Kit wanted it to be romantic...how sweet and now he sees why Tay and his dad do it so much...lol cute.
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Fridays were always hectic for Chase, it was usually the day he used to wrap everything up and get ready to hit the court on Monday. Today was no exception. Not only was he feeling the pangs of distress, but it seemed everyone at the shelter was feeling it as well. It was the end of the month, so Darla was locked up in her office balancing books. She spent the whole day going over the month’s end inventory, and vouchers. Because she received a large amount of funding from the government, sh
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Great story, I love it...So glad to have my Tay back....I loved him from the door. I'm sad too, I did't like Tom so much at first but I do now...I don't want him to leave. Love Tay in action lets see what happens.
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...The More Things Change, the More They Stay the Same
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...The More Things Change, the More They Stay the Same
Great chapter. I see the conflict that Cooper is dealing with. though I must admit and after reading The List I more then sure of it..., I'm still Team Kyle ... Low Key, I think the love of Cooper's life is Kyle, but thats just me... Glad for the note, you know I was here on Friday...lol -
Awwwww Adam is a good big brother. And as a mom I get it too. but like you said, she needs to let up a bit, she's doing more harm then good. Conflicts *whistles* innocently...lol but for now lets enjoy the sweetness... again thank you so much.Kim
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I thought long and hard about this story. And you're right life and people can be curel. But as I mentioned here we have a strong couple, plus the compliment each other so well..So hopefully you will hang in there with them and go though the trails withe em..
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Kaleb is very complex. I think that's what attracts Chase to him aside from how beautiful he is in his eyes. Glad you picked up on Helen. As we will see a lot of the way Kaleb is, is because of her, which is way he needs a Chase in his life...lol
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again thank you. I love Chase too and Kaleb how can you not love him too...
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OMG....you're reading it...faints...lol thank you...I hope not to disapoint...Chase and Kaleb are very interesting to say the least..opposites attrack is what they say...
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bookjunky, I'm happy you found my lil story. I did a little research with the help of my friends. I found out like you mentioned people's handicaps are varied by degrees. Kaleb is one that goes against the grain. He has one, but as we learned by him speaking French he is very intelligent in some areas. He's different and will give Chase a run for his money. I honestly think they will be good for each other. We get to see more of Scott which as you know will have a hard time with this..Helen is mommy so she's not going anywhere, lets hope Chase can get through to her..Paul is like Helen. Adam is great. He loves his brother and wants him to be happy. Thanks for much for reading and the wonderful comment...Kim
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We will have more of Kaleb's family in the story, Helen is a piece of work. You have to wonder what her intentions are here and what happens when Chase picks Kaleb up for the Date...lol which should be interesting to say the least thanks for hanging in there with the story..love the comments. Kim
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Thank you ckprime, I'm truly glad you like the story. I agree, it is different. yes the odds are stacked up against them, but we have two strong willed people here so I'm sure they will put up a good fight.
