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I hear it’s to die for, so careful what you for.
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Nah, Will is going to become PM so Andrew was already looking to shift gears; besides, Andrew was invited to witness the trial run of a joint military capability between cuz partners, right? He was there by total coincidence. These are not the droids you’re looking for…
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Well let’s hope that’s not where they are going, let’s get Bravo hog tied in the DSV hold and get the crew returned so they can set up for the tow operation…of this beast of a tow pod with battle damage and a propeller that hopefully won’t cause any problems.
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OMG I was already thinking about Jack Ryan and the suspense embedded in this thrilling chapter. Great chapter and Andrew may even be awarded a limited term commission along with a Royal Navy Medal of highest distinction; not bad for a landlubber Canuck.
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Thank you for this Interlude, and welcome back! You done good 😝 having Lawon tell is story, especially the narrative of Teyshawn’s tragic loss of his friend, but that he kept focused to control what he could; not on misplaced revenge, that only serves the ones that got Tuck Tuck killed in the first place, locked or prisoner to 624 and the gang. So got you’ve be able to come back to this touching story of boys coming of age with the abnormally normal challenges that so many teens face; from parents and grandparents, schoolmates, society, and of course learning that even an honest income gets skimmed by the government; growing into adulthood is tough enough to navigate without those useless pressures where it seems all those people want to relive their life through you. 😢
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I don’t think Noah is necessarily bad, even as he was too drunk and too aggressive in his pursuit, it was somewhat understandable he thought Nicky was on the same page; wrongly of course, but no one had warned Nicky about the type party it really was. Noah is emotionally immature, with a good looking maturing body. He is normally pursued so society is somewhat guilty that he gets trained to think everyone just wants to have fun. It is obvious he is immature as he does like all the emotional talking, therefore the absence of calls/texts, but when the physical Nicky returns so does Noah; so not that he’s bad, but he needs to grow maturity or risks just going through life detached…then to become just a dirty old man.
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Well Jonah sure has mettle, but Nicky is working up a big stack of waffling. I thought with his resolution upon return from holiday, running like a gimpy hunchback of Notre Dame carrying his bags and running to…Jack, that he was final motion with a vector. Nope, upon entering his comfort zone he start showing signs of randomness; it’s microwave love; atomic level random rational…irrational I should say. Touché Jonah. Perhaps that was the news Noah needed to hear prior to Nicky coming to his senses, but the larger benefit was perhaps that Nicky needed to hear want was said more than Noah; Noah has not been good for him. Still infatuated with his initial lust, knowing that it wasn’t all right for him, but feeling a failure that he can’t keep his first relationship going. 😖
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It’s hard to know whether Gavin’s comments over meat choice is just accepting him into there teen world circle of sexual puns and innuendo, but Davin seemed to think it was either inappropriate or too forward in timing. Was it inappropriate to voice it now, or to test theories, or to test against…rumors from hometown rumors/tales; If Westley rumor mill…he may need a dose of jail bitch.
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Indeed, I’m surprised they didn’t ask her if she knew who did kill Ira or did she have anything to do with his murder. As professing her innocence from killing Ira herself, doesn’t clear her of hiring or knowing who did murder him. It almost puts the suspect target on the aunt. She wasn’t honest about her familiarity with Caleb as she declared not seeing him for years, yet she had been giving Caleb‘s mom updates to include seeing signs of abuse. So the aunt that helped get his mom out of town, with a new identity and new clothes and hair styles, also knew how hard she had tried to get Caleb away or to visit but feared for her life to risk it again. An aunt that knew all these details and had that close relationship with her niece and grand nephew, could’ve felt that with no police or social services action that it was time for desperate measures. Now the question is, is the aunt built like a lumberjack or is this a boyfriend or someone hired or another of Ira’s acquaintances inspired by the aunt's pleading encouragement? I think Novak is a champ. I think he noticed that Killian needed time to process how he felt about about Caleb and his mom. So in this chapter, we don’t gain the benefit of the discussion they usually have of the pros and cons derived from this interview with Caleb’s mom..
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The threat might bring better cognitive function to the PM that was again aligned too quickly and too easily with the JIC; allowing his take down of MI5…which is probably beyond even the PMs authority. This political attention and fallout could happen even more quickly than what they had hoped to do with quietly grabbing Templeton for discrete questioning. So a quick resolution that absolves MI5 and Templeton would be…politically advantageous.
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Pic-a-nic or nic-a-pic, Yogi does care
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Currently with no communications with the underwater terrorist, except via 171; so the cliffhangers linger. Bravo somewhat unhinged but already a ruthless, murdering, terrorist. Andrew and skeleton crew 300’ below the surface as we are to believe that to be holding; at a depth too far down to survive an exit even with hyperbaric chambers, untrained and without special equipment it’s just not looking possible. Gregory remains as asylum seeker, but the best investigative agent removed from duty, but accused of treason by the the manipulative JIC prick. I still have to wonder if he too is not with Sinclair’s confidence. Will and Canada House protecting Gregory and using delaying procedures to hope find Gregory cleared before the bastard idiot in joint command get exposed of at least improprieties with if aiding in terrorism. Ezra, oh Ezra, you’re in extreme danger and yet now you’re trying to aid a spy to escape; taking you from frying pan into the raging flames🔥. All Enrico’s co-conspirators will not hesitate to eliminate you. These and more in this suspenseful story, hopefully the quicken pace will start to show us more reason to hope for positive outcomes for all…the good guys. Well, Enrice…he made his own bed. But hopefully the Sinclair aligned agents throughout government and industry are all loaded on to the same sinking sink.
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Yogi and BooBoo as Bear and Cub, color me newly enlightened with shades from that rainbow 🌈. 😂 I may have to do some binge watching with this new prospective.
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Part 5: Cereal, Secrets, and Towels | Halfway To Him
Philippe commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 5: Cereal, Secrets, and Towels | Halfway To Him
Theo, man of few words spoken, Sculptured Adonis, leaves Troy broken. Pupils dilated, his heart racing, se yes wondering, Sculpture effortlessly moves, leaves no boundary. Muscles dance under his skin, one towel hanging low, Troy feels Theo’s body heat, eyes tracing down below. Without a word the sculpture is fluidly gone, Roommates warn Troy, find love beyond home. No filter or thought before the question utters, Is the Adonis straight? No, bi. Heart does flutter. Freshman Party, thoughts back on school, Will Theo join us, expect Troy to drool. 🤤 -
Part 4: New City, New Messes | Halfway To Him
Philippe commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 4: New City, New Messes | Halfway To Him
Human nature gives us the attraction instinct that kicks off the emotional connection…hopefully a healthy one. Likewise, that attraction is not the same for everyone, hence, the ole I like blonds, brunettes for me, no way give me a red head. Youthful attraction sometimes overwhelms logic that the attraction may not be reciprocated, or the big kicker, that person may an axe murderer. Human nature…is inhumane. 🤣 -
Mama Told Me Not to Come Three Dog Night Want some whiskey in your water? Sugar in your tea? What's all these crazy questions they're askin' me? This is the craziest party that could ever be Don't turn on the lights 'cause I don't wanna see Mama told me not to come Mama told me not to come That ain't the way to have fun, no (uh-uh) Open up the window, let some air into this room I think I'm almost chokin' from the smell of stale perfume And that cigarette you're smokin' 'bout scare me half to death Open up the window, sucker, let me catch my breath Mama told me not to come Mama told me not to come That ain't the way to have fun, son That ain't the way to have fun, son (oh, yeah!) The radio is blastin', someone's knockin' at the door I'm lookin' at my girlfriend, she's passed out on the floor I seen so many things I ain't never seen before Don't know what it is, I don't wanna see no more Mama told me not to come Mama told me not to come She said, ("That ain't the way to have fun, son") ("That ain't the way to have fun, no") Mama told me, mama told me Mama told me, told me, told me Mama told me Oh, yeah Mama told me, not to go... That ain't the way to have fun, no That ain't the way to have fun, son That ain't the way to have fun, no (look at you) That ain't the way to have fun, son Listen to mama, listen to me baby Mama told me, not to go... That ain't the way to have fun, no (yeah!) That ain't the way to have fun, son (somebody tell 'em) That ain't the way to have fun, no (mama) That ain't the way to have fun, son
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Then put some Sugar in your Tea.
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Meanwhile, Timmy is hospitalized with PTSD from having ti hang on to the good and dry end of the log. It’s possible he may never be the same….well we can certainly hope so! 😝
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Hopefully Dallas’ parents will insist they all get together in some form.
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That’ll work too.
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Fantastic thinking on Andrews part, and that has possibly stopped the senseless killing of the crew because of the mercenary greed. If somehow captured on the submarine they are beyond alleged criminals, guilty of many high crimes. I think it’s time for a quick military tribunal, in international Waters, to execute those criminals according to their crimes. Bravo’s pistol still has a few more rounds for questioning 🤨, after all, he thought it was the best motivation. But just shoot him in the leg, then troll him as shark food…with just the right speed to left the sharks enjoy snacking. They are worse than mercenary soldiers, they are ruthless terrorist playing with nukes.
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Just like my voice dictation on the iPhone…it’s types out one thing but as soon as I press send you see another version of text sent zip to a sent bubble; AI - automated idiocy, it’s just new buzz words for sell programming as intelligent. If learning software, imagine the fun of corrupting that software. Learning software assures no one will know what’s really expected from the software.
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Here you go Noah, and he likes outdoor stuff…so just the uninhibited wild thing you’re looking for.
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Oh my god. It is so heartwarming that she said that. It shows faith that Nicky and whom ever he chooses will be secure enough to pursue love over potential doctors, lawyers or some exchange prince …all the things many parents dream for their kids; but that’s like the lottery, your best guess is still unlikely to be the jackpot.
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Within the context of minimal sleep after him feeling responsible for Adam and Steve rift, then trying to help, Caleb, a guy he didn’t particularly like but was trying to help a newly ex’d, Asher, running into roadblocks from Caleb and so called friend or ex of Caleb…why is everyone acting like they don’t want the truth, or to help Caleb. Now even As(er is mad, but perhaps more at himself than Killian or Caleb. Ironically, if the person coming across the field was Asher then than would mean he lied about cheating. I think Asher omitted the truth about finding more interest in Caleb, but I don’t see Asher cheating on Killian. I think the cliffhanger may truly be a zinger, far from having been considered.
