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I imagine Todd would probably bow to any interest Nelson might suggest; even if it’s with his eyes being teased by teen play…voyeur Todd, boldly wanting A Man to go Where No Man has Gone Before. Perhaps he’s found his calling. 🤷‍♂️

Ironically ML’s misunderstanding that she can’t get more pregnant is more of her irrational hormonally teen logic. Women have indeed been known to ovulate, and then you have twins of different fathers yet apparently of different inception dates; most obvious is when the kids are of a different race. So even the possibility that Elaine thinks there is nothing more that Nelson can do as ML is already pregnant; it’s not sound logic and flawed by evidence otherwise; though more rare, DNA and/or more non-traditional interracial relations bring the fallacies forward to be FACT-CHECKED BY BABIES 👶.

ML wanted to share samples before getting the cream, while Nerdy Nelson gets his popsicle licked before he has the date…wow, that hormonally short-circuiting the young guys brain. Now the post coital bliss will have Nelson taking ML to him mama; ML is not the girl to take home to mama. 😆

What a good time to speak up and to show your appreciation. I too used to hardly ever make a comment myself, but I find comfort in the little community that interacts more freely. I find we commenters usually tend to like and comment on many of the same type stories; so it almost seems like a book club that mostly stays on topic but occasionally has life experiences begging to be shared. I’m glad to see you’re enjoying the stories that I have been enjoying too and hope to start seeing more comments of your thoughts on characters, and speculations and what’s fuel it or what’s to come; It can be exciting and refreshing to share with others as the authors tease and twist the storyline to end up where or how you didn’t quite expect. But many of the authors love the comments as it gives them feedback as to how their storylines come across, to give it the meaning they hoped to convey…alone with your appreciation. I hope you continue to enjoy the stories and comment more freely now; welcome.

ML becomes very skilled at dictation; and giving back to the community so freely; bless her heart.

The gloves…removed and tossed nearby; the insides and outsides should tie the DNAs of both boys, but an axe and gloves definitely shows premeditated murder; it’s not like Claude came upon Ed chopping wood, in medical gloves. 😆

To ML, the school yard is… full of broncos studs, to be ridden.

Ed is a very curious and interesting case. With a history of severe bullying, if our introduction to Claude is to be the benchmark, it’s no wonder that Ed. Outdoor reach a snapping point. I’m not sure if that rage is compartmentalized strictly as self defense against Claude, or if he has no conscience for humanity. Why the adults, parents, teachers, anyone witnessing abuse, could not see or did not take action is beyond me. Even the bus driver knew better but let the 14yo buffalo his way upon the bus in pursuit of his apparently favorite victim. All these people help fortify a chain of violent and abusive behavior from Claude; irregardless of Claude being a foster kid or from a group home or living with a single parent, parental/guardian oversight was habitually lacking. Supposing; even if Claude was already in a treatment program, with a psychiatrist, the sessions and treatment failed these boys. If known to be a risk of bodily harm to himself or others that should have been identified and reported so he could have been treated in a facility, away from doing such bodily harm. Instead, Claude had not only the monster growing within himself, but the one he cultivated within Ed; that one broke free to end the torturous threat.

Ahhh yes, it’s true love that Caleb had for Asher…the type love that says, we’ll get rid of him. Not exactly the definition of undying love. Caleb has been tortured since childhood. He hasn’t the values of a loving human; and may never understand what was robbed of him. Unfortunately the mind is not an organ that can be tested for malignancy, therefore, how could you ever trust Caleb in treatment when his objective would be to lie his way towards whatever objective he wanted at the moment? A sad testament to man, that Caleb should have ever been subjected to such nature. Though not of his making or choosing, the burden of responsibility now rests with him.

Yes, even though Asher has been less than civil many times with Killian, I hope he comes out unharmed and all the wiser. His hesitancey to trust Killian even as he has reasons to distrust Caleb is a sign of lingering resentment in my mind, yet he asks of Killian to investigate murder…one of the very things that he blames for tearing them apart; asking for Killian’s help not once but twice, yet still remaining belligerent towards Killian.

Though Kevin Bacon was frustrated that he couldn’t do some of the more challenging dance moves, he was actually able to do a fair part himself; he was known for be a pretty good dancer 🕺🏻 himself. However, we do need hero, and that hero already has followers migrating closer without understanding their call…as we now head to the mountain. Hopefully Mother gets another spell reversed when she goes for a hell Mary to deny anyone else from benefiting from Ray’s power to unlock the wellspring; if I can’t have it then nobody will type of thinking, how do you like Purple Power, bitch? Or perhaps she and Lord Valerie’s can both receive each other’s ricocheted spells to drain power; draining them both but canceling their powers mid-beam. Hey Bitch, let’s husk each other.

I have a feeling that your fingers are challenged when trying to capture all your thinking out loud. 😜

Getting caught out-of-hand in the washroom as a gay boy in hormonal lust just sucks, butt at least it wasn’t involving a straight guy catching the tell-tail signs of stall play.

Yes, the ups and downs of dorm life. Jonah speaking Jonese has Danny wondering where and how he fit in; with timidity he did the right thing and questioned Nicky for…The Rest of the Story. Unfortunately Noah doesn’t realize the pain of seeing him causes, as Nicky probably has visions of Noah’s withdrawal just before he experiences an emotional withdrawal into himself; so Noah, write a letter and quit try to get Nicky to help you feel better about yourself. Regardless Noah’s logic, he made choices without Nicky, so he needs to deal with them…without Nick. Jack gets his invitation that otherwise says a get out of jail free card, as the school with Nick would just be his parent’s designated holding cell. Poor Jack, patiently waiting for Nick to show more intimate affection…while he himself has been starved of any. As quiet and withdrawn as Jack is with others, Nicky’s mom steps right into the role of a trusted adult. Hmmm 🤔, Jack’s acceptance of her as part of Nicky seems to be grasping onto his forever family …the one he chooses. Between mom and especially Jack, we finally have Nick listening to his heart again; don’t worry Nicky, Jack is real, perhaps a few scrapes, scratches, and bruises, but very real. A home run chapter in Swing for the Fences, @LittleBuddhaTW.

That pros/cons list is probably driven by: 1) wanting to play baseball, his escape, and 2) to hopefully get a new scholarship or the old one confirmed for the new school. The rest is probably just a case of bad vs worst, as opposed to pros vs cons, at least in Joel’s mind. He thinks it’s inevitable that old will out him beyond family (thanks Westley Worm), and then spread like a virus (Jonny) carried in the wind.

He doesn’t have his old truck, so don’t become a horse thief…they’ll eat you out of of every worldly possession if you don’t have a ranch of your own.

If tested it may show up on the periodic table as one of the dense elements;

Burned once, shame on you, burned twice , shame on me. Joel has pretty good reason to not be trusting people with is secret. Building trust when his life long trust was broken is a tough thing. I can understand why and how he feels the way he does. I was betrayed by my college roommate. He didn’t even trying talking to me, but he outed me and my friend to his friends and our neighbors. That started car vandalism and vulgar writings with oil, vaseline, paint, etc. My friend and I found us a duplex apartment with more limited neighbor exposure. Friendship, maturity, and betrayal is a fickled thing at that age, especially back when it wasn’t talked about and definitely not accepted openly. But even today, friendships can take unexpected turns as perceptions are preconceived, and the friend has their own reasons for paranoia.

Well, Colt was impressed with Joel’s ability to protect himself…perhaps Trace was too. Celia was less impressed and wanted Joel to talk; but not even digging that peroxide Q-tip into the wound could bring out the frustrating truth. Joel seems to be hiding and dreading his truth, but Trace is giving him encouragement to come out with it; that’s a pretty big sign saying that Celia has your back…just trust her. This after fight chapter took me back to my high school days. It was the early 70s with riots at least weekly occasions at the time. Procedurally teachers closed and lock doors at the first signs, but that often left some of us locked out in the hallways before the rumble of the riots reached the actual physical presence of the riots; it was an older raise structure with good old wooden floor joist that carried resonant frequencies of stomping or running. If locked out and the riot come upon your location, best to back against the hall and defend your position as otherwise the mob would knock you down and kick you repeatedly. So the evening after a riot cordoned off many to be suspended (first flaw in thinking), I sat guiltily waiting for dad to finish his weekly report so I could inform him of the suspension and the instructions to not call us we’ll call you (second flaw in thinking)… So dad finished then finally asked what I wanted to tell him. Well…tap dance around…until he asked did I get hit? Huh 🤔? Only indirectly… Was the other person hurt? Dad, it was a fast paced riot, no one was standing around fighting one on one. Well did you see the guy that you bruised your knuckles on? Huh 🤔…hey it’s an expected teenage response. Well, I did remember one guy’s eyes getting bigger right after I connected and there was blood 🩸 around his left cheekbone and eyebrow. Hmmm 🤔, so you’re suspended (as parents had heard of these new policies for trying to control riots)? Yes, sir. Ok, want to travel with me for work next week? …yes. So I know the feeling of do you disclose freely or let them ask. How much do they already know and just want you to come clean? 😗 Meanwhile, Joel is trying to get back within his old head, dealing with distrust after being outed in the first step of his family's betrayal. Next weekend I hope Cody comes over, setting the stage for the more comfortable and loving big brother to show up too. Perhaps building the bridge of trust might make quicker progress.

What concerns me is as the PIs put it before; assume nothing, yet I don’t remember anyone giving positive evidence that Ira Cohen is dead. The axe murder and the satisfaction of the job done is more along the lines of Ira’s violent and abusive behavior. Likewise, with the blackmailing and intimidation, I wonder if it wasn’t just coincident opportunities to pay off debts Ira had accumulated himself. Could the body be that of a debt collector, and Ira intentionally mutilated the head/face to facilitate his own disappearance? Could it be that there is a witness to Ira leaving the property already aflame? Would this explain the fear from Caleb’s mother, aunt, even the neighbors? Ira is a very violent man, the words/thoughts of the axe murderer are troubling as the profile of Ira would be the same. Who would dare cross a violent man that no one would suspect, as he is dead now, or is he a living ghost hiding behind a corpse? If I’m not remembering correctly I apologize, but I’m not trying to pitch red herrings that didn’t come from this stream..

Oh yes, Asher reflects on Arsehair; concluding he was crappy…to Kills. Speaking of amusement parks, Aunt Judy seemed to enjoy the ride on the musical carousel as they each test the other to not taint nor guide the others responses; a little tedious at times, but sets the stage nicely that it’s only partially familiar, with majority being unknown. But note, even after a similar confession of the dream/nightmare/visions, Killian still didn’t confess and confer or axe Aunt Judy hers thoughts. I’m disappointed that this awkwardness in Killian understanding and accepting the idea of gifts and that Seth is real..ly visiting him, but what about the foresight and murder?? That teenage fixation on wrapping his head around what he sees as more immediate, while an unknown murderer could visit for nefarious purposes. Yet, he and Asher do agree now, that Caleb has a lot to explain and could still possibly be the murderer; though I still believe his aunt and mother may be more involved they ever let on. Oh goodness, Steve and Micah can enjoy the popcorn while Killian tries to communicate with the dead Mistress of the Manor; could she lead Killian to hidden treasures too? Keeping in mind, treasures are in the eye of the beholders.

Spontaneous road trips are so much fun…and Joshua has the beach house available for such spontanastity.

Ping, ping, ping,…as the gaydar scans the room and finds Kevin pinging in return.

Yes, and YES!