The first time I read this chapter, it wasn't much more than a sketch. You've turned it into so mcuh more. The pacing is great, and you've developed the characters well, giving us a glimpse into Michael Waters as he makes his own personal journey, discovering that love might actually trump fear, as he learns there's more to Asher than meets the eye. And Asher begins to understand the depth of a love he couldn't begin to hope for, from a very unlikely source.
Something I love about this story is that it portrays same-sex love as not so different. It's full of just as much doubt, fear, and self-consciousness as any. It also illustrates a point - to truly understand someone is to learn to love that person, heart and soul.
As always, , .
rusty