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mskdm20

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  1. "Radio Ga Ga" by Queen It is not my favorite song (my fav song is Kashmir), but this song is the only song that can literally make my legs turn to jelly. There is something about Freddie's voice. No words can describe it.
  2. I'm an Anne Rice fan. I will admit, I read the Twilight saga expecting something amazing to happen, like in Harry Potter. I was disappointed.
  3. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    I tried sending a review. Guess it didn't go through? Well, I just wanted to let you know that I am so sorry for what you went through. Your mother...I cannot find words to describe her. I am so glad you found someone who loves you. You deserve it. ~~Katrina/Adrian
  4. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    Heart-breaking story, Mark. I'm sorry you went through this. It was hard to read at times. Oh, btw I got an msn.
  5. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    Good start!
  6. I'm (patiently) waiting the next chapter. Damn, this will be hard. Poor...Adam. I hope James doesn't hurt him too much.
  7. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    No it's not complete. This is just a short story. As of right now, this is all I have.
  8. mskdm20

    Erich's Secret

    Erich is hiding a secret.
  9. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    Erich's Secret Erich curled up on her stomach in the eerily silent parking garage. She had been crying nonstop for the past five minutes, ever since her attacker kicked her in the stomach, pulled out several strands of her long, auburn hair, and then quickly ran off into the darkness. What followed before had to be the worst ten minutes of her life. It all happened after she left her husband's office party, after only being there for an hour. The party was suppose to la
  10. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed the first chapter.
  11. I really enjoyed your story. The characters were funny, and well-written. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
  12. bottom Never been on top
  13. Good story! Can't wait to read more. I'm with the others, it seems James is up to something.
  14. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    I love stories about karma. Good job! I enjoyed reading this.
  15. mskdm20

    Story

    I enjoyed reading this. You certainly have a talent for writing a mystery.
  16. This is a really good story, I'm glad I found it. I like how you did a lot of foreshadowing and the phoenix myth was amazing!
  17. Ah, I like the fire and mythology.
  18. I like the feather's ability to heal. Once again, you wrote a great chapter. I'm glad I discovered your story.
  19. I like what you have written so far. You've got me hooked.
  20. mskdm20

    Chapter 1

    I liked your story. I hope you plan on continuing it?
  21. 2 inches of solid ice on my driveway. School has been canceled for the third day in a row.
  22. Added chapter 2. It's kinda boring, but in this chapter we meet Peter's soon-to-be boyfriend.
  23. I would use old encyclopedias, or tax books.
  24. You're right! I'm bad at commas. I'll run through & fix everything. Yes, I love to keep the reader guessing! Don't worry, all of your questions will be answered.
  25. We learn more about the gun & the drinking problem in chapter 5.
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