Northern Dutch Guy

Thanks for your nice story and I like the way you deepen the story with each character

Hi Mark Glad you are back and continuing your story !

Do you really understand teh words being underrage ?

I can nnot see yuor pov. 13 years old is way out of gay clubbing !

hi I do not see what is wrong with my point of view. I think you id not not even considered my points. I also do not see why someone would be so negative about what I posted or even be negging my post ! Because that is happing also ! I'll give you this scenario, to give you a background of my point of view. Will is in the bar/club. Before he starts his pole dance he talks about who he is ....(that is what Mark wrote). That is a "wow" for some people. Then he starts pole dancing and some guys think: hey let me tape/film this or make pictures from him ! They also here that Stef is around, so they make pictures/films of the crowd. After this night the rumour spreads. Stef Schluter was here and his grandson did some amazing sexual pole dancing act. Some press people and/or enemies of Stef or Brad also hear from this. Now.... Some people start to get very exited. They realize the boy is 13 yo, they have pictures/film fragments that Will is stripping, having sexual contact with guys while on stage and also have pictures/film with Stef watching what is happening on stage ! Now what do you think can happen. ..... I would think some enemies of him or Brad are going to exploit/use this ! So in some paper there is this big item (with some pictures): Stef Schluter caught in a paedophile club while watching his 13 year old grandson having sex on stage ! This would be almost the same as: the Micro ploff man what is his name Bill Gay or something or the Appollo -orsomething man Steve JO watching his/their 13 year old granddaughter being fingered in whorehouse ... This would be world wide main news. This would be shattering the public image of Stef. This would would have an impact on all of Stef's family ! Now tell me again : am I still out of line /way out of target?

I'm not interested in the moral aspect of a not yet 14 year old boy going to a gay bar/strip club. But when you are the grandfather of a young boy and you see that 13 year old boy is going to strip there.... whore himself out.... We live in the time that things can be taped very easily. And that grandfather understands what might be the consequence of that for the future of the boy ! As an adult, the boy is his responsibility, he should have interfered. So, what I can not see is how Stef could have missed that. And the second point he missed is because it will also affect himself. He is there with the boy as the adult ! You see the paparazzi getting pictures of that and the headlines screaming: Well known and very rich granddad lets his under age grandson, a 13 year old boy, act as a stripper in a paedophile club ! Because I think that is the way the reaction might be ! This is not adult sex any more ! This is a paedophile act . And all people there should have realised what risks there are for them (especcially for us gays !) to let a very young boy do that act. So, I cannot see that Stef missed that point, because he is (in a way) responsible for a paedophile act ! So again, this is not about moral, it is about what Stef did not seem to have realised ! It may have serious (legal ?) consequences for him as well ! He stood by doing nothing to prevent that paedophile act. Okay, it is your story and you even might already have the next chapters going into this ..... Keep writing, even about controversial things

yes, for a lot of people kids changes their thinking and behaviour. Even as a donor it changed my life and vision of life permanently.

You'll find you're dad (or someone who is looking for you and who completes your picture of him). Reach out ...

Hi Mark if Will's caracter is like that of your own son it might work. But keep an open mind, so you do not become preocupied in your thinking about your son and who he is. "The dreams of the father are often projected on his children, and especially on his sons." But anyhow my guess is you will do well with him.

And does it really work?

Hi Mark Great story, Great and promising finish. You forgot something. Now tell us/me where to buy that electronic equipment !!!! H&M

Mark, congratulations. These CAP stories have been very good reading stuff for me, and especially 'Milennium' is a real hot and addictive story. I'm glad a lot of other people rated this story of yours and in my eyes you deserve this award without any doubt. Please don't let the CAP end here. NDG

Nice work Mark Yes, I think you're right. If they are killing or threatening your babies ..... You didn't only assemble your troops .... but are managing them very nicely in this battle. I know the story will end very soon, alas. I just hope you'll find the right way to continue with a story to keep us longing ad longing for the next chapter. NDG.

Yeah, that is so low, and despicable. Unfortunatly to many people ruthlessly use them.

Hi, I read some of your stories and liked them a lot. I'm not aware of the ins and outs of what happened and when, but whatever happened, I feel sad that (as you wrote "that there was a concerted effort to neg your rep a while back") some people seem to try to harm you personally by "negging" your stories. I certainly do not like this kind of bullying. Just smash them the way you are smashing Brad's opponents in Millenium ! Time to assemble your troops.:fire: Please keep writing, and and I hope you realise that a lot of people like your stories. H.

Hello Agaith, Thanks for your welcome. And yes I already found out that this is an excellent site for reading. And maybe it will inspire me to do more than "lurking" and posting in the forums. My handicap however is/will be that English is not my first language.

Tanks for your welcome. I will try to participate in the forums (if only to make at least 5 posts). And yes, I already discovered a Promising Dutch Author on this site. I just finished a story from AndrOgene, called "The house always wins". Assuming that he is a native Dutch guy and English is not his first language, I found it very well written. H.

hi, I stumbled on this forum and decided to leave a message. I have been reading stories on this site for quite a long time, but until yesterday didn't join as a member. So a lot of new things, forums etc. are now available to me and I will see where it leads to. What I can say that I have been enjoying lots of nice and good stories on this site and that the atmosphere here is very nice and supportive. I still have to fill my profile with some more information about what writers i like (Mark Arbour, Dom luka, Don Hanraty and many others) and so on. So, hi to all of you and thanks for the beautifull stories I read so far. H.