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Lisa!!! Thank you for your lovely comments I know it's been quite the delay, I had to go through and reread everything too. Glad you stuck with me! Addie will be at the party, unfortunately she won't be there for the anniversary of Lucca's mother's death. I know it's kind of a shame that she's missing it for a school visit, but with her level of academics don't be too surprised if she gets in Hmm... yeah Jeremy is a funny one. I'm sure there will be more on how he feels in the next chapter Glad you questioned that though, it has been a little curious how Jeremy feels about the whole thing. Yes... it is a cliffhanger so I'm working hard on the next chapter (almost done)
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Wow, neat Glad to hear from a Penn student! Thanks for commenting! Hmm... you may be onto something but I don't want to give anything away.
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Ooo thanks update page! So glad you made it to my story And, I'm glad you enjoyed the characters-- I happen to like them too. Thank you for commenting
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Wow- thanks so much! I feel bad for making everyone wait so long, I'll try to be quicker. I'm glad you enjoy the writing and characters, I try to make them close to life as possible. I think Lucca is pretty cute, too Thank you for commenting it was very nice to read!
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Glad you're excited to read more And thanks for taking the time to go reread, I feel honored! I will definitely finish this work, so no worries-- it just might take a while with my schedule. On the plus side, the next chapter should be coming soon. Thank you for commenting!
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Bad Jeremy... Your right, it'll probably be a bit messy, but lets hope for the best! I'm so glad you're still reading. Sorry for the long wait! I miss Sam too, no real appearance in this last chapter... sad. Don't worry, next chapter is all Sam Thank you for commenting I really appreciate it
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Cross your fingers!
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I agree that ending on a cliff hanger was kind of cruel, and I'm working on the next chapter much faster than I normally do because I feel bad about it. To me, it just didn't make much sense to continue on with Lucca's part of the conversation since there will be more interest on Sam's part of the story now. Anyways, I totally agree with you... I have a love/hate relationship when I read cliffhangers too. Glad you're still enjoying the story though! Thanks for the comment
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You're right.. Lucca's life is a mess. He's got a lot of things going on and by the time everything comes to a head let's hope he can handle it Thanks for commenting
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Chapter 7: The Trouble With That Is...
intune commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Trouble With That Is...
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Can't wait for the next chapter! There's a great relationship here and I'm excited to see where you take it. I wonder what Logan will think when he finds out about Ryan's inexperience.
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Logan really does seem like a good guy even if he doesn't want to admit it himself Poor Ryan though, hopefully Logan will be able to balance him out.
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Wonder what the prescription is for... and the relationship with Ryan's mom. Have to say, I'm glad to see a relationship starting up with Logan and Ryan
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Logan seems like he'll be a lot of fun. Even if he is a bit grumpy at least he seems honest.
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Really great dynamic you've set up I love the set up of these two characters together.
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Lolling his head back on the edge of the couch, Lucca couldn’t help the air of boredom that settled over him. Even if Sam’s visit was unexpected, it was certainly welcome. It was silly knowing how excited he’d been hearing Sam’s voice from the hall. He’d been in the middle of a game with Mr. Evans, but his joy at the sound must have been pretty transparent enough; all he got was a dismissive hand gesture without any of the normal teasing. The distraction couldn’t have come at a better time,
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I know! Glad you decided to add some reviews too So glad I made the favorites list Hope you like where it ends up.
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Thank you so much! Glad you're liking the story (and found your way back to it?)
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Thank you! I'm glad you found it too, and actually that's how I find a lot of the stories I end up reading... by looking at what other people are reading. Lucca is a little bit of a kicked puppy, I'd agree. He's had it tough- but I think he's making a comeback. About Matt... he might be different than people are expecting. But I don't want to give too much away Glad you found it a good read! Thanks for taking the time out to review, too
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Thank you! I'm glad you found it too, and actually that's how I find a lot of the stories I end up reading... by looking at what other people are reading. Lucca is a little bit of a kicked puppy, I'd agree. He's had it tough- but I think he's making a comeback. About Matt... he might be different than people are expecting. But I don't want to give too much away Glad you found it a good read! Thanks for taking the time out to review, too
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Happy Birthday Kim!!!
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Oh wow, I really like this story . I decided to give it a read and read it all in one go. I feel just as intrigued by Cameron as Tristan, I feel like he's super amusing but definitely hard to get a read on. You've definitely developed an interesting cast of characters , I can't wait to read more.
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Oooo the intrigue level only increases with this chapter. But how will he find Tommy in an unfamiliar area if even the police can't?
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Yay, new story I really like this first chapter, it seems like there's a lot of things going on here. I wonder why Sean left Tommy... might it have something to do with that doctor's diagnosis? Did Sean really cheat on Tommy?
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Very cute My initial guess was that Kaylee wrote the letter for Joshua because she was trying to set them up.
