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Nooooooooooooooooooo. I wanted them to all live together... somehow.
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Cassie!! Love the story so far, it's an interesting set of circumstances you've come up with. I have to say, I was surprised how well his father handled it. I bet it was his sister that turned him in, she seems evil
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Tyler who? I honestly want Dave to end up with Dean. He really seems to have a connection with the real Dave rather than Tyler who doesn't even know who that is. And Dean seems so tragic and hurt... I'm soooo rooting for him.
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USA Canada The Bahamas Jamaica France
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Sorry to hear about your mom I hope she gets into a room soon and that they can figure out what's wrong.
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Chapter 20 – Floating on Cloud Nine
intune commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 20 – Floating on Cloud Nine
Yay new chapter! It was kind of a tease though, huh ? You just made me want to find out what happens between Tyler and Davey even more. -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
intune commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Aw man, I really don't want Heath to hurt Alec's feelings. Alec seems really carefree and trusting, he might be crushed if he finds out. I feel something bad coming along... AND who was following them in the car? I bet it was crazy-obsessive girl. Either that or maybe someone from his company keeping an eye? Can't wait to see what's next! -
Thank you for the super long comment :D Glad you got so into the story Haha yeah I've been working on the next chapter, but it seems to take me a while. Glad you're liking where Lucca's life is going... there will be more on Matt in future chapters so maybe that will clear some things up. Poor Jeremy... he probably needs a hug right about now lol. Glad you're excited to read the next chapter... I better get to work
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Addie's the best! Haha a good friend, definitely. Glad my supply of chapters could keep your reading tonight Thanks for the reviews!!
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Yay Glad to hear you're liking the story. Matt and Lucca have a complicated relationship... that's for sure *sigh*. I guess you'll have to wait to see how things turn out
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I have quite the soft spot for them both too
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Lucca is a bit flighty when presented with problems. This one just happened to be a turning point. Thanks for the review Glad you decided to read it!
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I like the song
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Thanks for your comment. Yeah... Jeremy is getting to be kind of a pain but he deserves to be at this point. I think Sam and Lucca would be a good match too... though I guess we'll have to see what happens
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I am back hehe sorry for the long wait. I'm glad you're liking the story, and I think your tactic for shortening the wait between chapters is great I feel a little bad for Jeremy too, especially with what he went through in this chapter. He's going through kind of tough time, but he's a good kid Hmm about what Jeremy tells Sam, I guess we'll have to wait and see. I like sushi too, so that may have something to do with my characters liking it... haha. Thanks for your comment, it was really nice
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Thanks for reviewing It's nice to hear that the characters strike a chord with you! Hmmm.. I think Sam and Addie's patience has something to do with their feelings about Lucca. I'm not sure if that helps you, but maybe? Jeremy certainly is Germy in this chapter, but he is generally, I think, a good guy. Matt.. he is a mystery man lol. He'll be back. Thanks for taking the time to comment!
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I'm glad you're still enjoying the story I was really happy to see your thoughts on the chapter, so thanks for the review Sam has a lot of fans.... but I'm one too haha so I guess I'm not surprised. I think maybe because Sam is getting to know Lucca better he knows when it's okay to push for answers and when it's too much. Germ has a lot going on right now, but you'll see that in the next few chapters
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Yay, a review
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I'm pretty happy now But probably my favorite time was the month I spent abroad in France
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Sam knew what he’d heard was truthful, he’d seen it himself, but he had to ask again anyway, “You’re kidding, right?” “No, totally serious,” said Lucca, turning his head to shoot Sam a quick glance. He was driving, which was probably a good thing otherwise Sam would be harassing him with more than questions. “Why would I lie about that? It’s embarrassing.” Sam was dumbfounded. He desperately wanted to hug Lucca; he’d never received such a high compliment on his music before. ‘What’s the
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Chapter 1 At First Glance...
intune commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1 At First Glance...
oo different vibe than the last story Heath sounds like be might be a little shady.. guess I'll have to wait and see -
Ooo I was hoping that Scott would reemerge... but I had almost given up hope lol I hope Gibby's advice will be of some help to Shelby.
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I missed this post last week! But I'm kind of excited because now I can read two in a row At least now someone besides Gibby knows.
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Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
intune commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
So I guess my real question now is: Will Christian remember anything? I know you can't tell me... but I still wanna know -
Chapter 9: Surprise, Surprise
intune commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 9: Surprise, Surprise
I love Sam too, so I'm glad you like him! I know the day at the nursing home wasn't their real plan... but I thought it was a nice way to show their honest interactions. Let's just hope their dates go as well
