Arg, I hope Amanda gets what's coming to her because she's driving me nuts. I'm surprised she's willing to make more enemies when she could be under suspicion... but I guess that's what happens when you're pure evil. Wonder where Tanner 'ran' off to at the end of the chapter...
I like the first person perspective, it feels different from your other stuff (but I like both ) I do wish you continued this story, but it's nice as a one chapter piece too. Thanks for sharing
Great story I can't wait for the next chapter!! So.. were there really demons surrounding him the whole time or was his mom actually crazy? It does seem like he's surrounded by the supernatural.
Poor Gibby. But honestly, he knew who Tanner's friends were so it shouldn't be such a big surprise. I'm more curious about how Tanner painted such a likeness to Gibby in his room before they met.
Haha kinda surprisingly into the idea of a ghost love affair, but it still stinks that Tanner is dead. What's going to happen to Gibby if he gets too attached to him?
Oh, Tanner. He seems pretty sweet so far, but still sort of mysterious to me. I'm not really sure why Amanda's picking on Gibby other than she just seems awful. Hopefully Gibby will be able to make some actual friends.
I hope those girls didn't misdirect Gibby on purpose, that's mean I thought it was neat how the principal remembered everyones names... my high school was not like that at all lol.
i want to make a guess about the message before reading the next chapter! So: I think it's probably something about David's father. Either that or Christian's mom decided to give him another ring. I definitely feel like it's parent related (hope I'm right hehe)
You could check out Name of The Wind and The Wise Man's Fear by Patrick Rothfuss. Slow start, but after the first couple chapters it's amazing. Or, The Red Shirts by John Scalzi if you're a Star Trek fan.
Tag and Jimmy I feel like I'm paying more and more attention to them! I can't wait to see what happens there. I'm also curious about how (or if) Christian will get his memories back. It seems like there might be an ah-ha moment sometime soon.... maybe?