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You could try, but not everyone makes it through the hazing.
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I would, but it would definitely require a fair amount of the ol' whiskey. I was going to once, but we ended up leaving before my turn. It seems like fun, to be honest, and if I could dull my immediate embarrassment I doubt there would be much in the way of ill side effects : P
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I do not believe you have to be rude to be challenging. However, you have articulated yourself very well here, and quoted a brilliant man in perfect context. I believe that it is the responsibility of every person to constantly question convention, and to balance what any society or group deems as acceptable with carefully considered logic.
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I've come here for lack of point by lack of will made not for word or work work still with lack of word I'm number meant 0110 1011 No good for grace or lack of charm of lack words bend too far and points stretch strangely off
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A couple of poems about uncovering the frontier of the world wide web.
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I'm from Canada that means a lot of Don't and a lot more Cold I'm from an era of simple tasks and thoughtfully disregarded "why?" I'm from a lineage of warm monitors and stale soda crackers We of youth Canada Take our television seriously We know which psychic hotlines to trust and which tabloids bring us paradigm We, Youth Canada explorers of a new frontier wise in it's ways (don't bring any strange loops home to
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Not so different.
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There is a farm where people grow Cold as ash Hard as bone Sweetest are they before ripe Soft skin peeled by well worn knife Farm hand, seedless fruit made tool Picker picked Foil made Fool Grown by tree and raised in pen left-right, backward, down again On cellar shelves rest sleepless heads still preserves bitter spread stock still, stocks still work as, stock firmly held, stock are shot for stock Such pallid milk do pe
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a poem
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I plan on studying constantly to ace my finals, and perhaps getting some outdoor exercise if the day seems mild enough.
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Um, any nun wins. Period. If you've known the fear of Sunday school, you know that no one messes with the nuns.
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If I wasn't so poor, I'd be doing that same : P
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Hair style and makeup don't really effect someone's appearance so much that I'd say I couldn't be attracted to them, but I prefer a cleaner look. Also, I find it a turn off if they really are overly emotional or sensitive. I like well grounded, logical people.
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I loved your use of assonance. The synonyms of the ex- words seemed out of place, which actually works well enough with the feel of the poem, I'm just hoping you didn't put them there because you didn't think your readers would otherwise understand. : P
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I think the point here was not that anyone thinks them the picture of morality or health, but that no one is lobbying against their ability to be able to live this lifestyle.
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I had to get rid of my original post because I realized this wasn't the soapbox, and I'm ever-wary as a new member of overstepping my bounds : P Instead I will say that I whole heartedly agree, and leave out my pointed references and loudly exclaimed citations.
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I like the way you express your concepts, and the form of your poetry is interesting and refreshing. My one critique is that, while the use of repetition is an important and often under appreciated literary technique, and one I often enjoy, here I find it isn't discernibly tied to the feel or themes of the poem.
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Go Bach or go home. I much prefer most older music to current music. There are of course exceptions, I'm not so stuck in my ways that I can't appreciate good music in general. I just prefer a cleaner sound and properly hit notes, and while you can find that elsewhere, you can always find it in classical symphonies. That and mathematical brilliance.
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I think your teacher was probably talking about species in general. I can't really get into the why of this here because this isn't the soapbox, but if you'd like to discuss this you could pm me. This man sounds very interesting, and I hope to be as healthy as he is when(if) I get to be his age. That being said, that sort of quiet life does not appeal to me, so if that is what is necessary to live 100 years, I'll take 50 years of crazed excitement, world travel and stressing over how to make everyone else live to be 100. : P
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The Hypothetical Date with a Fictional Character question
Docile replied to Kavrik's topic in The Lounge
Stefan Schluter from the CAP series. He's witty, charming, and has a wonderful sense of fun. He may be a little old for me to settle down with, but for a single date he seems like the best choice. : ) -
You look bizarrely similar to a friend of mine. If you had blond hair and blue eyes you would be him. Rather scary. Oh, that's a compliment by the way : P
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um, I accidentally replied instead of editing my post. If someone could remove this or PM me telling me how to myself that would be appreciated : P
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Supper, Love (or, 'Tablecloth blues') To dine with me You'd face off with the Spaghetti (slow spread of stain on ruined cloth) you'd stare down the bread-sticks (gently pulled apart, gradually consumed) you'd even use your cutlery proper (salad fork?
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A delicious meal.
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I am not a lover of Jams: too sweet a pressure on delicate toast. Rip their way along the Bread. (soft bread; toast unfinished) Rough, callous hands pull down the spread. greedy, hungry hands. They must have their meal. The knife, now whetted, pulls loose. It drips a heavy crimson (age old favorite). They sit, name-place set and they unhinge, roughly shove in, devour their meal (crimson remains running down smiling faces). Their bread gone - all gon
