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I really enjoyed this story. Very well told. I hope to read more from you!

Wow, you are the plot master! Amazing storyline here! I like everything about it, especially the way it is told. Shay is discovering this new world exactly as we are, and seeing it through the perspective of an overly mature teenage boy is a great POV. I feel bad for him though, it doesn't sound like he is going to find what he is looking for in Palatus. I am also very intrigued by Mira. Strange enough that he morphed forms from a predator to a human boy, but with all those physical abilities, it makes me wonder if that was something that he had before he got changed into a predator (what I am assuming happened, I could be totally wrong) or if it is remaining instincts that his predator nature held. Very interesting, and I am fascinated. Can't wait to read the remaining chapters, I am definitely hooked. Thanks for sharing!

Oh my. I have people lining up to spank Chad, he better watch out! Next chapter is up, and it marks the end of Part 2. Should I write a Part 3? Let me know!

There is a lot of misery. This isn't the kind of situation where there is an easy out. Thanks for the review.

Cassie doesn't like happy endings. Unfortunately for her, most of her readers do. So there is hope Yeah, Tibial deserves his fair share of misery I guess. A lot of people are hurting here, but who do you think is really at fault? Thanks for the review.

I had always had mixed reactions from readers regarding Mia. So many want to hate Mia, but they just can't do it. Chad however... Thanks for the review.

I'm glad that somebody liked the angst! Thanks for reviewing!

Tibial sat again, on the hard plastic of the train seat, watching the scenery passing by. Yesterday it had been interesting, to watch the mountains and rolling hills fade into distant smudges in the background, to see nothing for miles except clouds, trees and large bodies of water. Now, even that was gone, and it was all blue horizon sky, chasing the glittering ribbons of dark asphalt under the heat of the late summer sun. It was so flat and open. Different from what he was used to but not

And then I'm going to crash your rock and roll party, since I wasn't invited

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MIKE!!!

Seems like everyone liked Chapter 10. Thanks Daddydavek and lilansui for commenting with your thoughts Chapter 11 is up. My beta wanted to give Chad a spanking after reading this chapter. Do you feel the same?

Or you may be right Thanks for reviewing!

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thought it was exciting! I don't think their situation will be as fun as it sounds though! Thanks for reviewing, enjoy the next chapter!

Oh yes I don't think it'll work out very well, do you? Thanks for reviewing.

I have never seen "Fievel Goes West". But I looked it up and it sounds complicated. So yes, Mia is a outlaw and stuck with them. It's gonna make things really interesting. *hands KC a gold star*

Tibial sat on the bed in the hotel room. He peeled the wig off his sticky, sweaty scalp, sighing with relief and hurling it across the room with a grim satisfaction. Mia was in the shower. Chad was outside, smoking cigarette after cigarette, like he was trying to drown himself in a cloud of smoke. Tibial flopped down on his stomach, feeling the scratch of the comforter against his cheek. He was exhausted. Mia came out of the bathroom several minutes later, dressed with her damp hair clinging to

I don't even know what to do anymore. I work in a job. And I want out. I can't take the stress. My job used to be fun, and the stress used to be much less, but it's not like that anymore. It's been taking a toll on me and I've been searching for other job opportunities for the past year. And my coworker, who does the same job I do, who I trained, and has been in the company for less than a year, just gave her notice. (She promised to tell me if she was planning on doing this, but that's what I get for expecting a selfish immature brat to keep her word). This makes my decision of whether or not to take a new job that much harder. Her leaving means that if I also give notice, I will be getting more resistance from my boss, more guilt from my boss and that he will possibly take litigation against me if he thinks that my taking a new job violates the terms of my contract. (It is unlikely that he will be successful, but having to deal with that on top of buying a house and starting a new job is going to be hell). The worse part of all, is that it puts my boss is a really really bad predicament. And he is going to use that against me as emotional manipulation and it's going to work, because that is where I am vulnerable. There is no love lost between us, but I genuinely have no malice behind my decision and I honestly don't want to hurt him or the business. But if I leave on the heels of my coworker, it is going to be a huge blow to both. And while I had everything planned to make my leaving as painless as possible, she has ruined everything. And I just don't know what to do. And I'm so sick of dealing with this bs. Sorry, but I seriously needed to vent. I'm stuck in a crappy predicament and I see no easy way out. And I'm so damn tired of dealing with things the hard way.

Well...having given answers like those myself, I guess I could just learn to accept that....or not *starts plotting an ambush*

So....when exactly do we find out what Shawn and Colin were arguing about?

I loved this chapter. I'm so curious about Shawn and Colin. They sure do like to argue! Looks like things are heating up with a sexy romp in the hotel room! I like the way Shawn's more aggressive nature plays against Jordan's natural cautiousness. It works really well together. I also like seeing how Jordan has finally hit his stride. He seemed so clumsy and awkward when he was first meeting Shawn, but now he is more confident and it's a great transformation! Looking forward to seeing where you will be taking us!

Next chapter of Reach is up. Sorry it is so late...I suck

Thanks for reviewing! It's not too hard to understand Tibial's anger towards Chad, I would want to smack him myself if I was in the same situation. And don't worry, I don't want to lose you, I love hearing what readers think. I can't promise what kind of ending though Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Thank you for giving Reach a chance! I am so glad you are enjoying it, even if it isn't your normal type of story Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy!

Tibial is very brave at times, and crazy in love. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and I hope this next chapter answers some more of your questions. Thank you for the review!