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I won't spoil anything here, but I will say the sigma thread remains an important part of the story. The lines, the families, everything was drawn from personal experience, to give you sense of how important that aspect of Greek life can be. As for Ben... I couldn't resist one more roll around the hay with him. I think Q said it : it's easier to kick the can the second time...

Glad you still have a little faith.... Also, if you've read any of the other reviews, i should probably reading multiple chapters of this story at one time can make thngs... Hard on oneself. Keep enjoying.

I think you've got it right on a number of levels. One thing I loved about writing this story was getting to put myself back in the shoes of a college freshman. I thought I knew what love was, nothing was ever my fault, etc... You nailed it all. For me, that's part of the fun and journey. I hope you enjoy the twits yet to come...

Hey there! So glad your reading the book. It looks like you're fully investing into these characters! There's a ton more to come, and I look forward to following your responses

Hey Lisa! Loved the review. I think this was your longest one, and I loved every single moment of it (I do look forward to seeing your response after each chapter)... I will say, Pete only went a couple of days without texting Corbin. Classes started on Thursday, and the did talk Thursday or Friday. Have no worries, the signals come back loud and clear during Saturday's tailgate. We'll learn more about Mike slowly as the chapters unfold... he's a really complex character, and I'm enjoying getting to flesh him out. It's helping me understand the guy he's based on (and so many guys like him, I guess...). More on Lee in the next chapter too. I won't tease anything, but let's just say if you're sour on him now... wait until you see what Corbin hears about him... That's all Until next week.

Hey caedus! I'm so glad you're following the story. I hope you're enjoying the journeyso far. I think you touched on something that's been a cornerstone of my work up to this point, and it's that people and characters are full of contradiction. We want or profess one thing, but for whatever reasons, we behave in a different manner. Corbin is no exception and I think that makes thngs interesting. The relationship with the cadet is fleshed out in its time, and I hope you continue to find it intriguing

Hey Carrie! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It is sort of fun, isn't it? Mike the Cadet is in the story for the long haul, so expect to learn even more about that 'relationship'. I will say, you're spot on in your intuition... Corbin can't help himself when it comes to him. More on Lee next week too... see you then

Thanks so much! Glad you liked the chapter. IT was definitely a challenging one for me, mostly because of the different changing relationships. More to come very soon...

I woke up the next morning with a sense of guilt about what I had done to Pete the night before. I kept replaying what I’d said to him over and over in my head, trying to figure out how I’d become that kind of guy. What had drawn me to make that sort of decision? “Actually, Corb, that sounds about right up your alley,” Hutch said after I told them what I’d done, breaking the silence. The guys were gathered in my room, messing with a healthier looking Mister. I could tell all of them, including

Thanks for the awesome review! I live reading your take on things, big and little. The chorus thing and the three way thing actually happened! Maybe I'll go into more detail about that at some point you're spot on about what Corbin needs to do.... But as you know with my characters, they don't always do the sensible thing. I think ts alright to throw in sme cur balls, as long as they learn from the mistakes... More n what Corbin decides to do soon thanks again

Wow Conner. Thanks so much for the compliment. I'm enjoying taking my time with this story and really focusing on each event. They all have significance. Hopefully no one gets impatient a resolution... More to come soon

Haha. I laughed out loud at this comment. Poor Tink. He'll never live it down. I'm glad you're liking the story. Sorry the relationship is frustrating, but following true to form. More developments very very soon!

Glad you liked te chapter. Trust me, the drinking doesn't go anywhere. It slows down when classes start, so we'll see if it brings them closer together. Until then

I feel like I'm learning so much about UD in the process of writing ths coke was huge in certain circles around my school. In fact there was a huge bust senior year... We might get there if the story warrants it glad you're enjoying.

Wow. High praise. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it... Corbin does have his botchy side, and comes out in spades in chapter five... Can't wait to see what you think.

How,sweet of you. Really.

By the time I reached my junior year at OD, I had my fair share of moments. Great moments, sexy moments, sad moments, dramatic moments… moments that have moved me- shaped me- forever. After spending all day with Peter, I was positive I could file our last twelve hours together under best moments ever. For the first time in a couple of days, we didn’t sleep together. After playing with Mister until midnight, he declared that he was going to walk home and crash.

Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you're enjoying this tale I've never heard te back and froth called a dance... Loooove that description. More dancing to come.

Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! I thought the same thing about cats... Mine took a couple days to get it, but she did, thankfully. You're spot on about Corbin not wanting to feel rejected. And I think it only gets worse with mre buildup and time. Until next week

Situations like this are always pretty awkward, aren't they? I'm finding that a lot f people have relatable experiences. I'm glad you're still enjoying the stru

Jammi! Thanks for the review! It has only been a few days, but we're going to start covering more time with each chapter. Glad you enjoyed the chapter?

Hey Conner! Good to hear from you! I always love your reviews. The ending of this chapter was supposed to set up part of Corbin's psyche/pattern with these guys. We'll meet the cadet soon... Glad you enjoyed the Kitten bit. Expect mister to factor in for a while

hey rebel! Thanks for another solid review. One of the characteristics of my work has always been main characters who may make questionable decisions, but they're always believable and true to character. It's those kind of flaws than t I enjoy dissecting. Expect to see a little more of that from corvBon, although not for long I'm thinking. Thanks again!

There’s a certain paranoia that comes with waking up out of a blackout. ‘Where the fuck am I?’ is usually the first thought to cross your mind. Sometimes you’re safely tucked away in your bed. If your friends are assholes, as mine proved to be on Monday morning, you wake up in the bed of a British man. And you have no clue how you got there. At that point, the questions come racing through much faster than the answers. Am I still drunk? How did

I loved the story. As usual, you waste no words. Everything was meticulously calculated. Every word was measured for it's importance. The only problem I had was with some of the passages that Colin supposedly wrote to his brother. In my mind, I don't imagine him writing such long winded, well detailed sentences on a scratch paper. Other than that, I thought it was a good short little ditty.