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Hey! Glad the rain is bringing you back! Just in time for a new chapter too. Can't wait to see what you think moving forward.
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The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Hey GeR! Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're in it with Corbin. That is the point. Just like cooper, it's his journey, and there are going to be ups and downs. Until next time! Thanks again. -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Thanks so much for the review, Lisa! Solid as usual. I think you're right about some thing and definitely right about other things. Pete's whole background is going to shed new light on certain aspects of his life. Of course we're no where near getting the full story, but I plan on dropping tidbits here and there. And you're spot on about Dakota. The girl that she's based on actually is one of my good friends. I see her every time I go to the east coast and whenever she's in Dallas, she gives me a shout (last time I didnt know she was in town until I accidently stalked her facebook and made her come visit me at work Until next time, happy new year! -
I'm yet to find a school in which Kappa's aren't the creme de la creme. I ran into a herd of them when I was partying in Las Vegas (Very random!) And you could tell that they were used to being the bigshots on their campus. It's a good thing I still new the secret handshake.
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Hey! So, I'm definitely quite honored that you're reading my story. And I appreciate the feedback. I'm glad you're enjoying the beginning. It's quite the journey, so strap in
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The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Hey! Thanks Charlie. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. There is a lot more to come! And I'm proud to hear the word realistic. Thanks for the review and the support! More soon. -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Thanks for the review! And thanks for thinking about this story whenever you saw a guy clearly getting ready for a bender. That's sort of flattering in a way. I'm glad you think Corbin is keeping it together here. You know I like my characters to show shades of growth. Until next time. -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Hey thanks for the review! And thanks for making an awesome point. That's actually something I was reminded of while writing this chapter because I had to go back and calculate how long it's been... less than a month, and our boy is this far in. I will say, the title is the English Year, so we have plenty of time to go. Thanks again... -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Hey! THanks so much for such an awesome and thorough review. I totally agree with you on Dakota. I think she could clearly see the trap that Corbin was falling in and felt compelled to warn him. I agree that Pete definitely has his reasons for caution, and that's one of the things that Corbin has to take into consideration in the coming chapters. Maybe I'll jumpstart our study of Pete here pretty soon, but a lot is revealed when we meet his sister. Until then Thanks again. -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Conner! THanks for the review. I'll start with the ending. A bit of a downer, but trust me, things don't stay down for very long. These two are in each other's lives, so there's really no escaping it. As for Pete's background, one of the pivotal moments comes when his sister comes to visit. Of course, that's a few chapters down the line, but I'll be sure to drop some tidbits about his upbringing until we get there. Thanks again! -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Thanks for following the story And thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. -
The Second Cut is the Deepest
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Hey Mark! I'm glad you're enjoying the story-- even if the suspense is hurting your eyes. Trust me, there are a lot of things that happen in the coming chapters. Expect some big changes in Corbin's mindset. Until then -
I woke up with a headache unlike any other I’d faced that year. I’m not sure if it was the mixture of different alcohols, or if we’d just had that much to drink, but my hangover on Saturday morning was like the aftershock of a class five storm. I sat up and immediately felt nauseous. Without even thinking, I sprang out of my bed, ran to the restroom down the hall, and made it into a stall just in time to throw up into the toilet. After puking until tears came out of my eyes, and promising the
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Hey GeR. Thanks so much for an awesome review. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. The reference is a small one off, something for the fans of those two stories, I guess you'd say. Since the List was loosely based on my freshman year and The English Year is strictly based on my junior year, I figured a cross-reference wouldn't hurt. Glad you're enjoying the story!
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Thanks for the review! You're pretty much right on the nose with your review... either something big happens in the next couple of chapters OR there's a major meltdown... I can't tell you which, but hopefully you'll enjoy it Thanks again.
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Hey Lisa! You know I loooove your reviews. This one did not disappoint. You get a little more on the backstory with PEte and Dakota in the next chapter. You also get an insight on the fight... du nu nu. Also, I'm a little surprised you like Dakota, but I'll take it. She's a sweet girl in real life. Until next time
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haha. Wouldn't you like to know? Thanks for the review. I look forward to seeing what you think as the series progresses.
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Wow! Thanks so much for the plug It means a lot.
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Haha! Thanks for the awesome review. I will say, I don't foresee Corbin running out of patience any time soon, but his next couple of decisions may surprise you a little. More to come
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Thanks for the review All is well, just super busy. Not as much 'me time' for me this time of year. But the next chapter should be out soon. Glad you enjoyed
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thanks so much, man! Scotty Doesn't Know was THE party song that year. Glad you enjoyed it
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Hurricane Dakota “And you must be…” “Dakota,” she answered, offering a hand. I was already pretty tipsy by the time the tall auburn haired girl walked into my house with Peter in tow. She was striking to say the least. She couldn’t have been more than an inch shorter than the Brit, making her approximately 5’11. Her face was long and angular, and most importantly not unattractive. Her hair was cut in stylish, asymmetric bob. She carried herself with the confidence of a girl who was once heavys
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Chapter 15: Follow That Nowhere Man
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 15: Follow That Nowhere Man
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Hey Andy! Thanks so much for the review. Sorry for the long wait in chapters, this time of the year is always difficult for me to balance work/life. But expect more installments soon. Also, I'm curious who you think the Brit might be based on... writing as we speak
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Hey Lisa! Thanks for the awesome review! I love reading your responses I think you're right, Corbin is psyching himself out. Bu I think te frustration comes from the mixed messages pete sends out. Expect Dakota to get the ball rolling, but she's not a miracle worker as for lee... Well that story isn't quite ready to uncomplicate just yet... Enjoy the truce while it lasts.
