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Glad you like it. Mister was always a good secret weapon.

Thanks for the major compliment

Hey Timothy! Thanks so much for the review. Well thought out and well written, and I appreciate your analysis. I've always gravitated my work towards the flawed main character, mostly because that's what I think most people can relate to most. No one's makes the right choice all the time, and if they did, some of these stories would be ultra dull. With that said, I'm glad I can insert enough good in Corbin that you're still willing to root for him. As for the alcohol consumption, unfortunately, I'm not trying to make a parable of any kind, but instead just giving you a slice of reality at an American college. drinking that heavily was part of the culture where I went. You'll start to see some real consequences to their habits, but until then. Thanks again for the note!

Wow. Thank you so much. I appreciate the compliment.

Thanks so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

I read that letter a couple of weeks ago, and I died! Expect Corbin to have some similar outbursts as we get to the heat of rush. I've started working on new chapters, so look back in a week or so for an update. Thanks again to everyone for their patience!

Thanks so much for the review! Glad you're enjoying the story.

Hey folks! I just wanted to send an update. I'm still working on the job search, but I'm hoping to have an update chapter very soon. Check back next week?

Hey semaj! I'm working on it, buddy. Hang in there!

I never got to respond to this! Thanks for an awesome review. I always enjoy your reaction. Your right. Part of falling n love s getting hurt. It's just the nature f the game.

I never got to respond to this! Thanks for an awesome review. I always enjoy your reaction. Your right. Part of falling n love s getting hurt. It's just the nature f the game.

This pick is perfection.

Two good points. I will say I disagree with you though... The blind item is totally in Corbin's character(if that's the line you're referring to...) I will say he does need a good reminder that there are rules and consequences, but he's definitely the kind of guy who would write hat column (I mean, he's the kind of guy writing a true story about his first true love, so...) and expect more heart to hearts from those two... Maybe one of them will stick.

Thanks for another awesome review! They really are a lot of fun to read. To say that he blind item divided a campus wouldn't be a far cry from the truth. It's funny because the reactions here are soooo similar. Anyway, watch out for how Corbin navigates this bit of trouble. I think you'll enjoy it. As for the ad class, you're definitely right! The time apart is a big theme of the second half of the story. Thanks again, and no typos at all! Did your son win his match?

Thanks for such a fun and awesome review! Unfortunately for our boy, he starts some and there is some. I hope you're entertained by how he handles it... I'm glad you liked the chapter... More Corbin and Pete in the next chapter, but its two chapters down before anything with them changes... Just a teaser until next week!

Thanks for the review. I agree with you on most everything, and expect to see Corbin sorting things out in the next couple of additions. Can't wait to see what you think moving forward!

Thanks sir.

Oh don't be too shocked. I think I mentioned that the year before Corbin outed two professors for having an affair. The paper also runs something in the spring that makes Corbin's article look like child's play... Can't wait until then!

Yep, Corbin is finally in the hot sat! I can't wait to publish his reaction. Also, lee... So much more to come from him. Can't wait!

Hey folks! The next chapter is out. Sorry it was a little late, but I had to focus on the job search. Anyway, here it is! Please leave your thoughts and comments. Thanks so much!

I woke up the next morning with the sense that everyone would be talking about Lee and me. I was paranoid, worried, and ashamed. But in a sense, I felt better. There was a relief that came with fucking Lee that at the time was hard for me to explain. I think I had pent up so much frustration for Mike and Pete that getting it out all over Lee’s face took a weight off of me. Whatever the reason, there was a spring in my step when I went downstairs for pre-tailgate

Hey folks! Thank you so much for the awesome comments and great constructive feedback. I learned a great deal writing this story, and I'm glad I had the chance to share it with all of you.

Thanks o much! I really do appreciate it

Thanks o much! I really do appreciate it

Thanks o much! I really do appreciate it