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The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
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The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
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The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
It gets explained in short order why it’s important for Corbin to stay. It’s more complicated than just loyalty. And in a way, I think Corbin assumes he deserves some backlash for his actions. Not at the hands of Dom, but some. And he’s already laying the groundwork to get back at Hutch. They still have another year of getting under each other’s skin, but at the end of any day, enemies or not, they are still brothers. Cain and Able? -
The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Time will tell of course. This is the deepest ish Corbin has found himself in so we’ll see how he responds and what that means for his relationship. -
I stayed in my room for what felt like a million years. I was paralyzed at first, unable to decide exactly how to proceed. I didn’t know what to do, and in all honesty, I had no idea how I would fight these charges. They wanted me gone. They thought I had done something so bad with that article that I had embarrassed the fraternity. Did they think I knew about the scandal because I was involved? Did they somehow know about my deal with Chip? Did they have evidence that I had helped write the ent
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Thanks for this comment. And it seems to me like the stakes for Corbin keep getting higher and higher. They’ve tried him before but now they are are physically trying him. Glad you have confidence in him. Like, love, or hate I’d say watching him work through things, and as you said as readers knowing he’s capable of feeling pain, is interesting to me.
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Thank you for saying this. I appreciate it and all the support. More to come soon.
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I’m not sure I fully understand the comment. But you seem fascinated with the story wrapping up and doing so quickly. As a ‘slice of life’ story, there’s still plenty left to dive into, and so many side stories that could have been included. This is the track we’re taking, but if we’re honest the story can ‘end’ at anytime. Or go on as long as I want it to. Many readers have gotten on and off the train at different times and that’s okay.
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There’s a scene in the next chapter that involves Corbin and his brothers. I don’t want to spoil anything, but there are multiple opinions on what Corbin did and how ‘severe’ his punishment should be. And yea the different perspectives on how big this trial is. Corbin’s baseline is drama, so expect fireworks.
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What someone has brought up before is that Corbin may not be the most reliable narrator, and in that I mean he may perceive this trial as WAY bigger than some of the other guys in the house. But he’s our narrator so we get to live all the drama of the trial that Corbin perceives.
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Okay, you bring up some pretty solid points. But I have to ask what you think Corbin would have done if the shoe were on the other foot? Would he let Hutch get away with something’? I think ultimately the guys see a chance to shoot the king and not miss, and they’re taking it. And yeah, formal chapter was a lot of pomp and circumstance, I’m not gonna lie
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Thanks. Yeah they’re never fun to go through, but hopefully I can’t write about it in a solid way. More to come.
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Hearing Pete say those words gave me the warmest feeling I’d ever felt. For that moment, his words eclipsed what Mike had said just the day before. You’re safe with me killer were amazing words to hear from Mike. Knowing he intended to make me his boyfriend in a few short weeks. That meant something. It meant a ton. However, there was something about Pete holding me, squeezing me, and telling me we were on this journey together that resonated even more. Our relationship had bee
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Definitely writing this from Corbin’s perspective. There’s a ton of truth to the story, some embellishments, and some dramatic flairs of course.
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Lee over Nick? I think in another world Corbin would have settled for Nick and called it a boring but stable day.
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Keep in mind this is the English Year, not years. And it’s been years since the events of this story unfolded. I’m sure I can find a story within the years since 🙂
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Love this comment and thank you so much! There are a lot of answers coming up soon. Pete allows himself to get involved, but like one poster said Mike helped the plans go through. Does that change things? I hope you all love what’s coming!
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I don’t think you know how close to the truth you are. When it comes to Mike and Pete at this point we are down to the margins. I’ve gotten questions and assumptions based on the title, but this story tends to zig when it’s assumed to zag. Time will tell.
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Oh man people keep bringing up the poly option. 3 weeks away and I will say cases will be made. And decisions will be decided. Will those decisions stick? Who knows.
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Thanks for the note! He is, but we still love him… right? Right?!?
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Looking forward to your reactions moving forward. Thanks for this note and I always love coming back and revisiting old chapters from annex framework of what’s been written down the line. I don’t see Mike as a bookstore hopper, but I guess we’ll see. More to come
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I think if it's one thing these next sets of decision will bring, besides an ending to the story, it will still be packed with drama. It's Corbin and company after all. Goal will always be to keep things realistic as possible, but still entertaining. More to come soon.
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You thought he wouldn't be back? Do you know me? LOL
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I think most people are correct to assume that A choice is coming. Conventional wisdom posits he has 3 weeks to figure things out. A LOT can happen in that time frame. I'm super excited about sharing that with you all! I think you'll enjoy it.
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I didn’t want to ask when Mike needed to return back to the barracks. I didn’t want to ask because I didn’t want him to leave. But there were a handful of things I desperately needed to take care of. I couldn’t hide in our cocoon forever, and when the next morning rolled around, I rolled off my very amazing vmee, and prepared to face those things. I knew as soon as my phone buzzed for the first time that the paper had dropped. I sat up in bed, planted my feet on the floor. Mike still
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