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Thanks Jasper. Welcome to Corbin’s next transactional episode. But are we sure that it isn’t Chip acting that way here?

Lots of great questions, and no way to answer some of them without spoiling. Pete and Corbin have history, so it won’t be as easy as letting each other go indefinitely. And no matter how unexplainable, Pete is still the gold standard. In getting ready to pick up the story again, I read early chapters and their chemistry palpable. For us readers, it’s been years, but for those two it’s been months. More to come and thanks for the comment!

We’ll see. It’s been interesting to develop some growth with Corbin, so you never what his relationship with Lee will evolve into. Or any of his fraternity brothers for that matter as he sets his sights elsewhere for a bit...

A chapter a day keeps the birthday blues away?

Thank god there were no crashes! I echo that. Been in too many cars where the hand finds the thigh, and then... Anyway... Thanks for the comment. Now I need a donut. Won't spoil anything, but we'll get to even more about Chip. I think he'll bring out a different (or more flushed out) side to Corbin, but we'll see... And David is fun to write. That relationship is fun to write. More to come.

Thanks for the comment! Honestly, Devil Wears Prada was the only DVD I had in college, so I watched it LOT... probably where Corbin gets that unapologetic boss bitch side to him... Pete is out there doing his thing... Corbin is waiting... for now. That's all I can say about that dynamic. Hopefully David being in he bed was too much of a let down...

Thank you!

Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂 on to the next story?

I see, and appreciate, what you did there.

Always plans within plans. I'm excited for Corbin's newest schemes to start coming to light. Should be interesting and fun.

You're welcome. Hope you enjoy it. Happy birthday!

My jaw dropped at the surprise that awaited me when I opened the door to my bedroom. It was altogether unexpected, glorious, and amazing. Lying there in my bed, jolting me out of my back and forth state of ‘should I or shouldn’t I call Pete first’ was David, shirt off, tight black Calvin Kleins clinging to his beautiful bulge. His hands were interlocked behind his head, presenting his entire body to me like a gift. He had a devilish smile across his face, and his eyes intensified in a sexy

Thank you for this.

Thanks Jasper, Interesting, you're the only one who made the observation it was a Pete-less chapter... or at least expressed it. Now the link to it being one of your faves... something to think about.

Thanks for this review. I really enjoyed it. Now to the case of who's on the bed... it could very well be someone you mentioned, or someone different all together. Either way, we'll find out soon enough.

I definitely wanted the sex between Corbin/David and Corbin/Lee to feel different. I think every sex partner I've described Corbin with has been completely different. (which, believe it or not for those who think Corbin is out slutting around is only 4 guys over the course of a semester and a half) Glad you picked up on that. I enjoy writing David and Corbin together. I think what you're getting in catching up to the story to this part is that I'm not afraid to let Corbin's unattractive traits come through. I've read too many stories where the protagonist can do no wrong, and that bores me, quite frankly. I'm not perfect, and was far from it in college, and neither should the character I'm modeling that experience after be. Glad you've stuck with the story through the 'bitter-bitch' chapters... more to come. 🙂

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Don't stop being a romantic, it's refreshing. As much shit as you give Corbin sometimes, deep down, I believe he's a romantic too (I'd happen to know). He's waiting for the big gesture and the fairy tale happy ending. Does he always behave that way? No. But in different points in this story, I think that's what's kept him from finding accepting the love that was thrown his way- wanting the happily ever after too quickly or too soon. Either way, thanks for the comment!

I think you may be sweet on Hutch a bit. No surprise, Corbin used to be as well. I’m VERY excited about where their relationship goes from here, let me tell you. I hope you enjoy it.

Hmmm. Dom is an interesting foil, so no surprise that he fascinates you. I’d say you’re right- it would be slightly out of character for Corbin to lay low, but the IFC is whole different ball game so we’ll see. Until next time

I disagree here, but that’s the beauty of stories: interpretation. A lot went into Corbin getting to this breaking point, including from his friends. But either way, he can’t stay this mad forever so you may be right. Or he can, who knows?

I feel like I need to be slightly protective here. At 20 yo, who amongst us was making perfect decisions? And lifelong commitments? I think you're being a little harsh on the guy, but that's my own clearly biased opinion. Plus, David is only the 4th guy he's kissed all semester long. Some of us have gone through 4 guys in the matter of one circuit party... Just saying. As always, thanks for the comment. Always entertaining to get your perspective!

Thanks for the comment. Not feeling Corbin at the moment? Weirder things have happened, but I feel I must say- verse rights for Nick and Corbin switching it up!

I've been known to take a nap or two. I'm working on it.

Wow! Thank you so much for binging the story. Glad you enjoyed it! More to come soon

Okay, can I say your phrases make me laugh. You’re right, this is a love story. Who Corbin ends up with is still TBD to this point, but surely you didn’t expect Corbin and Pete to all of a sudden walk a straight line towards relationship just because it’s a new semester? What kind of writer (and person) do you think I am.