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Totally understand your reaction. I don't think anyone would defend Corbin in one of his rage moments, but there is a lot that goes in to getting him there. Still, I love a main character that is less than perfect- and when you're talking about someone based on actual events, mistakes were made in the process. Glad you enjoyed the story. I love reading your reactions- so heartfelt and raw. Thanks so much for these.
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That's the whole point right? If Corbin did and said all the right things, it wouldn't be much of a story, right? I'm glad you're still reading. More to come.
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Cheer up, Charlie. Keep reading.
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Sorry I missed this comment. Thanks for the heartfelt review, and I'm glad you keep binging the story. A lot more to come.
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I love this chapter, but for all that it is, it was one of the hardest to sit down and write. I think writing a character like corbin is always fun because he is flawed and human, but everything that goes wrong in this chapter is his own doing. I think you're spot on with your last three sentences, but what will it take for Corbin to see it that way? More to come
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Thanks for the compliment! Much appreciated. One of the themes you bring up comes in to play in a big way in later chapters. I won’t spoil what, but your instincts in this post are spot on. Thanks again
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There’s a fine line between Corbin being a rootable lead character and a complete dickhead that I think you capture here. Believe me, I know the character has his flaws. Glad the whole thing is keeping you interested as you binge through. More to come.
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Oh wow. I really felt this response. lol. I can tell you were as heated about the public response as Corbin was. There was quite a bit of discussion over whether Corbin was wrong or Melanie Chu was to blame for her own fate, but I (associating with Corbs) thoroughly enjoyed reading your response. 🙂
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Another amazing response! Having fun yet? In Corbin's defense, he didn't go looking for Lee. The freshman just happened to show up and was exactly what Corbin needed to relieve some stress. They're relationship is complicated all its own, and I won't lie and say it doesn't stay that way. More to come! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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This was another favorite chapter of mine to write. I think a story like this one- ongoing- where things are based on real events but kind dramatized up for interest, there are going to be these twists and turns. There's so much more to the triangle of these three boys to unfold, and I'm looking forward to your reactions. (if you thought THIS was a holy hell chapter...) Thanks again for the comments!
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This was definitely one of my favorite chapters to write. I do enjoy writing Mike and Corbin quite a bit, and these bits were very special. Glad you enjoyed. Wondering how long you'll stay team mike... for the duration? We'll see...
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I think you're spot on on a lot of things in this comment. The friends vs. lovers question. Corbin and Pete are clearly on different sides of that coin. I think acts like this, where Corbin can give Pete a gift no one else can is his way of extending the olive branch AND showing his love for Pete. The last line to me says it all. More to come!
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Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
Great Question about what happened that night. I can't lie, this is one of my all-time favorite chapters. I relive this fight scene in my mind quite a bit, and I'm really proud of how it was captured. Thanks for the comment! Glad you're enjoying. I can tell you're on a binging roller coaster right now, and it's giving me an excuse to revisit some of these chapters, so thank you! And of course, yes, who doesn't want a shirtless cadet to show up with all of his younger cadets in a brazen act of love. Tres charming. -
Homecoming Part 1: That Kind of Thing
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Homecoming Part 1: That Kind of Thing
I honestly think you may be right about the Scorpio thing... I'll have to look up when Mike's birthday was, but I'm pretty sure it was sometime in November... good guess. Their relationship is definitely complicated and Corbin doesn't do much here to uncomplicate it. More to come! Glad you're enjoying the story. -
Grab a drink and hang on to your hat!
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Keep reading, friend. You never know what might happen in the coming chapters. This definitely is a turning point though, but so much more to come.
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Thanks for the comment! I love your reactions! Always fun to read. You're right it is a roller coaster. Imagine going through it 🙂 I hope you enjoy the next couple chapters.
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Thanks for another amazing comment! I'm glad I came to revisit this chapter- something Corbin says at the end is echoed by David in a few chapters. I agree with you, Pete laid it on Corbin tough at the end, but as always, there's a lot of story left to tell. Thanks again!
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Thanks for the comment. These were good chapters for Mike, and good times with the Cadet. Like you said, a lot of story to unfold, so we'll see how these relationships continue to develop. I love your comments, can I say? Very passionate. Thanks again!
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PS, I'll be working on the next couple chapters over the next week. TBH, it's been hard to find a routine and stay motivated during this pandemic/quarantine, plus finding side work to do while unemployed. It's taken a mental toll which doesn't always manifest healthily for me. Thanks for your patience and I can't wait to get the next installments out to you all!
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This is a really good point. And I think what makes them so special is that they want to be good guys. I don't think they always get it right, but they're hot enough that they can be assholes, but instead they decide to be nice. My Mike was also super protective of any homophobic threats that he sensed around me. He didn't tolerate anyone treating me as less than, and that made me elevate him in my mind as well.
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Okay, well now I'm inspired... based on a lot of comments with this chapter, I think there's a general 'where is Mike?' campaign going on...
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Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
I love that you’re discovering all of this for the first time. Glad you’re enjoying the journey! I’d expect a few more reactions like this along the way. -
Of Booze, Boys, Brothers, and Bigs
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Of Booze, Boys, Brothers, and Bigs
We called ours ‘cold files’ and I definitely haven’t mentioned them enough, so thanks for bringing this up. This was one of the biggest perks of going Greek -
Of Booze, Boys, Brothers, and Bigs
Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Of Booze, Boys, Brothers, and Bigs
I appreciate you saying that. Thanks 😊
