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Hey Lisa! You know my motto: Better late than pregnant! So much to respond to in this review, I would have to write a whole chapter to answer your questions... oh, wait! I think you're right about Nick, and I think Corbin understands that too... we jump forward through Christmas Break in the next chapter, and I will say that where we pick up, Corbin is more aware of the consequences of his actions than I think he's ever been... growing pains, I guess. Nick DOES have a straight older brother... the one that kissed Corbin at the musical festival last year to get hot dogs from two girls... Still want him? I'll set it up! A lot more story to come, and hopefully, a lot more reviews by you! This made my morning! Thanks again!
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Hey Arran! Thanks for the review. Not sure how many chapters I have planned... we're at 30 now, and we're about halfway through the school year. The back half should go a lot quicker, but I'd say we're a little over halfway there. Hope you stick with it and continue to share your reactions in the review section!
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We don't want your laptop to catch fire! I love a good passionate response, so I thoroughly enjoyed reading this review. Your reaction is totally valid, but here's to hoping Corbin had learned something going into his relationship with Nick. You never know! Thanks again. More to come soon!
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Thanks for another amazing review! If I ever have to giv up writing this story, I am passing you the reigns! So much fun insight. Can you imagine Dom and Corbin together? Woof. I will say you were spot on about a couple of your musings though... Can't say what, but I will say I enjoy reading your reactions every chapter. Thanks again!
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Thanks so much! I think I know exactly what you're talking about, and can definitely relate: picking the idea of someone over the reality of someone great who's right there... Without spoiling anything, I feel like that's a global enough issue worth writing about.
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Thanks for an awesome review! I'm enjoying writing nick and Corbin's dynamic. And I think you're right about Corbin growing and maturing. Sure it took him a couple of hours to drum up te strength to have 'the talk' with Pete, but he got there. More to come for sure! Can't wait
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Hey! Thanks for the review. I think sometimes Corbin makes it easy to forget that he can be a solid guy, and I'm glad this chapter redeemed him a little bit. Writing characters with different layers is very fun for me. No particular song in mind, mostly because I couldn't remember the names of any of the compositions I would have been listening to at that time. Thanks again!
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My mind went blank as I wrapped my arm around Nick’s neck, and pulled him into my bedroom. I pulled my door shut behind us, and in a moment of pure instinct, I pushed Nick against my door, kissed him as hard as I could, and pressed my body against his. I heard him moan as I felt his entire body vibrate against mine, the two of us driving each other crazy as we continued drawing ourselves closer and closer together. “Ouch,” he said softly, pushing me back. I stop
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Lisa, thanks for another stellar review! So much to cover... I can't tell you quite what to expect moving forward without spoiling anything, but Corbin has learned a lesson or two about using guys on the rebound. Hopefully he draws from that. As for the frat stuff, it is a different world, and I enjoy writing Corbin's attempt to navigate it. For me it's about showing how great he is about reading and influencing people, yet when it comes to his love life, he's completely the opposite. I guess it wouldn't be a Jwolf protagonist if he didn't do some questionable things!!! Thanks for the compliment on the opening! More to come very soon. And if you know anyone at hallmark, tell them to call me!
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Hey! It means SO SO much that you made a profile just to comment on this chapter. I hope that means we'll be hearing from you in the future as the story unfolds! The Nick/Corbin dynamic is fun to write, and expect more of it as it unfolds. Also, please put your butter knives away... that goes to you and Carrie! More to come SOON!
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I loved this review! Thanks so much. AS usual, so insightful and so funny! I'll try not to make you wait a whole month for the next installment... I promise! We will see Mike again, rest assured. And Corbin wasn't Lee's first, but did you notice Corbin noticing that Lee has learned a trick or two... you might be right about him being a Hoe! I love writing those two together. As for Nick... well, we'll just have to see where he fits into everything. More to come
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Hey tim! Thanks for an awesome review. I always love reading your responses. This chapter definitely got a rise out of you! There's definitely more story, and more growing, for Corbin to come. I will say, he didn't get Pete's text until he had already decided to go up with Nick... we'll get the full fallout of his decision to keep going in the next chapter. Can't wait to continue the story!
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Typo. Anyway, really funny to see all the juggling Corbin is doing. The Nick Persons stuff was very Jane Austen-like. Oops. Missed that one! Thanks for the catch. What's funny about Corbin is that e completely misses the no brainers in his life. Expect more of that. I'll take a jane Austen comparison! Thanks again
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Corbin never makes it easy, does he? Thanks for the review! More to come, and especially his reaction to Pete's message.
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Thanks for the review! Glad you're keeping up with and enjoying the story. I'm on board with your opinion on Pete and Corbin, but you Corbin's decision are Beverly that easy. Expect more drama. More to come!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! More to come soon.
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Thanks for the review! Don't be mad. Corbin is going through it and trying his best. He didn't spread himself pretty thin this chapter. More to come soon!
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Glad the suspense is gettin you. You know I love a good twist. I think we saw in this chapter that Corbin is right at the edge. A laugh away from a tear. I don't know if he's ready for full on psycho, but expect him to keep things intense. More to come soon!
