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  1. Jwolf
    Plans are to post the latest chapter later today. Stay tuned.
  2. Jwolf
    Mike definitely punches. Closed fists. And ten does that very macho hand ringing move afterwards. Classic Mike
  3. Jwolf
    Thanks for the review! Very insightful. I think one way to read Corbin's actions with Nick is that it's precisely because he likes and admires him that he cuts him free... agree he was harsh, but I think Corbin meant for a clean break. Either way, more to come very soon! Interesting on your take on Pete's POV... I think you might be right about how he's feeling... shall see.
  4. Jwolf
    Wow, what an awesome review. Thank you so much! Glad you're loving the roller-coaster ride. I might have to steal that line- love is a terrible prison warden. I think you've hit the nail on the head that Corbin finally gets what he put Nick, and to an extent Mike and Lee, through with this latest round from the Brit. More to come soon!
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    Hey Hey! I loved this review. Corbin really made you mad this chapter! I think you're spot on about a couple of things... he didn't go about the breakup the most graceful way possible, but does he ever do things with grace? I think his intentions were definitely noble though. He knew what direction his relationship with Nick was going... and he knew it was best to avoid it... more to come soon! And yes, more ganja with David, of course...!
  6. Jwolf
    Thanks for the review, and the compliment on the writing! Glad you enjoy the story. Next chapter will be out soon... not a super long wait!
  7. Jwolf
    You're welcome. Thanks for the support. This community is awesome! No plans to leave for an extended period of time any time soon... Thanks again!
  8. Jwolf
    Thanks for the major props! I'm glad you love the story. You're right to assume this isn't the last we've seen Pete... You've made some solid predictions in your review... but I won't tease anything More to come very soon... also, an interesting read on Corbin and Dom's relationship... could be interesting to explore... who knows.
  9. Jwolf
    Manipulative yet lovable asshole... I love it. A good way to describe Corbin, I'm thinking. Thanks for the compliment on the writing. A lot of emotion coming through on the next few chapters as well, so hopefully you stay connected.
  10. Jwolf
    Thanks for the compliment on the writing. I'd like to think Corbin is growing deeper and wiser as the chapters progress, and we'll see what that means for him soon. More to come!
  11. Jwolf
    Thanks for the review. This was a much more difficult chapter for me to right as well. I'm glad the emotions and angst came through. More to come aoon!
  12. Jwolf
    Thanks for the review! Your prediction was right, but it certainly might not be the last we see of nick. Corbin has a way of keeping these guys hanging around, no? More mike to come! Thanks again.
  13. Jwolf
    Here's the next chapter folks. Hope you enjoy! Can't wait to follow the conversation about this particular chapter.
  14. Jwolf
    I sat across from Nick Persons at lunch at the Blue Roof Bistro in downtown Clifton Hill, knowing that he was speaking, but not listening to what he had to say. I could see his mouth move, his lips release words into the atmosphere, and I knew my head was nodding along, giving him every indication I was following along. But I wasn’t. My head was a million miles away. It wasn’t fixated on a Brit, or a VMI cadet sitting in confinement, or a freshman counting down the hours until his first
  15. Jwolf

    The Line

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Line

    Uncorbed? Like uncorked? I dunno... but I like the idea of Corbin as a verb...! Glad you enjoy the strategizing part of his persona... it's definitely a polarizing characteristic, but I think it juxtaposes just how in control he is in every aspect of his life EXCEPT his love life... something about that makes him vulnerable to me... more to come!
  16. Jwolf

    The Line

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Line

    Thanks, Lisa! Another AMAZING review. I love reading your reviews. I love writing David/Corbin scenes cause it's definitely a different dynamic than he has with Lee... but you're right... still leading on a freshman. We'll see how that comes in to play later on in the story. You miss Pete? Penishead, like you call him? Rest assured... he returns... can't say when, why, or for what, but clearly his part in this isn't over (or I'd have to change the title of the story...)
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    The Line

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Line

    Thanks for another solid review! I love reading them. Glad you found this chapter entertaining. I love writing Dom/Corbin scenes because both of them get to be a little over the top. Glad you got a chuckle! More to come, and definitely never count Pete out... whatever that means.
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    The Bitch Is Back

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Bitch Is Back

    I think one of the themes that I love exploring with Corbin is that as in control as he seems to be about everything else- school, fraternity, etc- he's so lost when it come to love... and you're right about it rendering him somewhat pathetic. That's the fun part in writing a layered protagonist. Glad you're still enjoying the story!
  19. Jwolf

    Trial Run

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Trial Run

    Thanks for another great review. You're right... definitely a build up/set up chapter, but more drama to come very soon. Can't wait!
  20. Jwolf

    Easy Street

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Easy Street

    Thanks for reviewing! And getting back into the story. I'm excited to be writing again, let me tell you. And you are definitely spot on that part of the attraction to the Brit is the fact that all of Corbin's manipulations don't necessarily work on him. He's been reading Corbin very well since the beginning, and while finding himself at the same time. Still, Corbin can't get enough of someone that doesn't just do his bidding... so there's that. more to come!
  21. Jwolf

    The Line

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Line

    Thanks for the review. I think it's fun that Corbin isn't all good... would certainly get boring to right. He'll continue to be complex, I'm hoping... thanks again!
  22. Jwolf

    The Line

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Line

    Thanks Peethree! Still so much to happen. Stay tuned!
  23. Jwolf
    Hey folks, here's the next chapter! Hope you enjoy. Can't wait to read what you think... more to come soon.
  24. Jwolf

    The Line

    Jwolf posted new chapter in The English Year

    “Did you honestly think I wouldn’t find out?” he asked, stalking into my bedroom like a man on fire. I closed the door behind him. “Will you keep your voice down, please?” I whispered, deflecting. “You aren’t supposed to be here.” “I don’t give a shit where I’m supposed to be,” Lee replied, crossing my room. I could tell he was worked up. I could tell just by the way he turned around and looked at me. I took a deep breath. “You sold me out.” “Wh
  25. Jwolf

    The Bitch Is Back

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Bitch Is Back

    I'm BAAACK! Thanks for your encouraging words periodically through the last year! Good to know my GA family is still here! I'm glad you're enjoyed the chapter. I will say that Corbin obviously has a plan... he always does, doesn't he. Cant wait read your reactions as things start to heat up this semester...! More to come.
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