Al Norris
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I think everyone (including me) has missed the clue! What if the curse is not on the pack, but on Cassandra? How does the pack survive if its Alpha is destroyed?
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Being rudely awakened by a lawnmower under your window, only to see a sweaty bronze god doing the mowing? Um, I'll keep those thoughts to myself (I may be old, but I'm not yet dead)!!! Guy is part of the production staff. From what he has said, if he thinks things went well, I'd say you can almost make book on his assessment of how his bosses took the presentation. Tony needs to find out more about the house he wants to buy and see if his siblings can attend the party.
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Offhand, I would say that Taylor proposed the scheme with Guy Fellows. But he has his own agenda and is playing her. He gets the Serbians involved who are playing him!
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Yeah. In that vein, I just don't know if I can read anything else from you, @Josh Aterovis
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@Philippe I agree with most of what you wrote. However, I don't think that Killian and Asher will survive this turn of events. If Will survives this, it will be reflected in his art. And that is a big IF.
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If Aidan is dead, then Will will soon follow. Prologue or no prologue. It is just too much for the boy to take.
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Masterful Chapter! The tension mounts, but where did Desmond send them?
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When we really stop and remember what all has happened to Aaron, his reaction to seeing two guys in towels, one of which was his supposed partner, who was chubbed... Aaron's reaction was absolutely inevitable. I agree with everyone else. Because of the almost no self-esteem of Aaron, Tony must always make sure Aaron knows and has a part in what is going on in Tony's life.
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I think a lot of the religious types forget that God often works through the hands of us humans! And as humans, we can't know what God's desire is. Still, it is good that Will and his Dad did get a kind of closure. Caitlin is still at or near the top of my list of suspects. Yet, I still want to know who was at the door when Joey tried to rape Will. Nothing was really said about whether Will recognized the dude!
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Damn well could be! It could also be why Ryder finds sex with Danny soooo good!
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Oh Gods! No! Not Zac... This is a terrible twist!
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No, Shi-anne is the publicist. That is, she ensures the manuscript is properly edited and compiled into the most suitable format for the intended reading audience. Here in the States, Shi-anne would be the publisher. Harry is the agent. His job is to shop around and find a publicist for the works that Tony cranks out. The Bayview property would not be suitable for building a safe house. It is too far off the beaten path, regardless of how gay friendly Thompsonville has become. Places like Brisbane or Melbourne would be better candidates.
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The Passport and Cartier Watch
Al Norris commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Passport and Cartier Watch
I am not at all surprised at this revelation. What does surprise me is that Travis still trusts Taylor enough to make escape plans with her. It's obvious he hasn't put 2 and 2 together.- 27 comments
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Or at least not take his safety for granted!
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So Rory is having a difficult pregnancy? And he's too damned proud (or scared) to tell anyone? Can you say, Dumb Shit! I did like how Kieran got him involved with the troops and how he handled Holden and Fife.
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I'll start by saying that I don't have a clue as to where this is going, just a list of suspects. Other than that, @drsawzall has listed a bunch of things that I'm also thinking of. One imperative is to get that rock analyzed. Is there blood or flesh fragments on the rock, and let's do a DNA test on the supposed debris. Oh, and annotate the supposed chain of custody.
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In the real world, I would agree 100% with you, Philippe. The "industry" is ripe with graft and corrupt characters. Because of this, I wouldn't even retain a local attorney. Luckily, in our story world, not so much! Another good chapter, Mark.
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And then asking for money? But then again, Aidan wanting to marry this quickly is just as strange! I don't buy the story Jack gave. If, as he says, he is a recovered alcoholic, yelling at Joey was the worst possible thing he could do. He would have known this.
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Hmm, the bodies are stacking up, along with the suspects!
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That was my thought. Ryder rams so deep and hard that the condom is wrecked, and he imprints Danny! All that will be needed is the bite, and they will be mated... Unless Ryder needs Danny to top and bite him back? Yup. They is fated!!!
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Pretty obvious to me that Zereth is in league with Oeus!
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I would think that if Taylor is involved with this kidnapping, then, regardless of how much money Travis shells out, he is dead. Taylor would love nothing more than to take his money and take him out. With all the sex Will has been getting, I was wondering about Travis. Now it seems as if Travis was getting more than Will! And despite Will's libido, it has made him a bit jealous simply because Travis hasn't shared any of this with Will! 🧐 As for all the other stuff? Many of the inquiries should have already been done. Surprised that Jake and Brad didn't.
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Yes, it is!
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While we still don't have enough information to form an opinion... Caitlin appears to have a motive to kill Joey. Another person to consider is the person on the other side of the door, when Will escaped Joey's attempted rape. We don't have a clue as to who he is. There may or may not be a motive lying to be discovered. I hate to say it (what with this chapter's revelations), but Aidan is also a suspect, for obvious reasons.
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I almost hate to say it. But I like that song!
