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And whatever Francis Heyward did, he couldn’t fuck that up, could he? What?why? That’s a devilish last line!

A fun chapter and so accurately observed!

Thank you for a great and long running story, and the great bending, going to miss it!

Heating up nicely!

Do we really have to wait until 2018?

Also brought back memories for me - Alum bay and the glass tubes to collect the sand, snake belts, aertex shirts and the school grey pullover......

Happy Birthday, have a good 'un!

Thanks for a great story which I look forward to re-reading. Finally, Happy New Year!

It has been one hell of a journey, and a very satisfying final chapter, feared it was going to be more tense than it was! Thank you for a great story.

Can we have a promise that the chapter will not be split at a point of, however slightly, heightened tension in the narrative?

I've just remembered why I keep promising myself only to read completed stories! Think that Trev and Shane will survive, but that Atlantis is not unsinkable. With gold a plenty, the lads can re - build her. And please, in on of your calm, restful moments, can Bridget have a slow agonising end.

Are there a few paragraphs missing from the end of this chapter, seems you have inadvertently left a wee bit of a cliffhanger! Really enjoyed the twists and turns of this chapter, but cannot see how Trev can ever have a normal life at the end of this (assuming that you aren't mean enough to kill him off in the next chapter).

Thought this a 'feel good chapter' until read your remark about hints of what's to come. Enjoyed the story enormously, but looking forward to its conclusion now. The chapter deals a lot with family relationships, but one thing has bothered me for a while - the relationship between Trevor and his father. Thr rift between them started with mutual misunderstandings of their sexualities, and perhaps more recently the deception about Trev's mothers death. Have assumed that there will be a father and son reunion in the end, but in the meantime not seen much concern by his father at all the potentially fatal encounters which Trevor has encountered.

It It's an evil genius who can create a cliffhanger without writing a word!

All coming together smoothly with not a cliff in sight........