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A great chapter. It was well written so that you could feel the anguish of both Aaron and Nathaniel

A well written excellent story.

Thank you for the chapters this week. I was delighted to see them and read about the continuing adventures of William and Vlad. You are a great writer and create your characters with great passion. I look forward to seeing what I guess will be the conclusion of at least the turning process.

Really glad to see this story back. I truly missed it

It was great to see this chapter. Outstanding as always but far too long in coming.

An outstanding chapter. It was a pleasant surprise. Obviously for my viewpoint, it has been far too long.

An outstanding chapter. It was well written and kept me reading it to theend. I certainly look forward to the next one.

A well written but sad chapter

The story is getting more interesting each week. I’m glad “ your back” and look forward to the next chapter.

Obviously the same as Chapter 213. Look forward to the next new chapter as this is an outstanding story.

An excellent chapter. Personally it is one of the best you have written. Bravo.

Thanks for a great story and good ending. I agree with JohnnyC and hope we hear about these folks again in a future story.

As everyone said above “You’re back” - great and I agree totally with Clancy 59’s comments

As usual you tell a good story and in this case with a happy ending. I also hope there might be a sequel.

Thank you for a great story. It was a fun read. Looking forward to the next one.