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    Farewell

    comicfan commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Farewell

    Dolores you always have a way with poetry. Even here you have the opportunity to tell so much in such a short space. Nicely done.
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    Alice in Wonderland further disjointed. I was sure you were going to go with one of his non-sense poems like the Jabberwocky. Nicely done, could clearly see the cracks.
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    You layer so much in this Sam. I'm sure I won't be the only one to read it over twice, discovering your play with words and ideas are constantly improved by the ideas you include and your vocabulary. Wonderful read Sam.
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    You've woven three tales here in poetry. Darkness reigns in the first, the second is more of sadness, and here you have not joy, but a sense of living on, continuing the dream.I really enjoyed them all, but like the others this last one sort of holds a special place for me as a reader.
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    A Father's Lament

    comicfan commented on Celethiel's story chapter in A Father's Lament

    I see I wasn't the only one to play with dark themes when addressing this theme. Nicely done. I wonder what your last work will hold.
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    Dark poem. Makes you wonder what was lost and that would bring about such violence. If nothing else it is a piece that can not be ignored.
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    Before the Mirror

    comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Before the Mirror

    Just the way I am feeling lately KC. Things get dark but I still hold out hope.
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    Before the Mirror

    comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Before the Mirror

    Thanks Mark. Yeah I usually write poetry when I'm either very depressed or very happy. Funny but when things are just okay, I can't write it. Thanks for reading and commenting though.
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    Chapter 15 Lessons

    comicfan commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 15 Lessons

    Another chapter down. I see you made some other changes to the story which flowed nicely since my last view of the tale. Can't wait for more.
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    Is going to have to smack Mike for using an X again. Ties a string around Dad's finger to help him remember to leave five letters. Lets see now Boxes. grumbles. Bands often xerox employment shifts. BANDS
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    zebra
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    Usually the top two things on my list are cheese and milk. I go through both in large quantities. What is your favorite type of snack?
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    Gee I go to work and come back to such question. Who is taking the movies of this?
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    Mark, I resent that. I'm as normal as they come. and if you believe that I have a beautiful bridge in Brooklyn to sell you. lol. Things have been trying but I keep rolling with the punches. Trying hard to get life back on course. That is one thing I have learned, life is a journey not a destination. So trying hard to enjoy it cause I only get one shot at it. Bit worried about Joe. Hope he is alright. As to me, well pulled back together enough where I am finally pulling the slack up and getting things done again. to all that need it and a few who don't like them either.
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    Everyone needs joy occasionally, Yes? CLAPS
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    yenta
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    What would you like to discuss?
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    allegory
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    Linus is very educated, Ron. AWAKE
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    legacy
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    Wouldn't it be cheaper to send her by plane?
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    Customs rarely allow zebras, Yancy. WOWIE
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    stain
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    Thank you Percy. I hate to repeat myself. Although I do plan to do a retelling of the Little Mermaid so who knows. lol.
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    alternator
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