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comicfan

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  1. You are not lame, just nervous. But stop and consider he is probably the same way if you both have checked each other out and neither of you have made a move. Sometimes you just have to put your best foot forward and say hi. At worst you might have a new friend, at best a boyfriend. Good luck either way.
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    The Goodbye

    The ghost story in itself asks for a suspension of belief. I wanted a way for the reader to just sense what was happening and to make their own determination of whether it was sexy or not. That is what you did and I thank you for that.
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    The Goodbye

    Thanks Nephy. Means a lot coming from you. Your stuff is always down right sexy. So I appreciate knowing I hit the mark on this one.
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    The Goodbye

    Good. Then I guess I would have won that commentary. . Glad you liked it Frosty.
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    The Goodbye

    Glad you enjoyed my short story. Yeah I like the details in things KC. Sort of draw from my own life where I can, and the ring is something I love.
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    The Goodbye

    Thank you. Glad it was a success then.
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    The Goodbye

    Thank you Maria. Always grateful for your support.
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    Inspired by

    Every once in a while someone will say something that sparks the imagination. Since I have been here at GA that has happened to me a few times. I figured I would begin to gather them all in one place now and so will add to this as new stories are inspired by you.
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    The Goodbye

    The Goodbye Even though it had been months since Casey had buried Tom he was still feeling completely lost and alone. Five years together had changed his outlook on life and how to live it. He didn’t want to go back out and try to find someone. Why did he have to die? Why was Tom the one who had to be made an example of during a robbery? That one act had stolen everything from Casey, including the chance to say goodbye to the man who meant so much to him. To
  10. That was fun and interesting.
  11. Well he beat me on Paula Dean and JRR Tolkien but got him on Terry Brooks. LOL
  12. Are you afraid of heights?
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    A Family Wedding

    What can I tell you, KC. I have a warped way of looking at the world. Glad it gave you a laugh.
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    A Family Wedding

    We all have been to weddings that were perfect in their way for the simple things that have gone right, and the bloody disaster's like my darling brothers. Any way you look at it you are probably going to have fun just for different reasons. Glad you enjoyed it.
  15. What happens when two people meet, fall in love, and plan a wedding? The result can be the destruction of familial ties and be very funny, at least long after the fact. Take a glance and see if you have ever been to a bad wedding, or one like this.
  16. I always wonder if people know what they are doing when they decide to get married. Consider the expense, the choices, the family, and the shredded friendships that will be left after the decisions are made by the bride and groom. After all, where else but at a wedding can you find two families who hate each other brought together, in the house of God, for a happy occasion? In plain English, be prepared for a long battle that will leave many people bloodied and dead. The war of the famil
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    Chapter 1

    Totally different venue for you Stu. Was unique and scary. Stands alone and works well.
  18. Canuk, I think you are the only one who picked up on that. Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, Lu had things "cleaned up" for Jonas. Nearly done with my other story so this is next on the list for expansion.
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    How Things Are

    John, You let your passion and love glow in each line. The poem shows the hope and the desire you hold for your relationship. You are both very blessed. Your poem like yourself shows grace and love. Wayne
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    Chapter 1

    Glad you liked it Sara. Poetry is not my strong suit.
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    Chapter 1

    Well for me memories are triggered by scent and sight. My mother's favorite was blood red roses. Seeing hers blooming got me thinking. Your poem was the final influence that got me to write. Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you John. Not sure I would claim the title poet but it is something I do occasionally. I am glad it was able to reach you.
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    Chapter 1

    Forgive the maudlin tone. Just glad you enjoyed it.
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    Remembrance

    We all have triggers that will remind you of someone. Sometimes it is a smell, the sight of something, or just the feeling you get one day. When it happens memories are stirred and suddenly you are lost in the corridors of time, forgetting all about the now as you walk down memory lane.
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    Chapter 1

    Remembrance The roses wrap around the fence like bloody explosions Their sweet aroma filling the summer air And all I can say is you are not there I walk past your favorite places now and then Remembering the good times had Even the times when I was stupid and made you mad Time flies and more than a year has passed And the tears don’t fall so much any more But I wonder what that pain I felt was for The grave is still so bright and white And the dat
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