comicfan

Lugh watching you tie all your worlds together is amazing. You have such great ideas and I am grateful to see you share such an amazing read with us. I like so many others love Kismet. His fate is one still unfolding so can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next part of this tale. Keep them coming.

Well that different. I liked how your two plumbers spend all the at time getting there only to have the monkeys and tiger more or less tell them go away. What I find even funnier is the fact they simply turn around and attempt to find another way to solve the problem. Absolutely fascinating. I like how quickly you developed the world and let us enjoy it. Great story.

lol. Glad you enjoyed my little cat tale. If I manage to finish in time for the Novella you might get a new cat to read about.

For you Mark there is always comfort when you look to your friends. We want nothing more than to let you grow beyond the pain, into the man you are. We are here for your support, to love, and guide, and to be what you need. Now and always.

I'm glad you are enjoying it all. Don't worry I am writing the next chapter now. Glad you are still with me and enjoying Charlie's story.

Mother's are a breed all their own, Stu. Some of them are so scary at how well they know their children. I am happy to know you are enjoying this story.

I appreciate you reading and commenting, Stu. I like to know that the story is being enjoyed.

Yup. Charlie can cook. Charlie and Scott are just different aspects of me. What can I tell you? You write what you know or what you wish for.

Stu, What else would you expect from me? Remember though this story is basically a romance. Things take time.

Charlie has had his moments. It helped to define him. I don't think you will find he complains about what he has been through. Charlie just picks up and keeps going. Especially with his family.

Thanks Stu. We all know the shy guy who is afraid to really put himself out there. Tina just sort of reached the end of her rope. Hang in there. The story is just begun here.

Well the dancing has to stop at some point and you knew Scott was going to go for it. Glad you enjoyed it Frosty. Hard at work on the next one now.

Well, you can thank Andy. As soon as I tie up Accidents Happen this story will be expanded and the gaps filled in. Glad you liked it so much Cia.

Thank you Sara. I'm glad everyone seems to be enjoying it. It means a lot to me that so many people I read and enjoy are getting a kick out of this.

Chapter 14 – Scott’s View The alarm rang and Scott crawled out of his bed. The alarm had purposely been set there on the opposite side of the room to force him to move. Well, to get him out of bed and prevent him from breaking another alarm clock with his cast. He groaned and went to scratch his face, nearly knocking himself out with his cast. God damn thing is always getting in my way. I can't wait for this fucking thing to be taken off. Scott grumbled and continued into the bath

Mike is one sweet kid. I felt for him. I know there was abuse, a life alone, Ian helping him, and then Andrew. I give him credit for taking such a huge chance. Now don't even try to tell us you aren't a writer. Title is all yours Frosty.

I liked this a lot. This is the simple sort of story with a nice build up. I enjoyed it seeing how the two slowly got closer and closer. Fun read Sara.

You have built and interesting world here. I feel for the loss of a world at war. I see that magic survives and lives in many places and now has changed the beast to be more like your hero. I wonder what the final end of this tale will be. Interesting read and I think others have pointed out enough for you to work on.

Well that had enough twists and turns to keep it anyone reading it. I feel for Trevor. Knowing this could be the one but being totally afraid to commit. Nick was caught in so many different ways. I am glad he got his time with Trev even if it was only for a night. At least he won't go through his long life wondering what if. Poor Alex, having to wait so long to find the one. Now that he has Nick you wonder if he has to worry about the end of the world. And What about the missing brothers? You leave enough openings in your short story to keep us all wanting to come back for more. Beautiful read. Now just sort of wondering who the other Angels have as lovers? Are they all gay? Straight? Did some fall for other beings? Was one of them human. Might be why one of the arch angels is so damn touchy. And you never did fill in the gaps on their connection to God either. That would make for an interesting read. lol.

i am glad you enjoyed it. It is something I kept thinking about and finally decided to write it down.

Hi All, Well while this isn't my first story on the site, it is the first thread I have ever started. Just was curious what you thought of Jonas and his world. I am considering expanding this into a full story. I just wanted to know what you as the reader enjoyed. Thank you for your comments as always. Wayne - Comicfan

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Must be nice to work at a place where your fantasy can come true. Makes you wonder what you might try to order up. Thanks for commenting. Means a lot to me.

Hey I am glad you laughed. I figured poor Jonas needed an interesting job after all that. Glad to see so many people are enjoying it. Thanks for the comments and if I have a few spare fallen angels or destructive goddesses I'll let you know Nephy.

Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah sometimes you have to keep a few secrets. I know from reading as much as I do. Besides if you guess the ending immediately the story no matter who good isn't totally satisfying. Thanks for commenting. Makes the work worth it.

Now don't go getting a swelled head or anything Lugh. Glad you enjoyed it. I am glad I got it done in time.