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comicfan

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  1. Glad you enjoyed it Bee. I tried to get everyone right.
  2. The first day I walked in you were teasing each other. I just decided to make it my job and go further. lol
  3. Okay, delays are fine and they happen. I was afraid this was going to be another one where it was finished and then posted all at once. I can wait, not so patiently, but I can wait.
  4. Well all of you are the ones I hound, read, comment on, and talk with so tried to do justice to everyone.
  5. Well you asked for it so you got it Maria. lol. But I have my own story to still finish. Glad you liked it though.
  6. Hey Lugh, I am getting reviews on my story. This was to get Maria and Jian to stop asking for more poetry.
  7. Well you wanted a poem, so you got a poem.
  8. Thank you Sam.
  9. lol. Leave it to you to finally say hi.
  10. Audi you know me, You know you can say hi and talk to me. Glad you enjoyed it as well.
  11. My dear chatterbox we know you talk. We just like that you have become one of my close friends as well.
  12. Well glad you enjoyed it. The thumbs up was the give away.
  13. Yes I did and I called them as I seen them.
  14. A poem about some of the people I know here on GA. Just a sample of how I see them and how they are important to me
  15. Friends Here on GA They are an odd collection of people from all over the world They are young and old, sweet and sarcastic, funny and strange They welcome you without knowing you With gentle words and jokes you begin a daily change First there was Maria who read my poetry and commented She offered out her hand and then a second pair of eyes Then came Mark and Stu who were teasing each other But when I started in on them it brought more than just sighs F
  16. Not sure what you mean as having the same voice. A writer might be distinctive for the way they tell a story or the fact that each time it is so different. Look at the authors you enjoy. What makes them something you like? Some it is the art of surprise, some it is character development, some it is the fun they infuse in their tales, others it is just an overall style. Once you know what you want, or what you are afraid you might be doing, then you can work on it. I find each story I start is different and new. The characters have to come to life and live in the world they inhabit. If I do that I think I am successful. Good luck.
  17. Shagging, Fun time, Afternoon Delight - although that is an old term and a song referring to it, boinking, the animal with two bodies, the intimate ultimate, bury the bone, making whoopie, doing the deed, and sweaty fun are about all i have heard for sex. To me I just say lets have it and go.
  18. Who was asking about cake?
  19. Oh you take the low road and I'll take the TOP Position and we will both get there together. lol
  20. comicfan

    Father's Day

    Ouch. That is heart breaking. The alcoholic father who has lost it all but hangs onto the one memory he has. You feel for him but worry about Johnny who was left behind, praying the kid is the one who is okay and better off without him. Powerful piece of writing.
  21. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Lord I hate labels. They never tell you the full story and they attempt to limit and box the one they are applied to. Strong piece here Bee.
  22. Dannsar, Well every writer has the ability to create something rather interesting. This was suppose to be a walk on the wild side, so for Jonas I think I made sure his was wild enough. But yes, I have had a number of the people I truly do admire tell me to expand this tale. I plan to as soon as I finish Accidents Happen. Thanks for taking an interest.
  23. comicfan

    Story

    Grrr. You held me in emotional upset. I was there with Wes and Doug from the get go. You show the true love and care that they have for one another. The pain of the accident, the scary moment when you know there is nothing you can do, the aftermath, and of course the slow recovery afterwards. You granted us just enough to allow us in and see without dumbing it down or making it overly simplistic. We know Doug and Wes still have a long road ahead of them till Wes is as good as he will get. Thank you for sharing this Cia.
  24. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Alex like so many,chose to hide behind the straight mask for so long that when the time came he didn't know how to handle it. The story was really sweet. I liked how you handled his slow discovery of the world he really lived in. which eventually brought him back to the one person who really mattered. Nice tale all the way around.
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