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Thank you Ghanbrews, I'm this will be different from what everyone has read before. It's hard to do something new
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Walking in the front door, Gibby was greeted by the delicious aroma of tangy tomato and cheese that filled the house. The smell tingled his nose bringing a loud growl from his teenage stomach. He wasn’t hungry until now. That sandwich had done little to keep his hunger at bay and the thought of his dad’s twice baked spaghetti had his mouth watering. “Wow, you’re home early.” Gibby shouted towards the kitchen as he pulled out the small bundle of back-to-school paperwork that had to be complet
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Very touching, Wayne dark yet still a glimmer of hope.
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Thank you Percy, I'm glad you liked it. This was a difficult piece to write. It deals with some taboos that make people uncomfortable, but so does real life. Rosaly/Ross is an amazing character. Thanks for reading
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Rosaly is a tough kid. There are ups and downs. I think you'll like where this goes in the end
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I feel sluggish just reading that! I start my day with a cup of coffee or a can of soda (Cherry Dr. Pepper or Cherry Pepsi) depending on the weather. I can't drink something cold when it's freezing outside just like I can't drink something hot during the summer. Lunch is a granola bar and dinner is whatever the hubby has made. He's been experimenting in the kitchen which is awesome since I suck at cooking!
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I'm so glad things are turning around for Joey. he's a good kid and should have a fresh start. Love the line about wearing gasoline underwear through hell Andy's internal diaglog is kind of quirky, I like it! Yep, Roger caught them...I knew he would. Really? How long does it take to carry stereo across the street? I just hope he's as accepting as Andy's dad and the nurse.
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Take care of yourself Waynie-poo!
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What you got against us blondies? That's okay...I'll let it pass this time. Kids can be cruel. They taunt others to sound cool and keep their status with the popular kids...sad but true. We are going to be seeing a lot more of the blond guy. (Tanner) Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think. I like to hear what you guys like or don't like about each chapter. KC
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Thans so much for your insight. I love your reviews. We've had to deal with nice and evil teachers. My kid has one teacher right now that is the wicked witch of the west Your right, kids can say some really mean things. Living with a teenager taught me what I had forgotten from my own childhood. Now that we have all the characters, the stage is set. Can't wait to see where these kids are going to take this story. Thanks for reading.
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Chapter 6...Promises Made
K.C. commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6...Promises Made
I was worried at Christian might have changed his mind, I was so glad that he came back home. I love Taggart Hope that he helps Christian with his memory. It's weird that he's spying on his own husband in the shower Aweome scene! -
I'll go back and re-read to make clarification. The kids at school are: Twins Mike and Mark, Ethan (who is Amanda's boyfriend) and Tanner, the blond from class/lunch/bike rack. Amanda is blond bitch and her girlfriends are Sunny and Bethany...Sorry for any confusion. I'm glad you like it. Hope the wait isn't too bad
