I like Jamie, he's a better man than his father. (Donk ) I would have liked to see what happened in those 18 years. Are you going to fill any in? Flashbacks maybe?
Beware! I wouldn't trust Blake! Smells like a trap, the begiining of the end! Good Chapter Marky!
Wow!! Adam killed James, I did not see that coming. I hoped he would but I really didn't think he had it in him. Wonder how the place is going to run with a woman in charge.
Nice set-up now I wonder where you'll take it. Will we see the boys grow or will it jump to them in the future? Nice chapter, I can't wait to read more
Ooooh New Chapter!!!! **happy dance**
So Jonas has settled into the job but what about the date...Ooooh maybe the date will be Daniel from work? I can't wait for more! Good chapter but too short!
Oooopsie, I was hoping nobody would notice that this chapter was short...I had trouble finding a spot to end so I went with where it was a comfortable break. There will be more on Monday, I'll even go see how it compares in lengh (hehe--KC get your mind out of the gutter) to the other chapters. Can't promise but will see what I can do. Thanks for reading
Awwww Thanks Kim! This is my favorite story. I know a lot of people are uncomfortable with the transgender subject but they are people too and yes they fall in love just like the rest of us. I think this is a beautiful and real tale of triumph for a special young man! Thanks for the reviews. It means a lot to know how people feel about my writing
Was so glad to see a new chapter **squeal**
I love Taggart! I hope that he can help Christian figure out what has his memory blocked. I'm thinking it has something to do with his father's death? I want him to remember!! He better or I might come and steal David
Another awesome chapter!
Haha, the "Matt Incident" was real from when I was a kid. I don't put a lot of myself in my stories but that entire scene with pencil and hospital happened...Want to see the scar?
Rosyln is a strong girl and awesome kid! Thanks for reading!
Thanks for readin Rebelghost, there is more but as far as having a plan? I better get one of those before someone figures out that I don't know what I'm doing JK
More is coming, things are...developing
I'm trying to add little bits of back story as we go. Now that we have the main characters, there is going to be a lot more story, but I'm still taking a much slower pace. I'm trying to set a more enjoyable pace then my fast and frantic style that I'm known for. The encouragement from readers and authors on GA have helped me fine a nice even pace and grow as a writer. Thanks so much for reading. (And my editor keeps tying my fingers together to make me slow down )
Amanda is one of those evil girls that think they can get away with everything, throw in that her daddy is Principal and she thinks she's untouchable...take her down a few pegs? we'll have to wait and see
Gibby will have some ups and downs as he adjusts to his new life and new school. Thanks so much for reading!
Haha that will teach me for writing without dusting off my old science textbooks to research...I'm not as smart as I thought I was! As soon as I read your post, that I remembered that it's the only non-metalic element that is liquid at room temp and oh yeah, very volatile! Thank Suby for me, I'll have to change that.