Jump to content

K.C.

Author
  • Posts

    5,380
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by K.C.

  1. Cranes Over Moon by Nishimura. This is one of my favorites, It's hanging in the livingroom.
  2. K.C.

    Chapter 4

    Well, how much fun would it be if you could figure out what was going to happen from the 1st chapter? There will be lots of twists and surprises in this story. I'm glad you like it
  3. K.C.

    Chapter 4

    Blond dude is Tanner. what can I say about him ...there will be more of him Thanks for reading!
  4. K.C.

    Chapter 4

    Well I think this covers the main characters. I didn't want it to be new character overload...so, now for the story to really begin (Shhhh, I want to punch her too!) Monday, Monday
  5. K.C.

    Chapter 4

    Thanks, I tried to pull from my own experience with changing school. There is always that one kid who want's to make others misserable. Thanks for reading
  6. K.C.

    Chapter 4

    Gibby stood in the hallway like a doof, wondering if he should knock on the closed door or just go inside. He heard a female voice coming from the classroom. She didn’t sound mean or upset, in fact she sounded kind of pleasant. Opening the door far enough to peek inside, his fears were met with a warm smiling face. “You must be Gibson,” Ms. Stein was very petite and looked like Tinkerbelle. Her short blond hair framed her pretty face. Every head in the classroom turned to stare at him stan
  7. One phrase that one of the doctor's at work uses that drives me crazy: "As such and hensforth" He says that all the time right in the middle of whatever he's talking about...It makes no sense! Blah blah blaaaaaah, blah blah as such and hensforth blaaaaah blah blah (I guess that's 4 words and could also be in the pet peeves forum too)
  8. K.C.

    Chapter 7 Discovery

    Now the song is going to be stuck in my head Sounds like Joey's life had done a complete circle for the better. Now has me wondering what's to come? There has to be somesort of hidden bomb ticking ready to blow up. A love trangle? Alien abduction? What's next?????
  9. K.C.

    Chapter 6 Safe Haven

    Looks like things will be turning around for Joey. I like him and want him to be happy. "You had me at hello..." Flash from the past. I hadn't even read this yet when I threatened to get out my whip Hehehe
  10. Joey's backstory is very painful to read. The description of his first sexual encounter with the older boy was a overly graphic. Most victims of abuse are more reserved and withdrawn, not usually ready to tell what has happened and Joey opened up really quick with a tad too much information (IMO) I love Andy's internal dialog but his speech is very formal and strikes me as someone much older than a teenage boy. **Ooooh you might want to check out the facts around removing a child from school without parental consent. I know Andy's dad is a Judge but they and the school could get into big time trouble. I know the stacks of paperwork parents have to fill out and sign on who can/can't remove a minor from school property is tedious....just FYI*** I was going to read more tonight but then I wont have anything to nag about tomorrow! Write faster!!
  11. I like Joey but I think I hate his parents. There's no doubt that something bad is going on in that house. Are they just bad parents? Are they Jesus Freaks practicing tough-love? Did the beating have to do with the fight with JT or is it because he's gay? SOOO many questions.... you're so lucky I don't have to wait or I'd be stomping around getting all pissy!
  12. K.C.

    Chapter 3 New Friend

    I like the way this is unfolding. Joey sounds so cute but it has to be hard being the kid of a preacher. Can't wait to read more. Write faster Billy!!!
  13. Wow, quick turn of events. Andy doesn't want anyone to find out his secret and then wham...he has to defend someone being bullied in a split-second decision. WTG Andy! I'm glad he did the right thing...even if he's going to have to pay for it later. **Warning!!! I'm going to try to read slow but I told you that if I catch up to you AND have to wait for more, I'm going to be a whiny bitch and annoy the crap out of you until you post more...FYI **
  14. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    My jaw dropped when this popped up! You keep telling me to slow it down and I finally listened I think this pace lets me add so much more to the story without overwhelming the reader. More? I would say be patient that more will be posted next week but you've already read it I can't thank you enough for all of your help! You have made me a better writer!
  15. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    Busy scenes I'm good at...getting me to slow down has been the hard part. Sometimes I think my Editor is going to tie my fingers together (hehe) I've really tried to slow my stories down from that fast frantic pace I use to write. I hope it's not to slow for anyone and they don't lose interest. Thanks for reading
  16. Naked is only an option when the kid is away at a sleepover Hubby does t-shirt and boxers I like t-shirt and pajama pants. My body temp is usually cold so I also have a hoodie that I'll pull on sometimes (on top of the 3 blankets on the bed ) I get really cold and I hate to be cold...even in the summer.
  17. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    Officer Blackfeather will make another appearance or two. There are still some more characters to introduce and a lot more story to come... Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're liking it so far!
  18. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    I know it's odd to say but I'm so glad that everyone is hating Amanda You're right she is a bitch! I'm so excited about introducing the rest of the story characters. Today, I added a few but there are still a few more to go. What can I say about Gibby's mom? We haven't gotten to that yet... I know there are questions but I promise to start answering more as I go along. Thanks for reading
  19. K.C.

    Chapter 2

    Thank you Marky, I'm glad that you're taking the time to read it. I know that the farm keeps you so very busy. Gibby is a complex character. I hope the readers connect with him like I have. Hugs to you too. There is still a lot more to come.
  20. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    Since when was 8 days a week and a half? I'll still keep posting on Mondays...unless I have something crazy pop up then I'll try to post early. First, I love to embarrass my kid on a daily basis I think that we have a good relationship with her, fights and arguements are resolved pretty quick in our house. I can soooo see doing what Officer Blackfeather did to his kid. Amanda and Bethany aren't twin but those annoying teen girls that try to do everything alike. The students and teachers are going to be a huge part of this story and I'm trying to introduce the characters slowly instead of dumping them all in at once. There are going to be some awesome characters in this one! Thanks for reading.
  21. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    Hehe Amanda is going to be a force to reckoned with...watch out! Glad you like it.
  22. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    Gibby is 18 and he was supposted graduate high school last year. The fire and his injuries has put him a year behind. Amanda...what can I say about Amanda? She's a bitch! Every school has one! My school had a girl just like her "Stephanie"...Amanda is sooo lucky I didn't name her Stephanie But then it might stray a little away from fiction
  23. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    The student's at Shepherd's Crook are not going to be what Gibby expects...I can't say much more Thanks for reading!
  24. K.C.

    Chapter 3

    After the incident in the restaurant, Gibby didn’t leave his bedroom for two days. Loud alternative rock music shook the walls and rattled the window panes of the Robinsons’ rented home. Worried that the noise would disturb their new neighbors, Jonathan ventured out onto the front lawn to make sure that the nearby homes couldn’t hear the music beyond the muffled thump of the bass. The last thing he wanted was for one of the residents of Shepherd’s Crook to call the cops on them. If it weren’
  25. I guess days like today are going to be the ones that hit me the most. I smile through the pain, make those around me feel comfortable but keep it burried deep inside. Days like today when everyone else is busy off doing what they need to do...the house is so quiet...so alone. Random thought pops in my head "I'll go get Chinese food for lunch" (I haven't been eating lately...not sleeping very well too but thankfully, 'knock-on-wood' my nightmares have dissipated of late) ...ooops rambling! Next thought, "Mom loves Chinese, I'll call her to see if she wants me to bring her some..." it hits me! She's gone Now alone and crying Have to clear my head...stuck between do I drive to the grave site which is rather far or try to get lost in the backyard? Lots of land and trees might be a better idea then heavy traffic and driving while sleep deprived, hungry, swollen eyes and a headache...Lordy I'm a mess! Thank god there isn't anyone to see me! Gotta go...sorry for rambling
×
×
  • Create New...