Nahrung

Great chapter, as usual. I can't remember, was there an encounter between Lucas and Boone in Larkspur in one of the previous stories or did you write something about it in this story? I know Lucas said it was bittersweet when we went to Larkspur to find Boone and found out he was with Coy. Alas, another Sheriff to find a lover for...

But he did! 'If you put your fingers on the underside of his wrist, you can feel his pulse. It might take you a bit to find one, but be patient and calm and you’ll feel it… and that should help you relax, which is what you really need to do.” '

I thought I missed something and reread Ch. 12. Thanks for clarifying... story now makes more sense. So sorry to hear of your losses. honestly, I don't know how you can even write chapters like this in a story while grieving big losses in your person life. Then again, maybe it was a welcome break for you. Take care, my friend... Neal

Hey, Carlos... Do you mean to be sending out story outlines? This is the third one we've received, but no chapters...

I have played in 'best-ball' tournaments... it's great fun! Good chapter...

Nice chapter... I can't wait to read the boat's chef's interactions with and reactions to these kids! I'm sure that the kids understand the loving hostility between the Abello family members...

WOW! Akuzio... Jacob killed Q... I never saw that coming... Sad... very sad for both of them.

Damn nice story! I read all four chapters in one day and very glad I did! So, I guess we're headed back to Larkspur... COOL!

OK... I get it... it hasn't posted yet... Sorry...

Are you posting the sequel on GA? I can't find it...

Yeah... sorry... I don't specifically remember why apparently lost interest. it very well may not have been because of 'incredibly slow posting'. Sorry if I got this wrong.

I think I must have stopped reading this story at some point because I really don't remember anything from the last several chapters. I totally loved the story and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I started reading it again because you started posting it again on Nifty in preparation for the upcoming sequel or Part 2. From the comments I'm reading from way back, I'm guessing that I may have lost interest because of incredibly SLOW posting. So... Is it worth my time reading the sequel or are you planning to continue incredibly SLOW posting? Thanks!

Excellent story with an excellent Epilogue and I've learned to expect nothing less from Carlos Hazday!

Wonderful story! I read it all in one sitting... I found it when checking your author page after making a comment about the lack of progress on Sacrum. Then I found out that Sacrum is on 'Temporary Hold'. There are a couple of your other stories I'm going to check out. Thanks for writing!

OK... I've read the last chapter three times just to remember what's going on. PLEASE?